Lagotrope 2015/07/26(Sun)18:08 No. 27684 ID: dd338c
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Starting off the thread is a large(ish) comic for a large (no ish on that, it is legit huge) patron donation.

Lagotrope 2015/07/26(Sun)18:10 No. 27686 ID: dd338c
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Given the pornoverse is not a seriously considered place, I will completely ignore that this goes contrary to other pornoverse pictures.

Lagotrope 2015/07/26(Sun)18:13 No. 27689 ID: dd338c
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That's it for now; but more pages will be coming in over the course of the week.

Obviously this is a comic, but if for reasons people feel inclined to have input/suggestions, then those will be loosely considered for the rest of the comic.

>>27686
>I will completely ignore that this goes contrary to other pornoverse pictures.

Clearly, there are multiple pornoverses. The main timeline and Polokoa's timeline and Rokolo's all have pornoverse alternates. Unless Rokolo's counts as a pornoverse itself, but there's probably a version of it that's even moreso. Even this comic's dimension clearly isn't totally within the event horizon of Absolute Porn.

As for suggestions, all I can think of is telling Rakae and Rikek to come save Polo, and when they find out it's an agreement, offer to take part of Polo's duties to lighten her workload. But, it would take a bit longer before they managed to catch up.

Lagotrope 2015/07/27(Mon)21:00 No. 27699 ID: dd338c
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Way back when, when Rikek/Rakae/Polo were all a party and Polo wasn't throwing a major grumpathon.

Meanwhile Three Stripes is learning new things because he never knew that a tongue could get a girl neumono pregnant.

Lagotrope 2015/07/27(Mon)21:03 No. 27701 ID: dd338c
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Fen has never thought a boner could be so perilous, until now.

Lagotrope 2015/07/27(Mon)21:06 No. 27702 ID: dd338c
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Vivilli and Korli do a makeout scene.

Aside from the equipment in the shot, between the physical contact revealing Korli's empathy, and Korli's refusal to take her green-screen ruining goggles off, Vivilli is thinking that she's making everyone redo this shot as much as possible.

Lagotrope 2015/07/28(Tue)17:10 No. 27711 ID: dd338c
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Korli takes on the 50' amtsvane from before.

In my head she is thinking it would be nice if she could get her tongue unjammed.

Lagotrope 2015/07/29(Wed)20:41 No. 27716 ID: dd338c
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And now for something completely slightly different. Also gay.

>>27711
what's a little being split in half between friends?

Lagotrope 2015/08/02(Sun)19:04 No. 27740 ID: dd338c
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Of the Pornverse version of the christmasverse, and there's a story behind this one. To phrase it:

"Secret agent Polo from Christmas quest is on the trail of a nasty crime boss. She finds out one of his lieutenants has a thing for smaller neumono girls so she goes undercover as a street walking prostitute so she can ambush him after he picks her up and force his bosses location out of him. But unfortunately for her the goon turns out to be rather larger and tougher than she anticipated so she decides try and wear him out first so she can steal the info she needs."

Lagotrope 2015/08/02(Sun)19:07 No. 27741 ID: dd338c
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And for this one; Qiurill and Pit meet.

Probably still in the pornverse, as even if Qiurill and Pit do meet up, Pit would most likely make it his solemn mission in advance to not have sex with Qiurill just to prove a point.

>>27724
>>27725
If Polo is such a convincing actor, I wonder why she didn't play herself in her movie.

>>27746

Convincing maybe, enthusiastic maybe not.

>>27755

Cue Rikek actually being an overpowering love master.

link to this patreon?

>>27765
Now there's the sort of question that I think 'wow how did I not think to put that in the OP.'

So I changed the OP to have the URL, now.

Lagotrope 2015/08/07(Fri)22:03 No. 27777 ID: dd338c
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Now is where people might start taking bets on how many panels I get through before one of Polo's accessories is accidentally missing.

>>27778
>we're wander

>>27782
>we're wander
we're fix

Won't Rokoa cause a time paradox if she doesn't redress the prettiest Arkot?

>>27792
The harness isn't visible on the strapon arkot, in both panels.

>>27793
Nope. Pornverse. Different universe / timeline, no paradoxes will be caused by diverging from canon.

Lagotrope 2015/08/09(Sun)10:25 No. 27802 ID: dd338c
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>>27794
Thus the bets are called off.

>>27793
>>27796
Although there are no promises this comic will imply different outcomes than canon (aside from the whole porn thing that is), in this case, no paradoxes will occur.

Lagotrope 2015/08/16(Sun)15:58 No. 27878 ID: dd338c
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Alright, final stretch here.

Lagotrope 2015/08/16(Sun)16:02 No. 27883 ID: dd338c
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And that's a wrap.

>>27883
>that taser as as strong as I thought

>>27884
Annnd fixed, thanks.

>>27886
np, good comic.

Lagotrope 2015/08/30(Sun)08:16 No. 27981 ID: dd338c
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For those wondering: neumono anal doesn't actually work outside of foreplay; so you know that the ones who engage in it are kinky enough to consider anal to be foreplay.

Lagotrope 2015/08/30(Sun)08:17 No. 27982 ID: dd338c
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Still a dream sequence here, in which Penn's mind is exceptionally talented at tormenting Penn's mind.

Lagotrope 2015/08/30(Sun)08:27 No. 27984 ID: dd338c
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Of note is that Doify/Morgana is just noticing he's taking off his shorts; erections have gone unnoticed.

>>27981
>anal as foreplay
I hope they think soapy dick-rubs are foreplay too, then, if they intend it to be fore anything else.

>>27984
It says a lot about Morgana that she reacts that way to Story's nudity when drakes walk around totally naked all the time.

Anyway, good pics.

>>27981
If a good percentage of men can squeeze out the balls themselves, wouldn't anal work as well as masturbation?

>>27986
To be fair, drakes generally don't have their genitalia flopping about externally.

>>27982
I know this is Penn's nightmare and she doesn't know, but a Fufa partaking in sex wouldn't really cum, right? Just like they don't really bleed, because it's all a part of them?

Is a Fufa capable of a form of orgasm?

>>27992
Theoretically, a fufa could generate an organ to create biomatter that isn't made of fufa cells.

The Xmas fufa couldn't do this; but whether or not the canonical fufas knows or will know how to do such a thing is undetermined.

It's safe to say though that if canon fufas could generate biomatter, it wouldn't use it on extreme orgasm technique.

>>27995

Or say you could set a fufa in front of a tv running porn all day and give it a barrel of "biomatter" to use when needed.

The question is could it enjoy that sort of thing?

>>27995
I expect they would use it to create a working brain then interface with it, becoming a REAL BOY!

>>27996
>The question is could it enjoy that sort of thing?

In the same sense that they can know what happiness, sadness, curiosity and so forth are, but they can't really experience it like sapient beings can. Sort of like if an emotion could be put down on paper, and someone else then read it.

