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140583 No. 140583 ID: 995874

A discussion thread for Rotten Apple quest.

https://questden.org/kusaba/quest/res/1067335.html
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No. 144716 ID: 9ed276

Will add Gram and Victorio (for his exceeding loyalty despite it all).
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No. 144722 ID: 4619d0
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No. 144809 ID: 12ff2d

In the latest update you used the panting of a demon with a revolver. What is the story of that character?
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No. 144812 ID: 4619d0
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That was just my quest title card, one which I never started or ever used. The premise would be similar to Rotten Apple, the whole notion about the illusion of power, but in the Western setting instead of medieval fantasy.
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No. 144927 ID: 06a3f3

Nice work!
And thank you for the step by step. Always fun to watch!
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No. 144934 ID: 4619d0
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For the upcoming Valentine's Day celebration, tell me what ships you have with my characters, and I will draw them interacting.
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No. 144935 ID: 173962

Cruelty of death and sanctity of life
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No. 144936 ID: 946018

I have two ships:
1. Vance and Maya Din
2. Abdle and Peary
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No. 144937 ID: 7012ea

Victorio & Bobbie ...probably Nasty too.
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No. 144940 ID: f09d59

>>144937
Yeah probably Bobbie and nasty
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No. 144941 ID: 946018

I have another couple, pale knight and gambler knight.
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No. 144942 ID: 2bbf22

nasty, bobbie, and victorio throuple
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No. 144945 ID: 6ec3a4

I have another couple suggestion, Gramleza and Nalthar
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No. 144946 ID: 975793
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In all honesty, I liked all your previous suggestions, but I draw the line at shipping real people.
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No. 144947 ID: b4c241

>>144934
Bobbie and Priestess of Pain.

Just because I'd like to see what happens.
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No. 144948 ID: 975793

>>144947

Hello Luv, I have already finished with the drawing of the previous suggestions. But I will do yours as an extra one.
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No. 144949 ID: 975793
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144949

Valentine's Day is upon us really soon, and all of you give your suggestions for couples, so let me show how their interaction during a date would work.

1. Cruelty of Death and Sanctity of Life would bicker about all sorts of things. The whole thing of the glass being half full and half empty perspective.

2. Vance and Maya Din would have a strange interaction. Vance would have a boardroom meeting with Maya Din. He would start with what parts they would need to hit if their relationship was to continue, and Maya Din would pretend to understand what he was talking about.

3. Abdle and Peary would have a genuine feeling of love towards one while the other would have a begrudging acceptance.

4. Bobbie would feel embarrassed with their date, she wouldn't know what she was supposed to do. Victorio would also be embarrassed by the huge size of Nasty and a little bit intimidated by her. While Nasty would find all of it funny.

5. Pale knight and Gambler knight would just have a card game. The loser has to strip naked.

Well, these are the dates and now is the time for you all to vote on which relationship you would like to see more of.
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No. 144950 ID: 63709c

4) Nasty has the right idea, they are hilarious. She should make them her pet couple. They can get 'BNV' embroidered on their bathrobes with the 'N' real big
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No. 144951 ID: b4c241

>>144948
No problem. I mainly suggested that as a joke, since they're from totally different stories. But it would be fun to see how they connect.

>>144949
4 is my vote. Bobbie is the best kind of weird and her reactions are entertaining.
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No. 144952 ID: 347191

4. Has serious romcom potential. Lots of funny hijinks. She'd totally embarass them about the romantic tension until they give in just to get Nasty to stop and it suddenly works because they quit it with the awkwardness.
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No. 144953 ID: 946018

Number 3 is the cutest couple to me.
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No. 144954 ID: 78ccbe

three
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No. 144955 ID: 2f4922

>>144950
seconding the bathrobe idea
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The majority of your voices are heard loud and clearly. The relationship among the three of them will develop further as the story goes on. I also noticed the interest in the runner-up resneship between Abdle and Peary, I will have something for them as well. Now I would like to talk a little bit about Nasty. She was originally planned to be an ally, but by choosing to go into her dream, I started to play around with her liking Bobbie. The whole part where she came to Bobbie's bedroom and asked for sex was more of a joke, the whole consequences for going in her dream, and that is how I treated their relationship, like friends with benefits. Now that Victorio is also a factor in their relationship, I will see how their interaction will change. Will this be a more serious and unconventional relationship or a comedic act full of sex jokes? Time will only tell. Well, this was a fun interaction with you all for today's holiday. I hope you all are doing something that you love doing.
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As I previously mentioned, here is the bonus interaction. Lun, do you like Priestess of Pain? Would you like to see more of her? As for her interaction with Bobbie, it would show the queen the small joys of suffering.

A small note from me, holy shit, in this drawing I made Priestess of Pain huge. In my defence, today was an exhausting day for me, so for that I apologize.
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No. 144966 ID: b4c241

>>144957
I liked her quest but I mostly just suggested it because I thought it would be a fun idea.

