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953402 No. 953402 ID: fd2dfa

So after some deliberation, I decided instead of waiting, I'll try to run this alongside the civgame. My train of thought is in the discussion below(not gonna make a new thread for this, it's gonna be one chapter only).

This is a very NSFW quest! Expect nudity, violence, gore, non-con, sexual intercourse of hetero and homoerotic natures, confusing story lore, cryptic bullshit, borked updates, and stupid names

Discussion - https://questden.org/kusaba/questdis/res/129715.html
Wiki - https://questden.org/wiki/The_Family_Business (I swear I'll actually do something to this page. Someday...)
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:Guk:"You are less than a nonperson."

Guk delivers on his promise.
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Oklak is manless.
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Guk helps Tok.
:tokrazar:"Thank you Guk. The whelp deserves this."

:guk:"He deserves worse. But it's done."

Guk scoops up Neitch and they leave this cursed place. Neitch smiles...

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The shelter is abandoned, the Door closed behind them as they clan moves to the Other Place. All that is left to show they had ever been was the rotting carcass of a damned Gormoamhi.

Gamin and Makag find the old structure, unaware, and uncaring of its history. It's burned like everything else in their path.

>Guk's Ending
>Seq and Saq's ending
>Sizzala's ending
>The Ghostskins' endings
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No. 1042160 ID: 4c0dea

Guk’s ending.
No. 1042177 ID: dc9df3

Guk’s Ending
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>The Ghostskin ending
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No. 1042640 ID: e5709d

Actually, can you get the moderators to remove the links from this spampost and apply it to the epilogue?
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>Guk's ending
Guk, having slain Oklak, had taken his females for himself. But the scars of Oklak's betrayal left Guk paranoid. His suspicions of everyone was only fueled by Ze-nah and Sizzala praising his actions.

This fear brought about a need for control. And control came through the only thing he could trust: his females. First he used the Door to strike at the enemies of the old clan. The Dah-een tribes, whose ancestors had hurt Gulseeque, felt his wrath in sudden raids from nowhere, burning their walled towns and villages. Warriors who traced their lineage back to the champions that wronged Gulseeque were fought-
No. 1043062 ID: fd2dfa
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-and broken. Guk took Oklak's technique, one of the few things he dared to remember of the traitor, to break then quickly and add to his collection. But this was not enough. They had to be tested.
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The Ghostskins had destroyed the old clans, needed to face justice. The Door opened the clan to places he never saw before. Places where the sky rained death, and the plants stank of wrongness. The Ghostskins were in abundance. It was with isolated patrols and small warbands that Guk tested his new dah-een-
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-and reaped the rewards of their success. Guk didn't have females. He had an army. His "Guk-a-zal-zak". The "Eyes and Ears of Guk". Females that spied on the others of the clan and, worst of all, formed a wall of steel between him and the clan. No self respecting Gormoamhi would arm females as he did. But Guk has little respect left for Gormoamhi ways...

>Friendship with Oklak:Ended...violently
>Matriarchs taken: 2/4
>Tribes found: 2/3
>Lessons with Tok:Unfinished
>Final rating: C+

>Choose next ending
>skip to epilogue
No. 1043069 ID: 3d08b1

The twins'ending.
No. 1043070 ID: e5709d

What a waste.
All that potential and Guk ended up a paranoid sex junkie. Goraelden deserved better.

Let's see if Sizzala fared better.
No. 1043088 ID: dc9df3

Sizz ending.
No. 1043108 ID: 1ea488


Gotta agree - what a shame.
Proof that one should never cuck another no matter how hot their woman 😔
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Having children awakened a protective, nurtuering side of Sizzala none thought she had. She doted on her sons, being the last reminders of her father after Tok's passing. She always held a close relation with them, spoiling the boys as Gormoamhi tend to do with their sons; but they were more than just sons to her. Her extra affection came at the neglect of her daughters.
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Where Guk used the Door to expand his private army, Sizzala used it to rebuild the clan. She explored the old pathways of abandoned clan holds, finding survivors and exiled women, offering them refuge and a fresh start.
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As the band of refugees grew, it became less of a campsite, and more of a home, as Matriarchs were bing chosen to guide the younger girls on the correct path. And Sizzala seemed to be the perfect candidate as Matron of the clan. A new clan. Sizzalak.

But not all was well...
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As they aged, Sizzala's daughters began to rebel against their mother and the matriarchs. They did what was forbidden just to spite them. Even wandering into the warren of the clan's most reclusive man.

Unbeknownst to them and Sizzala, her own daughters began to obsess over their true father, Guk. They felt drawn to him the same way Sizzala was to her own father, and Guk did nothing to dissuade them. His grudging acceptance of their presence only intensified their desire to please him, and so Obalaza and Mikragi secretly joined the Guk-a-zal-zak.