Xmas Relaxing 1/17 Lagotrope 2015/09/07(Mon)22:05 No. 28042 ID: dd338c
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Another pornverse comic. While the last one branched off from a point in the canon quest, this one branches off from the non canon Xmas thread, making this double non-canon.

Specifically:
>>/quest/624778

Xmas Relaxing 14/17 Lagotrope 2015/09/07(Mon)22:10 No. 28056 ID: dd338c
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I used the title "Relaxing" loosely.

Xmas Relaxing 17/17 Lagotrope 2015/09/07(Mon)22:13 No. 28059 ID: dd338c
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And there's that. If you notice a drawing error (weird/missing shading gap, someone's missing an ear, etc) then feel welcome to post it and I will probably fix it.

>>28048
Something seems odd about the speech bubbles in the sixth panel. Are those first two supposed to be Rokoa, rather than switching between the two?

Also the text bubbles are often a bit weird, like part of a letter is cut off here and there or a letter wasn't completely removed from a previous edit.

Well, if you want corrections, Polo's missing her nipples in a few places. First and third panels here >>28043 , the fifth panel here >>28045 , and last panels here >>28050
and here >>28053 . I'd have assumed it was intentional, only you did draw them in other panels that were otherwise detailed to a similar level. As for shading gaps, there are a few behind Polo's arms and tail in a couple of the panels here >>28043 .

Errors aside, fun comic! The encounter with the voklit makes me wonder, what exactly is it in the gel balls male neumono produce that makes the girls have an orgasm? If it was a case that the girls evolved to react to something in what the guys made, rather than the guys evolving something to make the girls go off, then it might be some pretty basic chemical element of the genetic delivery. And that's something that would have been present pretty far back in the evolutionary line, so maybe the males of other neumono homeworld species would also have it?

Okay then, pages reuploaded, various mistakes fixed.

>Also the text bubbles are often a bit weird, like part of a letter is cut off here and there or a letter wasn't completely removed from a previous edit.
I completely forgot that clip/manga studio fucks up text sometimes.

>What exactly is it in the gel balls male neumono produce that makes the girls have an orgasm?
A coating around the ball itself.

>If it was a case that the girls evolved to react to something in what the guys made, rather than the guys evolving something to make the girls go off, then it might be some pretty basic chemical element of the genetic delivery.
Whether it was guys developing for the girls or girls developing for the guys is unconfirmed, but it's complex enough that there was a fair bit of genetic convolution involved, but simply enough that, to a degree, it can be artificially made.

>And that's something that would have been present pretty far back in the evolutionary line, so maybe the males of other neumono homeworld species would also have it?
It does go pretty far back, and there may be some species with at least similar things, yep.

Maybe it's just the site not loading the edit for me, but panel 6 here >>28048 still looks like it has the speech bubbles pointing to the wrong people, that the first two should be Rokoa's and joined, and the third left to Polo and not joined to any of the others. There are also a few speech bubbles in a few pages without tails, but mostly in panels with one focus character, so it's easy enough to figure who they belong to.

Also, uh, I noticed a few things I missed before! Sorry. It's not a drawing error, but in >>28050 Rokoa refers to Viln as "purple". He is in Polo Quest, but that was from being body painted with slugs? In another pornverse pic he was brown. But Christmas Quest wasn't in color, so maybe the brothel paints up their workers for effect.

What is an art error, though, is in >>28056 . Viln is missing a line on his head to mark where his mane starts, which looks odd. The panel before that looks a little like Korli's other ear could be visible, and a bit of her head behind her goggles, but it's more iffy. Also, third panel in >>28058 , is that supposed to be Korli's own hand behind her head? If it is, her thumb's in the wrong place and her shoulder's not right, so I think it's supposed to be Rokoa's. In which case, her arm is missing. The first panel in that page also has Korli's goggles absent.

On page 14, the line "Look, your agent buddy already looks like she needs more than just Voklit, huh?" has its speech ballon pointing to Polo despite that it cannot possibly be said by her.

>>28067
>>28068
And another round of fixes is up.

Lagotrope 2015/10/03(Sat)20:47 No. 28233 ID: dd338c
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Here's a diagram for the average (or median in some cases) neumono of each particular biome. They've been shown to vary significantly even within their own biome type even if they're considered purebred (somewhat of a misnomer; but at a certain point of ancestry and predominant hive type, a neumono can be considered purebred for samping purposes). Still, they still have some disparities of averages from one biome to another.

Below are more notes about the more major visual differences between each biome. Each gridline is 1', and all height measurements are while the neumono keep their knees and ankles at 90 degree angles.

Snow: Median of 5'
The largest and fluffiest. In relation to their body size, they are the stockiest, and have the largest hands, feet and ears. Their ears are almost always rounded.

Redgrass: Median of 4' 8"
More of their ears have flat bottoms, but they still have a rounded bias. Although being slightly shorter and moderately less stocky than snow neumono, they aren't as smaller as they might look due to shorter fur. They also have significantly larger claws.

Jungle/Forest: Median of 4' 1"
Still a slight bias towards rounded ears, but flatbottoms aren't uncommon.
Although any neumono purebred or otherwise can be bichromatic, jungle neumono have the highest occurrence of this.

Archipelago/Aquatic/Cerulean: Median of 3' 11"
Their fur is shortest in relation to their body, as well as being the shortest and thinnest. Their hands and feet are about as proportionately wide as a snow neumono, but remain flatter and therefore smaller in relation overall. They have a moderate bias towards flat ears, but round ears are not uncommon.

Lagotrope 2015/10/07(Wed)21:13 No. 28277 ID: dd338c
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Gotta upload a batch.

A continuation of
>>27984
In which Doify goes invisible to take a closer look at Story Seeker while he makes a sudden movement looking for her.

Lagotrope 2015/10/07(Wed)21:19 No. 28278 ID: dd338c
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Sandfin/SS also got a request.

Lagotrope 2015/10/07(Wed)21:19 No. 28279 ID: dd338c
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Two requests, actually.

Lagotrope 2015/10/07(Wed)21:28 No. 28280 ID: dd338c
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Also, Kexluk x Enlu

Lagotrope 2015/10/07(Wed)21:37 No. 28281 ID: dd338c
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And last for now, Ramella serves her time and is let out of prison. Polo is convinced to pick her up, just to find out the whole thing was all a trap to get her to go on a proper date.

>>28281
all the Ramella and Polo stuff is great, thank whoever requests that stuff for me

>>28281
That certainly is a complicated expression Polo is wearing there.

>>28280

Does Enlu have feathers, or are those something else? I know feathers can be green, and it makes sense if the rest of her is, but... I dunno, guess it's not what I expected, when I was imagining them as feathers.

Further coloration questions: is it deliberate that she has a "sock" pattern on her left foot but not her right, or was the right leg just forgotten about, a bit, at that point? It kinda looks like it might have been, comparing it to the rest of her, if that's not too rude to say.

>>28337
They are feathers; although I didn't draw them based on any actual real life feathers or anything, so liberties were taken.

