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140583 No. 140583 ID: 995874

A discussion thread for Rotten Apple quest.

https://questden.org/kusaba/quest/res/1067335.html
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No. 143491 ID: 477903
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Sun Scorching Savior
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Adriana
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Iron Paddles
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?????
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The duality of existence.
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143541

Sanctity of Life
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No. 143557 ID: 67e615
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143557

Lesser Demons
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No. 143565 ID: 67e615
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Knight
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Maya Din
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The Eternal Rest
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Maxawereus Sempiterne Succrescens
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No. 143692 ID: 44223d

I have sad news, the current state of my computer is so fucked that I won't be able to fix it for the time being. I Will make updates for other quests but for now, I won't be making updates for Rotten Apple.
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Queen of Funerals
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Death Deliverance
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Cat
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143763

Ant King
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Absurdity DeVoid: "Just to clarify one thing whenever you see these suggestions the inworld explanation for their inclusion is that they are the thoughts that Bobbie has in her mind. You as lesser demons have the simular mental connection with her that Abdle has. That is the reason why you can hear when both are having a conversation in their mind. So in a way, you can read her mind."
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No. 143774 ID: 9bf007
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143774

The thing about the sex between Bobbie and Nasty, I felt a little bit conflicted about drawing it. So should I draw it, or leave it up to your imagination? So let's put it to the voting I will draw a couple of the interactions and post them here in the questdis thread but only if three people vote for wanting to see them.
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No. 143775 ID: 6d5273

>>143774
My vote is: IDGAF

But really, if you are uncomfortable with drawing it, you don't have to draw it. If you wanna draw it, draw it.
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No. 143780 ID: 315736

My vote is for you creating the drawings.
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No. 143795 ID: 674d7b

If you want to share then I want to see, but only if
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No. 143796 ID: ca56f7

>>143795
same
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No. 143799 ID: 9bf007
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143799

It is not that I was ever uncomfortable with drawing it. But it was more that I was more concerned with those who didn't want to see that in the first place or the ones who expected to see that with the whole build-up. So I made it, look at it if you wish.
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No. 143816 ID: 21e941

>>143775 Late to the party but pretty much this. Perhaps leave NSFW in questdis? For the lurkers who read but don't suggest stuff? Just spitballing ideas.
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No. 143817 ID: 9bf007

>>143816
That was the idea.
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No. 143818 ID: ca56f7
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143818

character idea: The Book Seller

a purveyor of raunchy porn novels and picture books. prides themself on their extensive collection that has been growing for a long ass time. especially enjoys niche works, and will collect from less well known authors, so it's good rare (bad) stuff. might have written a few of their own novels that they are all too happy to share. their prices vary but are reasonable.
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No. 143819 ID: ca56f7
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143819

they do sell regular books but they wont mention it unless you ask. and they travel around on a skeleton turtle that acts as their library/shop.
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No. 143821 ID: 9bf007
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143821

Those two are such a cool concept, thank you so much for creating them for my quest. They will become part of the story but I don't think they will have a huge role.
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No. 143837 ID: 9bf007
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Cander Caswonder the historian
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Ballerina Knight
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No. 143978 ID: 38a2b1

>>143973
rad concept!
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No. 143979 ID: 373ac4

>>143978
Glad you like her, she will be a minor antagonist, how do you think she looks?
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No. 143983 ID: 38a2b1

>>143979
hmm i like all the details like the crest and the sword gauntlet, tho it feels like something is missing. maybe knee armor? im curious to see how she fights
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No. 143984 ID: 6d5273

Hypothetical scenario: what would a conversation between Bobbie and Anna be like?
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No. 143985 ID: 373ac4
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143985

Bobbie would be more friendly while Ana would act like a jackass.
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No. 143986 ID: 373ac4
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143986

During my whole life, I have been going past this bar which also has the shrimps as mascots. Today I went inside it and can you guess what I saw inside?
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No. 143990 ID: 373ac4
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143990

Well, this is what I found inside, so my question is this do you want a shimp girl in one of my quests?
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No. 143991 ID: dfb7af

Do you even need to ask?
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No. 144010 ID: 6d5273
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144010

