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Hi Test, I just read through your quest, and I love it :) I especially like your attention to the small details in your quest like still bothering to mention and draw cameras that don't even work and vividly detailing all the rooms we've been in. I hope you aren't tiring yourself out too much and getting too frustrated with the way your fans sometimes get carried away and bicker and post overly long arguments; I guess that just shows how much you've captured our attention and emotions. Thethys, Penji, is badass, but I also find her very cute- like some ferret, fox mongrel of sorts.
I do have some small concerns though, mainly with the way the quest seems to be getting too 'stern'; ah I wish I knew a better word, because what i mean is not that it's too serious, but more like - well, it's been a while since Penji has smiled or done anything light such as something tiny like a joke, something funny, or just something that makes me smirk. I understand that they're in a lot of trouble, and their lives are at risk, so they should be serious about it; however, when the characters seem like they're not enjoying themselves at all for too long, it begins to bleed out into other things, and the quest begins to feel like it's not enjoying itself either. Reading through the chapters after a while begins to feel a little taxing, but I did enjoy it very much and my head is swimming with speculation, apprehension, and awe. It's just that after reading through a large amount of progress, I felt a little 'worn out'. So maybe a few lighter moments in between the shooting might be good.
But, that's probably just me, and I really love what you do, so keep it up! I eager wait for your next update, no pressure of course.
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