Her lack of pattern symmetry on her feet was completely unintentional, though, so I've gone and fixed that, thanks.

Lagotrope 2015/11/11(Wed)17:26 No. 28546 ID: dd338c
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In an alternate universe where Polo's/Rakae's hive really was nuked. Instead of grieving over it forever, they inherit their hives' funds and go about rebuilding it by having a bunch of kids.

>>28546

Oh god I love that Rakae is a housewife and Polo went off and got a office job to support the kids.

A nice little 50's nuclear family. Except for the part with them hunting down guys off screen so they can have tons of kids.

Polo comes home after a hard day at the office. Rakae asks how her day went "Well the project is late so lots of overtime. But I did fuck 3 guys on the way home so more kids will be on the way soon." "That is wonderful Polo. I managed to seduce the mailman the milkman and the plumber." Then they high five and take the kids out for ice cream.

Who would be the new queen I wonder?

And what would be the title of the tv show they made about it?

>>28546

Looks like Polo isn't too used to ties. Also, that Pilon made a donation. Are there any other babydaddies we know?

And a stripey neumono! That's new. Is it a full thing, or something that some neumono have only when they're kids?

>>28548

Wait a minute there. A stripy purple kid?

What colors add together to make purple? Red and blue.

And who do we know that has stripes like that?

So we can only conclude that Polo had a affair with Three Stripes.

>nuclear family
>nuclear

>>28549
I'm pretty sure it's slug camo.

Wait, purple IS odd. Did she find a mythical cave neumono somewhere?

>>28553

It's a rare colour, but there have been some ordinary neumono with purple fur. I think there was one passed out in the background in Asteroid Quest main, once.

>Are there any other babydaddies we know?
Yes, they all have defined and theoretically guessable paternity. It's time for...

Who's that neumono-spawn?

Actually, if there's such advanced technology in the 'verse, with FTL, cybernetic implants, biological implants, and all that, wouldn't it be theoretically possible to take Rakae's or Polo's genes, switch a Y chromosome for an X chromosome, synthesize some sperm based off of that, and impregnate either one of them with that?

>>28556
Well I can spot Pilon's kid right there, and a Biles kid in the back. I'm thinking Rakek for the brown one behind polo, but idk who the brown one on the left is, or the green one.

Okay, it doesn't look like any futher guesses are forthcoming, so I'll just give the answers.

Pilon's SoB is eminently obvious. And yes, the one behind Polo is Rikek's. (Ding Ding!)

>So we can only conclude that Polo had a affair with Three Stripes.
>I'm pretty sure it's slug camo.
Both correct, sort of! (Ding!) It was left deliberately ambiguous if that one was a predamono hybrid or just painting themselves with imitation stripes. Polo ain't saying.

On the subject of Three Stripes, two adults is actually below the minimum membership needed for a hive to maintain cohesion, long term. So he would have to be involved in their lives in to some extent, to keep Polo's and Rakae's empathy from drifting apart before they got their numbers back to something self-stabilizing. (Either empathy tune ups on the heavy end, or just emulating the hive's background 'noise' as reinforcement on the low end). Could allow for the aforementioned affair, or a kid imitating 'uncle' Three Stripes.

>a Biles kid
Bzzt! The green one is actually Tirrik's. Assuming Polo and Rakae started rebuilding after the intermission, they'd not have even met Biles, yet. (And possibly won't- who knows if the inspection mission would even happen in this timeline, or if it does, if Polo would still go, with the kids to worry about). Also, Tirrik did show some interest, while Biles gave Polo a solid "eh" and went back to admiring Moi's behind when we raised the topic in-quest.

>idk who the brown one on the left is
The last kid, the one facefirst in Rakae's tailfuzz, is half science hiver. Probably the hardest to guess, since I didn't specify an exact father, and they didn't come out bright pink.

If you want to guess who has which mom- good luck, we didn't get into that. (And I suspect it wouldn't be a big deal to them, anyways).

tl;dr- Welcome to the Asteroidverse, where even the non-canon stuff has detailed backstory.

>>28554
Yeah, purple's not common, but there was Glazgo in thread 2 >>/questarch/468667 and Luka slash Modern in the Three Stripes Intermission >>/questarch/524055

Kind of want to see a human with a neumono. Barely ever see some good old humanXnonhuman action anymore on this site.

>>28567
For Lagotrope's part, I think he's said he finds humans...unpleasant, iirc, to draw. Tried Enemy Quest?

>>28567
Well, you're certainly free to throw money at Lago if you want to see to see him draw something specific.

>Barely ever see some good old humanXnonhuman action anymore on this site.
Just this week there was some (sort of) in Nanogoo 2. And Out in the Mountains.

Story Lizard 1/19 Lagotrope 2015/12/02(Wed)20:12 No. 28758 ID: dd338c
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Incoming comic porn dump.

I could say this one's a bit darker than the other's have been, but it's also still very much a porn-centric comic story, so it probably shouldn't be taken too seriously to begin with.

Story Lizard 12/19 Lagotrope 2015/12/02(Wed)20:16 No. 28771 ID: dd338c
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Also I feel inclined to clarify this is non canon even though I hope that is a smidge obvious.

Lagotrope 2015/12/02(Wed)20:23 No. 28780 ID: dd338c
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Then, a detailed rendition of that one part of the halloween thread in which Roxie vividly imagines what she might have left Penn to, alone in a locked room with two guys.

Alternatively, a detailed rendition of 5 seconds prior to door-based property damage.

Lagotrope 2015/12/02(Wed)20:25 No. 28781 ID: dd338c
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And also Roxie getting it on with the murderhouse/buff/lasertag hive.

That's it for tonight; there'll be a few stragglers over the next couple of days, but tomorrow it's back to regular questing.

This is a series of unfortunate events for SS, but a blessing for us.
Thank you, Lagotrope!

I feel as though a comic like that should not be shared.

>>28783
Why? It's spoilered and he did say it was darker than the others. If you ignored that, read partway through, got offended, then continued reading, then it's entirely your fault.

Another Lagotrope patreon comic, which means it's once again time for - sorry, Lago - errors!

Page 5, panel 5, missing bubble under Story's speech. Same again in page 6 panel 2 for "ya damn right", and a missing tail on the speech bubble that is there, as well as all three in the panel before. Maybe missing thought bubble trails in page 8's final panel, but that might be deliberate since Story's not in view. More missing speech tails in page 11, panel 4. Another missing thought bubble for story seeker in page 14, panel 3. Speech bubble tails missing again on page 17, panels 4 and 5. Thought bubble trail missing again on page 19, panel 2. That's it for speech/thought bubble errors.

Fortunately, there isn't much in the way of others. Page 11, panel 3, the lock on the cell door isn't shaded; and from about page 17 on, the shaman looses her snaggleteeth from earlier. There's also a minor shading error on her hand on page 18 panel 4. That should be all!

>>28783

The spoiler tag was used, and there is a warning, so it seems entirely reasonable to me. It's also really not that different from the other comics earlier, except that Story is less blasé about it than the neumono were. And, even then, it's still clearly working on porn reality rules, so no real damage is being done.