Drawn by Tippler
here's Kenku as he enjoys watching Shadow Taker dominate Bobbie during the current hostage situation
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144031

This is what I made to explain the timeline of events in the Rotten Apple world. I will go more into detail later.
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No. 144049 ID: 52b9de

>>144031
0. Plague Filled Heart technically is connected to the Rotten Apple Quotes, even if the original setting wasn't supposed to have anything fantastical in it. The characters from that abandoned quest crossed over into the Rotten Apple story, so what happened in that story happened in the earliest time of the Rotten Apple world's history. The events take place before the age of the king slayings, during the age of kingdoms.

https://questden.org/wiki/Plague_Filled_Heart


1. Familiar Unfamiliarity is the first side quest of the Rotten Apple Quest and has a direct connection to the Bobbie's journey. This was what happened before the lesser demons got connected to Abdle, and this short story is finished.

https://questden.org/kusaba/questarch/res/1098087.html


2. The Quest Delegator and Rotten Apple are happening at the same time. While I am writing this explanation, I am still working on The Quest Delegator story, while the Rotten Apple was my first attempt to write Bobbie's story. Even if my first attempt ended in a dead quest, the events of that story did happen. As for the Quest Delegator it is a spin-off, and the story is still coming out.

The Quest Delegator
https://questden.org/kusaba/quest/res/1109489.html

Rotten Apple https://questden.org/kusaba/quest/res/976001.html


3. Hero vs Villain Dynamic was another short spin-off, which is more lighthearted compared to other stories in this world, and the story is finished.

https://questden.org/kusaba/questarch/res/1106150.html


4. Rotten Apple Monster Queen and the rest of the chapters are what happened after the timeskip of the Rotten Apple part. This is the main story and will take a couple of chapters before it is fully completed. At the time of writing, the story is at the end of the second chapter.

Chapter 1
https://questden.org/kusaba/quest/res/1067335.html

Chapter 2 - part 1
https://questden.org/kusaba/quest/res/1082765.html

Chapter 2 - part 2
https://questden.org/kusaba/quest/res/1095767.html

Chapter 2 - part 3
https://questden.org/kusaba/quest/res/1107808.html
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No. 144052 ID: 6d5273
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144052

Be not afraid
I decided just for fun to doodle a total opposite of Rotten Apple: Pure Pear! a biblically accurate angel that's also a pear for some reason. it shall purify the world of all it perceives as sinners and demons.
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144066

Pure Pear will be part of the story. I know exactly how to implement this character, and thank you for creating it.
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144068

Welp curse my obsessive need to make puns. Pear-y the pure-apus?!?
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144069

>>144068

Well, you can get a more fitting name than that, and so it will be. Get ready for the servant of Appeasement to make its appearance.
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No. 144113 ID: 52b9de
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144113

Just for the fun, can you think what was going through everybody's mind when this was happening?
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No. 144117 ID: 6d5273

Victorio: Gramleza's rumors were true???
Gramleza: My rumors were true???
Gram: Oh no! my Queen!
Grimlith: I'm scared. Hold me!
Working Worm: nice!
Worm Works: What have I gotten myself into...
Ratislav: my spy rats never spied on anyone acting THIS lewd
Mr. Yakbeet: I... don't know what advice I can give on this, sorry, you're on your own
Abdle: fixing PR is gonna be a nightmare...
Gevaldo: WHOA! That's hot!
Sealer Healer: Oh my! hehehe.
Construct: *Just happy to be here.*
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No. 144119 ID: 546545

"oh my god, it's just like in my fanfictions"
"i need to write a fanfic about this"
"do i want to be bitten or the biter?"
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No. 144120 ID: e95c90

Victorio: Is the Queen possessed by another demon?

Gramleza: I always knew that she had that animal urge in her but not like this.

Gram: I hope the gods will help her.

Grimlith: I am praying for her. I hope she gets better.

Working Worm: I hope she gets worse.

Worm Works: I helped less stranger overlords, this will be a challenge for me.

Ratislav: I truly hope she didn't lost her mind.

Mr. Yakbeet: My hug will not help with this problem.

Abdle: I know that she always suppressed her emotions, is this her true feelings?