>Cure for Tokrazar:Unfound
>Clans saved: 1/2
>Final rating: B+
>ENDING: Matron Sizzala

>Choose next ending
>skip to epilogue
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The twins!
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Twins ending
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Ghostskins ending
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Twins ending
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Saqrar had taken to Tok's brewing with gusto. His experimentations with new ingredients have made his tuglavu far more potent than any the clan had ever known, making grievous injuries feel like minor bruises. His brews dull the mind for more fitful rest, and of course more docile nonpeople.
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Seqrar who had always been fascinated with building, had explored what could make a talisman or a ward. His abundant supply of materials and females to harvest power from helped in the creation of linked wards, collections of talismans tgat posess the power of a ward, turning away the strange things thag lived in the Strange Place and making the Gormoamhi warriors into formidable fighters.
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Of all the men, the twins seems least likely to understand anything Tokrazar said. Yet they would become heirs to his legacy. Each brother took one aspect of Tok's magic, and made it their own, adding to it knew knowledge as they explored just how far the Gormoamhi arts could go. They made extensive use of the Door, exploring new lands, gathering ingredients and items to make more potent brews, and stranger trinkets. But unlike the others, the Twins did not just explore the world. They found other worlds…and with it all manner of unfamiliar things. As their knew trade became their passion, the Gormoamhi drive to take and dominate guttered within them. But it didn't stop them from making females of any alien foolish enough to stop them.
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The Twins turned the Strange Place from a decaying refuge, into a proper home for Sizzalak. Perhaps it was this resourcefulness that made demand for them so high. Or maybe it was their uncommon color. Whatever reason, Breed Mistress Bizangi spends most of her days rejecting proposals, and catching heat-addled women trying to sneak into their warren.

Tok's Cure: Unfound
Final grade: B
ENDING: The Magic Men

>Ghostskin endings
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Ghostskin endings
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Gormoamhi don't care about ghostskins.
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No. 1044828 ID: dc9df3

Ghostskin ending
No. 1045287 ID: 1ea488

Ew, ghostskins.
No. 1045392 ID: 90c451

Ghostskins, let's see what the Rezans are up to.
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The Re-zahns, like every other race encountered by the Gormoamhi, quickly accepted their place in the clan. Their clan, their profession, their identity were cast to the Pile. In Sizzalak they had only one role: breeder.

Of the men, Guk has taken the largest share, first taking Oklak's collection, and then claiming the ghostskins of Tok after his passing. To further cement Gormoamhi superiority, he would lay with each ghostskin, breeding them as Oklak had taught, and giving them new names to totally wipe away their old identity and reinforce their place as his property. Ivaka became I'aka. Siloka, Si'ka

When he does not raid, he spends more and more time indulging his Gray Pile. Their will breaks quickly when they see their leaders…
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As Zenava, she hated Rokof for destroying her family, and she hated her family for bonding her to Rokof. For decades she dreamed of hurting them both. Thanks to Guk, she managed to hurt the great family in a tangible way: he took their matriarch and made her a rutting bitch.

Ze'nah's greatest desire is keeping hurting Rokof, and now she does it everyday she spreads for Guk. Of all the Reh-zahns, none have embraced their place in the clan as enthusiastically as her. Her enthusiasm for being plowed and the divulging of Rokof secrets that let the clan launch such damaging raids made her Guk’s most favored female. A title that put her at odds with Ionilee.

Old habits die hard. As the number of clan females grew, her jealousy grew to paranoia, Guk's daoine falling into Ionilee's camp, and the Rezans under Ze'nah's. She built a network of her own watchers, spying on everyone, and sabotaging the reputation of her rivals. Ironically, in a bid to escape the cutthroat political arena of Rezo, Ze’nah became an active player in the Gormoamhi’s.

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Neitch had broken under Oklak, she was moments from cementing her place as a Gormoamhi breeder when Guk intervened. The tiniest sliver of the Gamin political animal that would have been snuffed out, found respite that day.

Four times Guk planted his seed in her. Four times she bore him a single pup. Compared to Ze'nah's six in their first litter, the three from Si'ka and the many pups I'aka bore, she was rather lackluster. Guk's attention faded. And with it, the haze of Gormoamhi domination.

One day, the Gamin matriarch had taken her offspring and disappeared into the swirling magics of the Door. Without Tok, any magical means of locating her were out of the clan’s reach. One thing Ze’nah assured the clan of, was that Neitch was disgraced. She would not be in Rezo.

But what the former matriarch was planning, and why she took the half-Gormoami pups remains a mystery…
No. 1046846 ID: fd2dfa
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"So this is the Great City in all it's decayed glory. How...derelict."
No. 1046847 ID: fd2dfa
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"And it's newest inhabitants. Well done. Well done indeed. I saw how you brought down Rokof and Gamin. A shame you couldn't do the same to Makag before you scurried away."
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"Though I will give you credit for finding ancestral home, my tolerance has its limits."

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"Much better."

"I have to say I'm a bit disappointed-Guk was it- killed Oklak. His cunning would have been useful in the time to come. Still I can make do with what I have. Are they all karved?"

:sizzala: "Gormoamhi marked as they slept master."

"Good. And your slaves?"

:sizzala:"We…did not want to waste your power on nonpeople. We relied on Gormoamhi technique to train them."
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"You...should have risked it. Even if my power ran dry it would have kept Neitch from escaping! Now she is LOOSE GODS-KNOW-WHERE!"

Calm...calm...find peace. Retain control.
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"I AM CALM! I...I am calm. I can account for this. A minor issue."

"I have a new command."

:guk:"What do you command master?"
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"Breed me an army…"



And that is it, Guk Quest is finally over! I still can't believe it took as long as it did. Focus will go back to FT5 and BBB for now, but there is something I want to try in the future. It will be more SFW oriented.
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