It's also patreon-funded, so it is actually supposed to be shared, technically.

Okay first off, everything NSFW is spoilered in this thread so it's not like that means much. Secondly, it's a whole 19 pages of it, and this is just part 1. It's a bit grueling for the subject matter, don't you think?

Oh oops I forgot to mention that it was mainly the implications that disturbed me. I mean, the shaman had all that stuff available and the villagers were not particularly hesitant, so it's like this sort of thing has happened before.

>>28790

Part 1 of 17. Each one darker than the last. Will it be the end for poor Story? Find out next month.

Someone should ask the Shaman in the BIT question thread if she just re-purposed the drugs she uses on a day to day basis or if she has a secret sex dungeon of her own. As for the magical dildo that was probably something she made for herself.

I mean the sleeping drug is fairly standard medicine. And the special bath water is probably just a mix of skin care products she sells to lizardfolk ladies. The make you horny drug would sell well to most anyone really. And the whole get you horny but unable to orgasm drug was probably just a failed experiment she made while trying to get the good stuff.

Lets be fair Story has infiltrated there village under false pretenses and is working with a lich to "kill" 3 of there citizens. If he succeeds in his quest then those ghouls are doomed and the Shaman will take the heat for everything.

>>28794
>If he succeeds in his quest then those ghouls are doomed and the Shaman will take the heat for everything.
Now I'm imagining the Shaman being punished by getting put through the same sort of stuff Story went through. It'd be poetic justice, wouldn't it.

I thought strong aphrodisiacs were hard to make in Story-verse? I mean, only Minci knew how to make a love potion.

>>28795

Well the Shaman could be very skilled.

Or more likely its because the story takes place in the pornoverse where such potions are sold over the counter at every corner store.

>>28795
Powerful aphrodisiacs in the pornoverse are like chunks of kryptonite in a superman comic, or Starbucks coffee in New York City.

I think the Shaman is getting a bad rap here. I mean she did not set this stuff up. She got a order from the boss to go make sure the new girl was comfortable and available for sex all day.

I mean if not for her Story would be much worse off than just being a bit sore.

Even her punishments for Story trying to escape are pretty mild. Sure she spent all night getting him hot and bothered but then she made sure to bring in two attractive guys to help out afterwards.

Story should be happy he has someone as professional and skilled as her looking after him.

>Everything NSFW is spoilered in this thread
Unfortunately there's no way to tier how NSFW something is, and I prefer just spoilering all the nsfw stuff instead of trying to rate how nsfw a thing is. Probably just a safe bet that there's gonna be enough variety of stuff that any given person has a decent chance like some and dislike some.

But note that I do use the subject like to denote the comic strips, so if you don't like where one is going, you can keep rolling past it without missing when the comic is done and other images are uploaded.

>>28793
If this were a normal quest, then I would take advantage of such implications. But, while it could receive at least a nod towards it, it's mostly just porn logic working. The answer to 'is sex appropriate atm' is yes always, alchemy experiments gone wrong are going to have sex based consequences, alchemy experiments gone right will also have sex based consequences will also have sex based consequences. If the story goes against that stuff, then it's probably more likely to do so for laughs/be contrary to usual cliches rather than be done because it's the actual logical thing. Ultimately, it shouldn't be thought of in the way a 'normal' story might, because the making of the story certainly wasn't done in the same way.

Also I'll probably say it in BTE too, but if I do an ITQ thing with pornverse characters it'll probably be in here, since while obviously I'm not keeping this stuff hidden away, I do want a certain barrier of separation between blatant pornverse stuff and normal (or spinoff) quest stuff.

Lastly, the revisions posted thus far should be complete.

>>28764
>panel 2 and 3
Nice.

>>28799
>I do want a certain barrier of separation between blatant pornverse stuff and normal (or spinoff) quest stuff.

What will you do whenever you might fell like making a pornverse quest that may or may not have porn in it, but you feel like at least making a quest in a pornverse for experimentation or boredom's sake? Or I guess if someone actually commisions a pornverse quest from you, if it's even possible to commission a quest from you.

>if it's even possible to commission a quest from you
The highest tier(s) of his patreon could allow that (even if the platinum donor has been opting for comics).

>>28781
Wherein Roxie opts to go the diplomatic route to win over the murderhive instead of just pap pap pap-ing them.

...well there's still a pap pap pap onomatopoeia, actually.

Lagotrope 2015/12/06(Sun)16:39 No. 28821 ID: dd338c
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And here's various tribal ceremonial gear, some more practical than others, one per each biome and also cave as represented by mostly non-tribals.

Jungle neumono typically died the fastest from any biome, so one of the more common outfit themes was for neumono to gather various souvenirs from near deaths, or from neumono who died that helped them live on. The more the neumono had close calls that yielded an item that could be worn (such as teeth or leather from a certain creature, and the longer they lived, the more layered (and convoluted) their outfits would become. Since their outfits tended to be more of a collection of stories and anecdotes than actual clothing, jungle neumono were sometimes thought to have the worst sense of fashion.

Snow neumono ceremonial gear is often a display of strength and prosperity, which translates to using rare materials that stand out. It's meant to say that not just are they strong enough to not even bother hiding from other neumono and animals, but that they do well enough to find luxurious raw materials. Or sometimes just well crafted clothing and accessories that were taken from a hive before that. Hence, non hunting clothing is often gaudy.

Cerulean neumono were often isolated, and didn't feel much of a need to impress themselves or other hives. Most specialty clothing, then, was made for highly specific celebrations and events. The common theme was to represent their own island or set of islands, since cerulean neumono were more dependent on a specific tract of land moreso than the other biomes, which usually had more room to move within the biome itself. As a result, many neumono on islands wore outfits representing the island as a whole, usually in the form of wearing a little bit of everything the island had in wildlife and foliage.

Redgrass had a lot of overlap with snow neumono in terms of themes to look tough by, but while snow neumono were often more about saying 'don't bother attacking me unless you want to die', Redgrass was more aggressive with a mentality of 'stay out of my way or get attacked.' Leather is common in redgrass areas, but the more gaudy outfits would also include articles from slain monsters. The largest teeth would be kept, and some skulls could be worn, ultimately leading to the neumono wearing their hunting trophies. Whatever was seen to be more threatening was added, such as plain blood based warpaint or emphasized weaponry, leading to the redgrass tribal being the poster child for neumono heavy metal cover art.

Cave neumono (represented by Korli) would not have had had many tendencies/common themes like many of the other biomes might, although many of the raw materials available did overlap. Since there weren't true cave neumono (or at least no known presently live ones), cave neumono were other neumono of any other biome that were displaced, and found their current home so uninhabitable and dangerous that they had to live in caves, so their themes were typically branched off from their natural biome celebrations and rituals using raw materials from caverns, the most notable was a surplus of silk (while other biomes frequently had some silk equivalent as well, it was only frequently seen within caves.) Hence, many of those clothes turned out to be the most comfortable of any other biome, and by some means or another, were favored to have bioluminescence.