Gevaldo: She is truly beautiful in the ugly way.

Sealer Healer: Look at her go, so bold so free.

Construct visual confusion.
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144124

Mindy
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No. 144125 ID: e95c90

>>144124
So, is she going to be a new possible allay?
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No. 144127 ID: 52b9de

>>144125

No she is not. She will be the enemy.
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144133

This picture is a personal question only meant to be seen by Ass Bass.
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No. 144134 ID: e95c90

>>144133
I love them, I love putting them in my mouth!
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No. 144155 ID: f47601

For people who been following my quesrs I have some bad news. My computer is currently not working so I am not sure when I will return with a new update, please be patient the story will continue.
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No. 144162 ID: 546545

got your message from will (sorry i'm very offline so i didn't see it till now).

some names for the book seller (your choice on what's funniest):
- deatlit
- skullture

or combine for a hilarious full name.

>>140842
hope your pc gets fixed soon!
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No. 144164 ID: f47601

>>144162

Thanks for your concern, but even if my Pc isn't working that doesn't mean that I can't do water pantings for the beach day. I really like creating quests and I hope that my problem will get resolved soon.
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No. 144214 ID: 7278a3
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144214

Nalthar inspired me to do this, and maybe I will do more. It was fun.
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No. 144215 ID: 7278a3
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144215

This is really addictive
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No. 144217 ID: 7278a3
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144217

Another one done.
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No. 144224 ID: 7278a3
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144224

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No. 144227 ID: 7278a3
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144227

Here is what I been doing for a few days
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No. 144235 ID: 546545

neat stuff!
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No. 144237 ID: 795284
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144237

>>144235
Here is the new update, I ben targeted by others but what can you do.
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No. 144250 ID: 795284
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144250

It has been a few days and here is what I got
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No. 144267 ID: 795284
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144267

I been looking over this quest and noticed that you are somebody who has been repeatedly giving suggestions and I just want to officially welcome you my this story. If you want I am willing to draw a hero who will appear in the later, you can give a description of that person or a drawing and I will do it.
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No. 144268 ID: c6815e
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144268

>>144267
Pretty cool, boss. Thanks. As for a hero...? Well, perhaps something of a pikeman's uniform? I do like the way it looks. Of course, I imagine the face would be "more colorful" as your characters usually are. It's really whatever you think is best suited.
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No. 144272 ID: 49008c
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144272

>>144268

Well here it is and if you want you can give him a name.
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No. 144274 ID: 02b485

>>144272
Now that is a powerful goatee. As for the name - well, thanks to the beard and the helmet that man's head looks kind of like a crescent, wouldn't you say? And a Halberd's axe is pretty much an inverted crescent.

So, if we're to fit the general theme of the names so far - most of which have had "Knight" in them...how about something like...Crescent Knight?
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No. 144275 ID: 39f49a

>>144274

Alright.
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No. 144276 ID: 39f49a
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144276

I planed to redesign the Witch Countess.
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144277

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No. 144287 ID: 49008c
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144287

Just to address the symbol on the head of the Wormworks is the same was is used on every coin. What he has is just the brand that he was forced to have, and when you see that symbol it just referring to money of the land and not referring to him.
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No. 144288 ID: 014180

I just realized it's just a mirrored sideways $
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No. 144292 ID: 49008c

>>144288

Yeah that was the idea.
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No. 144302 ID: 626fa0
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144302

Sally Strawburn
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No. 144306 ID: b5b19b

>>144302
Wicker Woman eh? So when's the cameo of Nick Cage yelling "NOT THE BEES!"
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144314

>>144306

Funny you should say that, because in the Quest Delegator there will be a character who is inspired by the beekeepers from that move.
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No. 144320 ID: b18598
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144320

Faceless Fiddler
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No. 144328 ID: b18598
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144328

Since I like how things turned out last time, we are doing this thing again. I just like seeing how you all interpret my characters, so my question is this. During the feast what were all characters doing?
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No. 144330 ID: a07d78

