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399781 No. 399781 ID: 13dce2

Previous thread: http://tgchan.org/kusaba/questarch/res/88264.html
Quest discussion thread: http://tgchan.org/kusaba/questdis/res/318207.html
Wiki page/Stats (not author-made): http://tgchan.org/wiki/Lunar_Quest

>Please try to restrain arguments and discussion to the discussion thread.
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No. 468299 ID: 690722

Will sounds interesting, would like to hear what Wordblood has to say. But I would really like the element to be less about imposing your will on others, and more about staying true to yourself. Integrity? Perseverance? "Resisting pressure" rather than "putting pressure on others". Choosing your own way, instead of forcing others to do your bidding.
Wait. What about Choice, actually? Freedom of choice?

Also, would really like to hear more about those slaver souls. Peregrin does sound like he might have some reservations. We are not in that much of a hurry yet, and if we start making rash decisions now, Saulanna might soon become no better than dear old Ebby when real trouble comes. This is not the level of challenge that should force us to disregard the (un)lives of others, there will be much worse down the road. So yes, lots of deliberation and as much input from Peregrin and Wordblood (on both matters) as possible. This is not the time to hurry.
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>[[AUTHOR: Again, use the discussion thread if you're responding to another suggestion. Any player posts in this thread should only be directed at Saulanna. I can tolerate a little bit of banter if it accompanies proper contributions, but if I see any one person posting more than twice at most between quest updates, I'll set the mods on them.]]

Saulanna feels a few questions in regards the souls she's being offered by Peregrin, but decides to hold off on the whole subject of eating souls until after she's made her new deva. As such, she wonders if she could bring Wordblood out, to let him and Peregrin discuss things more easily. Or bring Peregrin in.

>"I certainly expect that you'll be able to summon me forth in the future, my lady; but for now, I'm far too weak to make myself manifest in the material world, nor are you strong enough to release me. As for bringing him in, I don't think your inner world can quite sustain him yet. For one, there's no air in here."

That's that, it seems. More directly on topic, Saulanna wonders about overlap. Horning in on occupied Elements sounds like a bad idea! But it would severely limit her if she tried to avoid them all.

>"Oh, of course. But Titans have shared Elements before: between different Titans, it would normally only be a problem if the Purposes are close as well. A warrior Light deva and a perceptive Light deva would still have clear boundaries where one has dominance over the other."

"It is a worry, but I don't think you should fret too much about it. The Neverborn are all dead and sealed away, and the Titans in Hell have severe limits on what they can do outside their prison, so they're not an issue unless you visit them or they escape. Gaia's not around and Autochthon's asleep, so the Dragon's the only one to watch. The gods are more of a problem, but aside the Suns, Luna and the Maidens, they're much weaker. And if push comes to shove, don't they have to obey what a Titan orders them to do?"

>"It's true. As for shared Elements within a deva, now, that's much more dangerous issue. Sharing Purposes usually causes war, but devas who try to share the same Element will always devour each other. They don't even need to fight: they will simply be drawn together, unable to assert themselves as separate beings. Even having Elements that are simply close to each other, though certainly possible, is dangerous: each Lord needs room for their Nobles to grow through association. For example, Gaia's Fire Lord, the Elemental Dragon Hesiesh, has Noble souls who expand his dominion through associated sub-elements such as Passion, Light, Pain and Energy. Or most conceptual Elements, for example, develop a material association, such as Adrián's Mercy with water. Only King or Queen souls will usually get away with pushing up even that close to their fellow devas' territories."

>"So, now: do you have any specific ideas?"


There are a lot of possibilities! Saulanna will try to go through all of them.

- Logic/Rationality

>"That's a little too specific. It would be appropriate for a Noble soul, under something like Order, or Thought."

- Civilization

>"It could cause problems with your Hero Soul: I don't know a lot about how they work, but your Moon Power has very strong resonance with the essences of nature and chaos. At the very least, a Feeding Soul with such an Element would be unable to help you regulate your lunar magic. It would also set you in contention with Luna, Gaia and other powers associated with the wild. It's possible that it might act as a form of complementary balancing opposite, but if it was my decision, I wouldn't risk it. The same problems would apply to Order, in case you were wondering about that one as well."

"I wouldn't have associated it with, uh, Feeding, myself. Though, as far as I understand, the Feeding deva will be a sort of energy regulator as well? Collection and redistribution? That might work. Still, I would think of it as more of a building or social engineering sort of concept."

- Thought

>"Thought seems to me an Element that would be more suited for other Purposes. I... would also feel a little threatened by it, my lady. One of my ancient self's Lords was based in Thought, and I was thinking of forming one of my Nobles from it."

- Culture

>"Some of the same problems as Civilization, and again, it feels a little too close to me. Language is a large part of culture, symbols and systems of expression and the context in which they have meaning. The collective voice of a community. I'd rather if you left it for me to handle, when I'm stronger."

- Desire

>"The Dragon's Shadow has a Lord of that Element, I believe. Not for Feeding, I think, but unfortunately, most Titans keep the Purposes of their souls a secret, so I can only guess. It's possible - Desire to generate energy does make sense. Such a deva would be strong-willed, though, and difficult to control. Unlikely to ever be content with anything."