>>28821

I like to imagine that there's another camera or a balcony or something up to the top left, and Polo is looking at someone up there, maybe whichever historian or older hivemate of hers was the one who made the outfit, and she's going "seashell bra? really?"

>>28821
Lucera is so teeny that he makes Polo look big, while Katzati just looks cute in that getup, like a giant arts-and-crafts painted teddy bear.

Wasn't Lucera supposed to be about the same height as Polo, though? Was he just wearing some sort of platform shoes?

>>28841
Lucera was supposed to be marginally shorter than Polo, iirc.

>What will you do whenever you might fell like making a pornverse quest that may or may not have porn in it, but you feel like at least making a quest in a pornverse for experimentation or boredom's sake?
That's a question I've given some thought to varying levels of figuring anything out, but chances are it'll need to have some pretty specific criteria at least to start out as. Story/theme to be lighthearted, presentation to be rather silly/hard to take seriously, etc. I don't have a full answer to it, though.

Silk production is actually rather interesting. On earth, silk is generally extracted from cocoons made by moth larvae. Originally, wild silk was taken from cocoons which had been vacated, but as the insect had torn its way out already, it was difficult to extract long strands. Farmed pupa could be killed before emerging and the silk of the cocoon unraveled carefully, producing longer threads that, once woven into fabric, were much stronger.

It's rather easy to imagine that the neumono would have been able to find really big cocoons, which would be easy to extract good threads from and make clothes with; but then, they'd have to hope that whatever came out of the cocoon wasn't still around.

They could try taming the giant venomous spider-moths, and teach them to make fabric. The trouble would be finding a neumono willing to try domesticating such a creature, who hasn't already gotten themselves killed.

Lagotrope 2015/12/13(Sun)16:05 No. 28880 ID: dd338c
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In which a kobold ends up in the asteroidverse and also a Pomi

Lagotrope 2015/12/13(Sun)16:07 No. 28882 ID: dd338c
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Fen gets his money swindled/robbed/dropped down a grate and has to strip his way back to financial stability through people who are into barbarian dirt layers

Lagotrope 2015/12/13(Sun)16:54 No. 28884 ID: dd338c
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And also Clear and an Enial performing spoilered actions with each other

>>28880
I wonder if he could claim to be some kind of pomi/belenos hybrid.

Roxie Halloween 1/19 Lagotrope 2016/01/03(Sun)17:31 No. 28989 ID: dd338c
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It's a new comic time.

This time, it's what would happen (in the pornoverse) if Roxie got dragged down the murderhole without equipment to deal with it.

Lagotrope 2016/01/03(Sun)17:42 No. 29009 ID: dd338c
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And then other rewards:

Polo x Az hidden love affair, in which Polo still has to pretend to be dead and sneaks into his office.

Lagotrope 2016/01/03(Sun)17:43 No. 29010 ID: dd338c
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Quote from the source to go alongside the actual image description:

"Okay, so the premise: (This is basically long winded alternate porn-history speculative fanfiction. Feel free to post it as the image description).

An alternate ending to the first porn comic. Polo never escapes (or ends up having to submit again), and somewhere along the way, the terms of the deal change, and the slavery becomes permanent instead of just until they escape the spire.

So Polo never gets deployed against the warhive, and gets used by the warhive against the salikai. The warhive doesn't have to fight a second front within their own flagship and gets to focus on storming the spire facility. This results in the salikai getting their butts royally handed to them this time around, instead of causing lots of mayhem and escaping with lots of stuff. Things never come to a head with the Red Queen who never has reason to issue a Polo-kill order or betray anyone. Sitting on a captured terrorist science base full of goodies, with data and leads on the rest of the planet's criminal underground, this leaves the warhive in a much stronger position to negotiate a ceasefire with and concessions from the ultrahive, keeping them from being summarily exiled off planet. They still go mercenary- just on better standing.

When the dust settles, Polo's left as the warhive's sex slave assassin. They still send her out to kill stuff (she's too useful for them *not* to, and there's grudging respect for their battle slave), but that's only half her mission now.

Rakae and Rikek, being less special, just ended up as regular sex slaves. They don't really seem to mind.

Sealock isn't exactly happy about this, but without Polo earning the same warhero fame she did in canon, and with the warhive in a much stronger position, they didn't have the political capital to get the ultrahive to do anything about it. They ended up cutting a deal to provide the warhive with logistics support, so they'd be able to post enough of their own around to keep their enslaved hivemates from going rogue.

Oh, and the science hive pretty much went from being salikai science slash horrible experiment slaves to being science slash sex slaves which they all agree is a massive improvement.

Polo is of course grumpy about all of this, but she'd be grumpy anyways. She's still doing her job, most everyone ended up on the same side, and her sex life is way better than it would be otherwise. Good end, right?"

Lagotrope 2016/01/03(Sun)17:44 No. 29011 ID: dd338c
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And lastly, a belated chrismas Rokoa pinup.

Holy crap that comic was way hotter than it had any right to be.

>>29007
Oh my god that was amazing.
>>29009
Polo no you'll die

>>29010
Things went better than expected.

Possibly my favorite of the comics so far! But with a new comic comes the terrible curse - the curse of corrections. If it's annoying that I do this, please say so, but judging by how it went with the previous comics, I'm going to go on with it.

So, welcome to Roxie Halloween: the Mystery of the Missing Stripes. And a few other things.

Page 3, panel 4, Roxie is missing all her stripes from the chest up, and her stomach stripes. Page 4, Roxie seems missing her tail stripes in all panels, there's a background line or something going through her ass in panel 2, and her loincloth straps aren't shaded. Page 5, panel 3, Roxie's missing her forehead and arm stripes, and forehead marks are missing in the last panel as well. Page 6 panel 8, forehead stripes again. Page 7, panel 1, Roxie's missing her stripes on her face, ears and arms, and missing her forehead stripes in the next panel as well (and a bit of a stripe has appeared on what looks like it's supposed to be Snowman's third finger). Fourth panel, no ear stripes on Roxie again. Page 8, panel 3, forehead stripes, panel 4 no stripes on Roxie at all. Nothing I spotted then for a while, until page 11, panel 6, no stripes on Roxie's tail. Panel 8 has a background line visible in one of Roxie's tail stripes. Panel 9, no tail stripes again. Page 12, panel 3, no stripes on Roxie, and panel 8, again, no stripes. Page 13, final panel, no forehead stripes. Page 14, panel 2, no leg or stomach stripes. Page 15, panel 5, no stripes. From there, a minor thing: page 16 and onwards, Roxie's crotch arrow has gotten a lot smaller than it was earlier. And finally for stripes, final panel of the whole comic, no cleavage arrow. It could be below her chest wrap, but it wasn't in earlier instances.