It would be nice to see some of the Sex Combat Adventure characters again when the story continues, but there's no need to try and force them into situations where they wouldn't fit. I like meeting new characters too.
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No. 144975 ID: 975793

>>144966

Fair enough. Maybe it is for the best not to try to force those character fits into this quest. Anyway, if you want, I can draw whatever character you want to be in the Rotten Apple quest. Just describe them or show a drawing of them.
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In the journey for power, know who your friends and enemies are.
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Somewhere in the deep chambers of the castle, the Book Seller is showing one of their greatest book that they possess. The title is "Are we fighting or are we fucking!" It is a story about passionate, animalistic, and violent lovemaking, based on a real-life story. Gramleza, as somebody who is reading this book to the other goblins for coins, is highly interested in it.
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No. 145602 ID: 087251

Steinhardt negotiations (if a deal was made): https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KJHadAPNAo4
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No. 145603 ID: de08e7

>>145602

Good reference, but this is how I imagine Bobbie would feel after talking with him.
https://www.reddit.com/r/PinkFloydCircleJerk/comments/1b12az5/why_is_dude_shaking_hands_with_other_dude_on_fire/
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No. 145702 ID: 47e901
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In a couple of days, I will most likely draw on the glass to make it look like a stained-glass window, and I will draw all six participants as emblems. So, for all of you, I have to ask: do you like your emblem, or do you want to change it?
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No. 145703 ID: 5ec086

>>145702
Looks good to me boss, kind of reminds me of the stained glass designs of Kingdom Hearts. I approve.
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No. 145704 ID: 360d48

>>145702
hmmm could you make my bg black? besides that it's good
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No. 145705 ID: e96641
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I like it. The only change I'd make for mine is to make the inner flame more liquid
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No. 145723 ID: e2fff1

Done taking break so let's see what's up. GM is too on the nose. Generals get up to 5 stars so perhaps 6 or 7 for obnoxious overdecorating. Far less on the nose. What's that on top?
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No. 145727 ID: 4d139a
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Here is the updated version of the logos for Nalthar and Grand Marshal
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I been on a business trip but now I am back. For the glass drawing, if it is alright with you, I would like to change it. Here is what I got in mind.
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No. 145758 ID: 170e8e

>>145755
Very on the nose.
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No. 145761 ID: 345594

>>145758
I saw changes with the drawing and wanted to add my contribution.
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No. 145796 ID: fe0bf7

Ever since the Funny Face thread ended, I've been thinking a lot how we can defend against or avoid whatever Cruelty of Death has in store for Bobbie considering he seems to be some kind of powerful demigod with a hatred for her. Someone like that could be very difficult to deal with when he decides to ruin our plans again like he did with killing Robert. Through the thread, I've been looking for any weaknesses through his actions, his attitude and personality, what he says, and thinking about how he has a plan he is preparing and what we can do to immediately to put any kind of dent into that plan.

One thing I notice is that he lets his emotions get the better of him. His power-trip made him too cocky and overconfident, and him losing his cool after Ratislav stood up to him made him reveal his hand a bit too early as he spilled some things he should have kept his mouth shut about.

- Cruelty needed to make sure that Ratislav was alive to tell Bobbie that he revived and had Kenku killed Robert so Bobbie doesn't get the wrong idea that Dredge was responsible for coming after Robert.

- He needs Illgotten to see Robert’s head on the wall so that it'll hurt a lot more, perhaps this death is what will lead Illgotten to seek revenge against the killer.

- One of his goals seem to be causing as much cruelty through death of others as possible to where he'd even offer his services to Ratislav, but got really upset when he was refused.

- Cruelty mentioned that he needed to stick to a plan, a plan so important that he needed a lot of willpower and Kenku's help to regain his composure to spare Ratislav, despite mentioning the fact Ratislav dying now would make it more cruel for Bobbie. If he is willing to keep Ratislav alive for a plan, I feel this plan will be much worse for Bobbie than if Ratislav was dead, like the deaths of a lot more lives that will hit Bobbie even harder.

thinking several moves ahead with these in mind, I want to tell Ratislav to lie to Bobbie and let her know it was one of Iron Dredge’s assassins who killed Robert or something instead of Cruelty of Death and Kenku to mess with his plan. The narrative could be that during his meeting with Robert, some kind of hooded assassin claiming to be one of Iron Dredge's followers invaded Robert's home. Ratislav managed to run away and hide during the attack, and when he checked back after thinking it was safe, he found Robert's head on the wall.

Mainly, I have a feeling if Bobbie and Abdle has knowledge of Cruelty of Death being the murderer, it is going to backfire on Bobbie at some point. I'm not sure what his plan might be, but if I had to guess, it could be that if Bobbie at some point tells Illgotten it was Cruelty of Death and not Iron Dredge, Illgotten's focus for revenge will be against Cruelty, and will put all his focus on getting back at him with his people when they should really be focusing on Iron Dredge, or he'll lose his nerve to fight as Cruelty is probably somebody he doesn't want to mess with, and will refuse to help Bobbie against Dredge. Cruelty also probably doesn't want Illgotten's thieves to go after Dredge.

And if we think further in the future, we might have to deal with someone like Max who can tell if someone is lying or not, and for some reason, we may have to tell him that Iron Dredge killed Robert and not Cruelty of Death for some reason. If Bobbie believes it was Dredge who killed Robert, it wouldn't register as a lie to Max.

Whatever the case, Cruelty of Death’s plan hinges on having Ratislav giving Bobbie that knowledge for whatever reason. I suggest to other suggestors to keep Robert’s true murderer cruelty of death a secret from Bobbie and Abdle. If anything does let Bobbie know it was cruelty of death, we can treat it is nothing more than a metaphor for a sudden death, much like the father at the end of funny faces thread treated it as to the kid. Mainly a figure of speech, like, "of course Cruelty of Death was there, the cruelty of death is always there whenever one murders another."
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