>>144328
Gram's without food so probably ensuring security for everything.
Gramleza's probably trying to start food fights. Grimlith is stopping that nonsense.
Wormworks is making deals, probably to supply the new food place.
Poko's probably going bard and telling tales.
Victorio feels a little out of place but is mingling regardless.
Spiders are probably avoiding chairs.
Spy rats are possibly cleaning up by eating dropped scraps.
Skeleton lips is quietly hoping nobody notices they have no need to eat food.
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No. 144332 ID: eb3163

Skelton Lips appears to just be looking at her food widout eating it.
Covario and Gram are just looking at one another, the two from what I remembered the two of them had history.
Spider Dad is just there as security if a fight starts.
Sealer Healer is being distracted by Gramleza while the Ratislav is using the opportunity to steal food.
Grimlith is not being amused by all how Gramleza is acting.
Gevaldio is telling a tale of his love adventures and Victorio is being his captive audience.
Wormworks, Working Worm, Wance and Boxzilion are having a conversation about business stuff.
Maya Din appears to be the only one eating her food and energy it.
Pokondirana appears to be disgusted by how Maya Din is eating.
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No. 144333 ID: b18598

Thanks, for both of your participation and if you want I will draw whatever you want, just tell me and it will be done.
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No. 144337 ID: b18598
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144337

Bobbie: "I don't know how I feel about this costume. It is a little bit too tight and uncomfortable at some places but at the same time I really like its colors and how it makes me feel while wearing it."

Abdle: "Well in my case I don't know why my whole body really needed to be colored. As for yourself, if you like it keep wearing it, if you don't stop using it. It is as simple as that. Just don't be weird about it!"

Bobbie: "I like it that I don't like wearing it."

Abdle: "What did I just say about not being wiard!?"
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No. 144340 ID: eb3163

So I can ask for anything to be drawn, well in that case can you make a drawing of Bloody Mary in your art style.
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No. 144344 ID: b18598
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144344

>>144340
Here she is, I had so much fun making her that she will be part of the quest. As for you Grand Marshal you can still ask what you want me to draw.
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No. 144345 ID: 9b9faa

Let's see... Oh that might be hilarious. How about modern day knight got isekai'd and plans to join a hero's guild only to find them unprofessional. While he boggles at the shenanigans he's like, "I'm surrounded by idiots."
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No. 144351 ID: b18598
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144351

>>144345

This is how I envisioned for that character to look. Like somebody trying to fit in the current world by using all the things he manage to bring from his last one. Bicycle helmet turned into improvised knights helmet, construction cloths used for an armor, boxing gloves used a knight's gloves and of course using a katan instead of a sword. This character can either appear in rotten apple quest or the spinoff, I haven't decided where just yet.
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No. 144365 ID: c9f474
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144365

Bobbie: "Can you even move your worm arms in that costume?"

Abdle: "I can't but that doesn't matter I feel powerful wearing this!"
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No. 144368 ID: c9f474
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144368

Wormworks: "Never have I felt so glorious dressed like this."
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No. 144390 ID: b8a1f8

>>144365 Wait is that costume Crow from Nefarious? Excellent taste. Sure my platforming skills are poor but worth it for those reverse boss fights! Have this if you were unaware. https://drmechano.itch.io/dr-mechano
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No. 144392 ID: 0f3125

>>144390

Hello Grand Marshal, yeah Nefarious was one of the inspiration for Rotten Apple, especially the webcomic of that game. I didn't know about that game that you made me see, looks fun. But also I have to apologize for all my older quests going on a hiatus until this month is over, because of the new quest.
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No. 144394 ID: 0f3125

>>144390
Also I have to ask you Grand Marshal, one thing are you participating in my new quest. I am asking because there is one person who is anonymous in there, so I just wanted to see if that is you.
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No. 144396 ID: b4c241

>>144394
I am not Grand Marshal, no.

I am, however, familiar with Nefarious.
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No. 144397 ID: 0f3125

>>144396
Oh I just wanted to see if you were somebody else. Do you use discord?
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No. 144398 ID: b4c241

>>144397
No.
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No. 144399 ID: 0f3125

>>144398
Ok, well I just wanted to say thank you for reading my story. How do feel about it, so far?
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144457

Metal breakdown mascot
Humption Dumbption the 3rd
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