Then, for non-stripe-based corrections! Page 2, panels 4 and 5, Roxie gets grabbed with her assailant's left hand but next panel is pulled out with a right hand, judging by thumb position. Page 3, first panel, the first thought bubble is missing a bubble trail; second panel, "Snowman"'s left hand seems missing a thumb, and third panel that hand's thumb placement may be odd as well, it's hard to tell. Page 4, panels 3 and 4, his thumb is on the wrong side of his right hand, and somewhere along the way Roxie somehow flips from her ass facing forward to her ass facing back; it seems implied that this happens just before the final panel, since in panel 6 Roxie implies she can't see where they're going, and in that case panel 5's thumb placement is wrong as well (if she had been flipped before panel 5 it would be correct). Page 5, panel 2, I'm not sure what's going on with Snowman's shoulder, I think it's somehow confused with Roxie's butt/back; then, panels 7 and 8 are implied to be images of each of Roxie's hands, but both have the thumb on the same side, so either it's two shots of the same hand or one of them is wrong. Page 6, panel 9, Roxie's arm straps aren't shaded. Page 8, panels 3 and 4, the table isn't shaded the way it is on other pages. Page 9, panel 2, Roxie's ankle straps aren't shaded. Page 10, Yules springs round ears in panel 6 then goes back to square. Page 11, panel 8, Yules' sleeves disappear except for one unshaded cuff. Page 14, panel 1, unshaded patch under Roxie's boob and odd-shaded patch above her head. Page 15, panel 4, unshaded patch next to Roxie's head; final panel, Yules' sleeve isn't shaded. Yules' shirt disappears between there and page 16, could have happened off-panel but seems peculiar. Page 17, panel 3, it seems implied that Yules was supposed to cry out or something, for the snowmono to react to, since the last thing he said didn't seem like a "scream". I might be wrong. I think the line of Yules' jaw/Roxie's boob is missing, too, just above where Roxie's leg strap is, between his ear and her leg. Panel 5, Roxie's wrist strap rope is transparent to the background, with a floor line visible. Page 18, panel 5, there probably should be a bubble trail leading off to Roxie off-panel. Panel 8 maybe the slightly visible loincloths on the guys should be shaded, and there's an unshaded gap between the last two guys' ears. Final panel, looks like a small line missing under Roxie's ear/jaw lines, for her neck. Page 19, panel 4, a line and a bit of shading come into the top right corner from the previous panel.

Across the whole comic, there's a lot of variance as to whether a character's eyes are or aren't fully inked in, and the guy who comes in on page 9 is established as having slit pupils there and later on but goes through a brief fluctuation in panels 1 and 3 of page 10. Otherwise it's mostly characters having blacked-in eyes sometimes and just circles otherwise.

There's also a scattering of inconsistencies as to when the characters are using their various different fonts. I gather the use of different fonts is intended to indicate in-character speech and to clarify which empathic thoughts are from who, but it gets forgotten now and then. I'm not sure when exactly it was supposed to be used, so I can't say when it's correct or not.

I really didn't notice any of this on my first reading, and even after three or four times through, I only saw a couple. Most of these I didn't catch until I actively went looking for them. As I said, this is probably my favorite comic so far, lots of action and everyone pretty happy the whole way through. Good fun.

To complete my abject nerdery: by my estimate, Roxie's been stuffed with at least 12 loads of gel by the end and probably a lot more, though maybe half of those she swallowed rather than stowing them down below. She must have been starving, as she did claim at one point, if she's not got a bit of more weight on her by the end. She also has to have a lot of endurance in the muscles down there, but that's quite believable.

Really, Lago, good job! Again, sorry if you'd rather not get this sort of proofreading thing. I know you're busy enough as is without a list of finicky corrections.

>Possibly my favorite of the comics so far! But with a new comic comes the terrible curse - the curse of corrections. If it's annoying that I do this, please say so
On the contrary, it's more a curse of having to come depend on it as a QC check since I tend to get tunnel vision on stuff pretty fast, so thank you for all of this.

>There's also a scattering of inconsistencies as to when the characters are using their various different fonts. I gather the use of different fonts is intended to indicate in-character speech and to clarify which empathic thoughts are from who, but it gets forgotten now and then. I'm not sure when exactly it was supposed to be used, so I can't say when it's correct or not.
Damn, I forgot to say at the beginning that the special fonts without bubble borders were empathic, while internal thoughts just had the normal thought bubble; although since this was experimented with, this did end up a bit inconsistent I think.

>Roxie somehow flips from her ass facing forward to her ass facing back
Oh no.

That's not an error I can fix reasonable fast, unlike stripes and hand (neumono hand) funkiness. I'll just leave it as one implied fliparound, since thankfully she doesn't appear to be helicoptering around as he carries her. Confusing speech aside, the flip should occur only in the last panel. I think. Getting that in place was oddly difficult even while making it initially.

Otherwise though, everything should be addressed or fixed, thank you again.

Glad to be a help, then! If it's welcome, I'll keep on with it.

After all those corrections, there's just one or two little things left. It looks like you went through and fixed all the eyes, with a decision on what seems fully inked eyes for everyone except slit-pupil guy. If that is the intended case, though, then I feel I should point out that Roxie's eyes are still white circles through pages 1 and 2, as well as in Page 8's panel 3 (Snowman also has them in panel 5 there, maybe intentional for the o-face?), Page 10's panels 2 and 4, and page 14's panel 3. Yules is also white-eyed on page 16, panels 2, 3 and 7. Bonus: Page 16's final panel, there should probably be a stripe on Roxie's shin.

Roxie's white eyes in the first two pages could maybe make sense if neumono have reflecting eyes in the dark, like cats, but I don't recall that being mentioned anywhere else, and it needs some light source to reflect.

Back with page 4's ass-flip, if you want the flip to be implied to happen just before the final panel, then you could add a speech bubble to the panel before that where he says something like "Oh you want to see where we're going?" and then her being flipped around to face forward in the last panel would make some more sense. If you really wanted to work it you could add a little corner panel of Roxie being spun down/around, like just her face going :/ and her ears swinging, or something. However, if that's the moment of the flip (and the continuity from the panel 4 to 5 suggests it), then the ass-smacking in panel 5 would be from his left hand, and that would put his thumb on the wrong side (and raise questions as to where his head is if she's on his shoulder).

I also just noticed that in panel 2 of page 4, his loincloth is unshaded.

... Also a speech bubble tail missing on page 9, panel 6. And page 15 panel 5, Roxie's nips are unshaded. Same thing for one of them in 17 panel 2.

>>29033
>>29035
Alright, should be updated, thanks again.

Your patreon has a typo.

>Unnatural Selection - A massive count of abstractly placed AIs are born into a system that pits them against one another to isolate out the smartest, resourceful, and frankly, luckiest of them.

You need the word most before resourceful.

>>29204
You actually don't, if they're just looking to see who's resourceful. The "Most" of each category ends up winning, anyways.

>>29205
"the resourceful of them" isn't grammatically correct.

>>29290
(in this context at least)

Regardless, the word 'most' won't hurt anything, so I'll throw that in there, thanks.

Lagotrope 2016/02/15(Mon)19:45 No. 29297 ID: dd338c
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A smallish patreon dump inbound.

First up is Az and Korli getting around and going places.

Lagotrope 2016/02/15(Mon)19:47 No. 29298 ID: dd338c
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Answering the question what if Polo was a metroidvania game. And that metroidvania game was also a porn.

Lagotrope 2016/02/15(Mon)19:49 No. 29299 ID: dd338c
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Pilon and Rokoa, circa a long time ago.

Or the future if we want to be meta like that.

Lagotrope 2016/02/15(Mon)20:37 No. 29300 ID: dd338c
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And also the pornverse scenario of when Moss goes to search through Fen's belongings in his house.

>>29300
Customs is so damn pushy these days...

Anonymous 2016/02/16(Tue)17:22 No. 29306 ID: 02422f
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>>29298
>what Polo would be like as a porny metroidvania
I don't think that's quite accurate.

>>29298

And Polo learns the hard way that if you try a speed run without getting the morph ball first you are going to get fucked.

Lagotrope 2016/02/16(Tue)20:07 No. 29308 ID: dd338c
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Frillsby and Gallsby doing the things that Frillsby and Gallsby do.

>>29010
are those thighs there on polo canon?

>>29344
Damn, I hope so.

>>29344
Polo does has considerable thighs.

Story Lizard Part 2 1/14 Lagotrope 2016/02/27(Sat)14:03 No. 29405 ID: dd338c
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Part 2 for Story Lizard, so refer to that before reading this. Or don't. Still very NSFW either way.

Going to be uploading the first four, and then as I finish them until all pages are done.

>>29407
I think the dialogue balloons got mixed up in the bottom panel.

>>29408
>correct tattoo but on the wrong hip
Now that's just unfair. I suspect foul play.

>>29412

In the actual quest we had some red herrings who had seen the tattoos and liked the design so got there own versions.

Story Lizard Part 2 5/14 Lagotrope 2016/02/27(Sat)15:23 No. 29414 ID: dd338c
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I live for goofy porn faces.

>>29410
Should be cleared up, thanks.

Within A Pornoverse Lizard Shaman 2016/02/27(Sat)15:47 No. 29418 ID: dd338c
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>Do you in fact run a horrible sex dungeon on the side and make a habit of selling passerby's into slavery? Or has the whole situation been blown out of proportion?
This whole situation was blown out of proportion, no doubt about that. Still, it's not like even an in-proportion sex slave is some kind of common happenstance. That being said, when we see the opportunity, we go for the opportunity, and slavery isn't some kind of sacred exception. And that's what happened here.

>If she just re-purposed the drugs she uses on a day to day basis or if she has a secret sex dungeon of her own.
It's not like I set out to study alchemy because of those benefits, ya know.

But like was mentioned, there's a lot of day to day potions like healing, scale care, mind altering substances and so on, and it doesn't take much to retool them into things for sex use. And hell, I'm always getting asked by girls and guys for potions of "enlargement", so there was regular sex potions to begin with!

I don't have a special sex dungeon made for just me. There's no need, since I got access to the real dungeon, and the only difference between a regular dungeon and a sex dungeon is what you do inside. And what you call it.

>>29414
>had sex with my,
>>29415
Speech bubble issue, second panel.

>Uh, Boss you think there was a reason why those lizards didn't bang that girl? I mean, they all ran away with boners between their legs.
Inb4 the gnolls decide she's cursed and SS still doesn't get any relief.

Story Lizard Part 2 10/14 Lagotrope 2016/02/27(Sat)17:59 No. 29429 ID: dd338c
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>>29428
Good try.

>>29432
Poor Kexluk. He has no idea.

Needs one last panel with Story screaming Noooo dramatically at the sky.

Story Lizard Part 2 Bonus Panel Lagotrope 2016/02/28(Sun)02:10 No. 29436 ID: dd338c
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>>29435
Fair.

So then in this universe does SS just stay like that forever?

>>29437
We'll probably find out in part 3.

>>29437

There will be a sequel down the road where Story and Kex have to brave the horny monster filled wilds to get back home.

Also possibly a intermission in which Zirkala comes looking for Story and finds out what happened. And the Shaman learns a painful (not really) lesson on making sure to verify the identity of anyone you sell into slavery in case they are the personal friend/toy of the local lich.

>>29437

Well, it's only my speculation, but Kexluk is a guy who fills his promises, so once that happens, SS will probably go back to Zirkala and she, in turn, will probably turn him back into male kobold form. Like even if he does decide he wants to stay she it'll be something like "Oh Story it's you what happened I'll undo that polymorph" before s/he gets the chance to explain or something. Though, it's odds on that he'll want to turn back anyway when all's said and done, once the mental effects aren't on. Knowing how SS's adventures go, though, he probably finds a way to go back to normal but pulls a combination of favours from people who like him to learn how to swap between male kobold and female lizard form whenever he likes.

Or some magic time shenanigans or slime splitting magic weirdness duplicates Story so that both versions of him continue existing and become a horny adventuring bard team.

Hell maybe this story ends with fem-Story being sent back in time to herself when she was himself and trying to tell him to bring Muo, but they both get distracted and get it on and she wears him out to the point of unconsciousness before she time-poofs to merge back into him and he ends up thinking the whole thing was an erotic dream, but subconsciously remembers to bring Muo and it all links back in.

>>29440
Or he could return his body to male kobold and leave his mind the same and then we get a gay arc.
*eyebrow waggle*

Polosuit 1/5 Lagotrope 2016/02/29(Mon)14:58 No. 29443 ID: dd338c
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Porn comics can get pretty ridiculous but it can always be even moreso.

>>29448
Oh my god.

>>29448

I am not sure if the sheer ridiculousness of this page can ever be topped.

But I hope someone does someday.

So irc got to talking, and we did some quick and dirty math to estimate how many balls that is.

Polo height = 104 cm (Given in I1-3)

Given that Polo is doubled over in page 1, panel 3, assume the box length is 1/2 Polo height, or 52 cm.

Assuming the box is a cube

Box Volume = (52 cm)^3 = 140608 cm^3.

Now the holes in the box are about 3/4 of the way up, so only 3/4 of the box gets filled

Relevant Volume = 3/4 * 140608 cm^3 = 105456 cm^3

If we assume the average gel ball diameter is 3 cm (per Lago, irc), then

Average gel ball Volume = 4/3 * pi * (1.5 cm)^3 = 14.13716694 cm^3

Number of balls = 105456 cm^3 / 14.13716694 cm^3 = 7459.486079

Now, rather than try to calculate Polo's volume, we assumed she takes up about half the space in the box and halved that. Then we took another 10% off the top for space wasted on the upper levels of the pile where there's not enough weight to deform the balls into packing more densely. This gives us our ballpark ballpit estimate.

Corrected ballpit estimate = (7459.486079 / 2) * 0.9 = 3356.768736

Assuming your average neumono male can put out 6 balls before going dry,

Minimum guys serviced = 3356.768736 / 6 = 559.461456

>>29452

Page 1 makes it pretty clear the box is not a cube, and the space beneath the holes in the final panel compared to the first panels in page 1 makes it look like they come up more like halfway of the box's height.

>>29453
>Page 1 makes it pretty clear the box is not a cube
It's a ballpark estimate. The error introduced by approximating a slightly irregular shape as regular isn't any greater than the compound error you'd get trying to estimate each individual dimension.

>the space beneath the holes in the final panel compared to the first panels in page 1 makes it look like they come up more like halfway of the box's height.
I used page 2 panel 3 and page 5 panel 6 as the refs for fill volume. Looking at how Polo is positioned in the box in 2-3, for her nose to be flush with the holes when her legs give out in 5-6, it would have to be approximately 3/4 full. The box does look only around half full in 5-4, but I'm assuming more fill by the last panel and/or displacement when Polo collapses into the pile.

Again though, it's a quick and dirty ballpark estimate. The answer is "3300-ish" and you could pretty easily move that around a few hundred or a thousand with different assumptions. (Honestly, how to approximate Polo's volume and uneven ball packing over layers are really much bigger factors in the final value and done more off the cuff than either point you raise).

Lagotrope 2016/02/29(Mon)17:58 No. 29456 ID: dd338c
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Disregarding hygiene rules.

Lagotrope 2016/02/29(Mon)17:59 No. 29457 ID: dd338c
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A lot.

Corrections!

For Story Lizard, all things I only noticed on deliberately searching for them:

Page 1, panel 4, the bed(?) Story is lying on is not shaded. Page 2, Panel 4, eyebrows missing (possibly deliberate?). Page 3, panel 5, "this moron" is lacking his head fin. Page 8, panel 1, Story's speech bubbles not linked and lacking any tail indicating direction, again potentially deliberate. Page 11 panel 1, top left gnoll could use some indication of his other leg behind them.

For Polosuit, again only on searching:

Page 1, panel 1, Polo is missing the shading square on her right shoulder that she has later; also page 1, panels 2 and 3, she has a belt that disappears for the rest of the comic. Page 3 panel 6, guy who just got off is missing his eyebrows. Page 4 panel 3, Polo is missing the line of her biosuit's collar around her neck (making her look naked except for the shading patches).

And then, I don't normally comment on the non-comic pictures but, uh, that second threesome comic, the spot that Jess is licking looks, uh... pretty seriously misplaced. Just erasing the line of the fold and leaving her tongue where it is would look better, I think?

I wouldn't usually comment on the quests, either, but in panel 121 of DaMN (>>/questarch/703927 if I've linked right), Kappi's arm is miscolored with Rokoa's fur color.

As before, I'm hoping I'm not causing any problems with this sort of proofreading commentary.

Lagotrope 2016/02/29(Mon)20:13 No. 29459 ID: dd338c
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Luka bonds after 'gianthive had taught her the games they play and that they were rough but left her in a good mood'.

>>29458
Corrections are still appreciated, I will likely get to them tomorrow.

Except for the hot tub threesome. That is finished now. Because that was a pretty gnarly error.

>>29452
I think you're underguesstimating the box's volume.
Based on page 2, panel 3, the box's length looks like the length from Polo's head to below her butt, plus something like half of Polo's butt. The length from Polo's head to below her butt is about 70cm, based on >>20126, and her butt reaches about 15cm vertically. Thus, we get a length of about 78cm for the box.
The rectangle in the panel has a ratio of exactly 324:258, and so the height becomes approximately 62cm.
I tried using the ratio for the front from panels 1 and 2 on page 3, but applying those to the height we already have gave a severely different shape to what it's supposed to be, so I made up a number of 66cm, or a little below twice the width of both of Polo's legs when standing in a neutral pose.
Thus we have 0.78m*0.66m*0.62m=0.32m³

>>29452
>>29462
Also, in your estimation you're assuming the balls will occupy ALL of the space up to the holes, which is pretty far from reality, even if the balls are fairly soft and malleable.
For equally-sized spheres, the fraction of the volume actually filled by the spheres can be anywhere below 74% (and as low as 5%), and randomly packed spheres will usually fill about 64%.

Given the perspective of the last few panels, it's also possible that the balls are mounded up towards the front of the box, particularly with Polo's legs as a partial barrier to them sliding back.

>>29452
>>29453
>>29455
>>29462
>>29463
>>29464

Guys.

Why don't we just ask Lago how many cumballs there are?

>>29467

That would spoil the fun.

>>29468
...because Lago was involved in the irc discussion that resulted in the initial crude estimate? :V

(And also because getting readers to do the math is pretty much a feature of Lago-quests at this point).

And mostly because I have absolutely no idea, not having felt a sufficient need to do the math to draw it in.

Lagotrope 2016/03/02(Wed)19:36 No. 29471 ID: dd338c
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Alison gains corruption and glitch powers, people get hugged as a result.

>>29471
alison's arms not purple?

>>29471
Alison has become... all-encompassing.

>>29471

This is what happens when a program glitches out and has a memory leak. I just start hugging all your ram non stop.

Lagotrope 2016/04/03(Sun)14:00 No. 29763 ID: dd338c
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If Polo was also after Rokoa's ear.

Swapping her ear with a sock is a grandiose idea.

>>29763
If it matters terribly to you, anesthesia is the state of numbness and anesthetic is the chemical responsible for such a state.

>>29797

Well, if we're pointing out small things, most of the corrections from the last round were never done. None of it's really important, though.

>>29797
>>29798
Oh, shoot. It matters enough, but apparently it all slipped my mind.

Okay, correction from
>>29797

And all the corrections from
>>29458

SHOULD be done. My mistake on letting 29458 slip through the cracks. Let me know if something else is missing, or if, you know, I missed whole posts again.

>>29841

The panel of Dating a Murder Neumono that they linked there, where they said Kappi's arm was miscolored, still looks miscolored on the version I'm getting.

>>29844
Whoops I got focused on the comics only. Now it should be fixed.

Polo Interlude Part 2 1/17 Lagotrope 2016/04/10(Sun)18:40 No. 29847 ID: dd338c
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Gonna upload the first half of this comic now.

A sequel to >>27684 in which Rokoa/Polo wander around the salikai base and porn happens to them.

Polo Interlude Part 2 3/17 Lagotrope 2016/04/10(Sun)18:42 No. 29849 ID: dd338c
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I'm not sure why I like making Korli to be a huge villain in everything not-canon.

>>29854
>I will now enjoy the sensation of your feelings as I perform sex on your body
This is the best porn line I've ever read in my life

>>29849
Not pomf? I'm disappointed in you, Lago.
>>29851
Bioarmor tentacles. Classic pornmouse.
>>29853
>I'm leaving you with another place, abandoned
This dialogue doesn't sound right. Also Rokoa acts like she doesn't know what's about to happen?
>>29854
OH MY GOD IT'S PERFECT