- Light

>"Let's see... Light would put your weight on the toes of Sol, Luna, the Maidens of Fate... the Red Sun as well, almost forgot... two of Gaia's devas, a little, and Ligier. It's a versatile Element, my lady, suited to interaction with your Hero Soul, and could fit to several Purposes. Not quite sure how one would feed through it, though. Feeding souls are usually of more "receptive" Elements, while Light is more... "penetrative". Feeding on darkness, perhaps, but that would put you in an uncomfortable position with the Dragon's Shadow."

"This might be the influence of my own magic speaking, but I think we have too many big lights in the sky to begin with."

- Raccoons

>"..."

- Time

>"Interesting! Many Titans can influence the passage of time, my lady, but only a few Titans have had lordly Time souls. The Lidless Eye That Sees has it for a Seeing soul, but as you might have guessed, he has a lot of Seeing souls. He, erm, likes to watch things. Then there's Szoreny, I'm not sure what he uses his for. Oramus has one, I think, but he's strange. And Gaia... had one? I've actually been wondering about that. Two out of Gaia's seven seem to be missing from the knowledge of any of the sources we've consumed, and that's very basic information! I understand why Aa might be hidden, and she must be alright, but there's no mention of Haht'hek. Could you ask your vassal, actually?"

Well, Saulanna asks Peregrin, then.

"I've... never heard of any Elemental Dragon by that name. I only though there were five of them?"

>"That's... very worrisome. What happened to the Dragon of Time? I'm sorry; you wanted to know about Time for our purposes. I don't have personal experience, but from what I know, it's risky but powerful. As long as we refrain from interfering with causality, however, it should be safe. A Feeding deva based in Time could manipulate the rate at which we gain power, help speed the work of its fellow devas, and perhaps reclaim expenditures by undoing them. You can't easily spread its influence, and there are one or two other Purposes it could be put to, but overall I think it would be one of my personal recommendations."

- Will

Saulanna actually... doesn't like that, herself. Or... well, not that she doesn't like it - the concept of Will actually seems very appealing! But the thought of making a deva based in that Element feels distinctly uncomfortable. She's not sure why; but she feels a little insulted by the suggestion, somehow. She feels an implication in it that she's deficient in terms of willpower, herself. She'll manage it eventually!

>"Will is the basis of all Titanic power; the foundation of reality itself. I think Oramus has a Will soul, though again, we're all unsure about him. It would be very, very powerful! But I'm not actually sure if we can produce a deva whose Element is Will. The deva is being born through the use of will, so it has a certain recursive absurdity to it, like a carpenter trying to make a tree out of wood. And it would be a difficult deva to control, in any case."

- Souls

>"My lady, souls are just fragments of Titanic Will that have been shaped into various forms for various purposes. Human souls collect excess energy from their surroundings, refine it into aether, and channel that in turn to the gods through prayer, or to the world of dreams when they sleep and when they die. That would just be Will. Or perhaps you mean something like Self, or Identity? Those have both been done before, and they could work. They could try to assert themselves over you, however, and I think they could be used better for protective Purposes."

- Unity

>Much the same problem, I'm afraid."

- Love/Compassion/Bonds/Connections

"Ugh. You might need to excuse me a moment while I throw up, mistress."

>"Hmf! I think Love a very noble concept, my lady. Such a Feeding deva would draw strength from and through all manner of benevolent bonds, and would be a force for the benefit of all. However... this is a dangerous world, born from conflict and marred by strife. A Feeding deva formed from Love would have difficulty helping you in any endeavor that could involve harming anything; and as I can personally attest, your Hero Soul was created as a weapon. A soul formed from the broader concept of Bonds would not have this problem, but it would be difficult for you to maintain dominance, and I think it would serve better for social Purposes."

-Maternal/Nurturing

>"Those are Purposes, not Elements."

- Determination

>I think this would be expressed as Will, my lady, if I understand the idea you're aiming towards."

- Evolution/self-perfection

>"There's a certain element of limitation to those words; perhaps Growth would be more apropos? A positive Element, and one that would help us gain power; perhaps help others gain power, too, if we wish. The only problem I can see is that it would produce a deva who's difficult to contain; like with Desire, they would never be satisfied. It also sits on a rather grey area between Purpose and Element."

"I think Luna and Gaia both have a strong connection to the concept of evolution, and the Unconquered Sun to growth."

>"Indeed, yes."

- Knowledge/Truth

>"An Element I like; a deva formed from it might give us access to information we would otherwise have no access to. However, if it were my decision, I would save it for a Seeing soul."

- Strife

>"If you were willing to feed from Strife, it would certainly serve well enough. It might be a troublemaker even within your inner world, however."

"You'd be setting yourself directly in the territory of the Maiden of Strife. Uranus isn't even a goddess people usually want on their side, so setting yourself against her might be a bad idea."

- Balance

>"I'm not sure how you'd use that for Feeding. Creating and spreading balance, I suppose, but balance isn't necessarily a good thing, in my experience. I expect it would also produce a very passive, inactive deva."

- Restraint

>"That seems like it would be an odd Element for Feeding purposes. It would help prevent loss of power, and probable be good at efficiency, but it wouldn't be very good at producing gains in the first place."

- Rebirth

"That doesn't sound very sustainable."

>"I think that would be more suited for a healing Purpose."

- Heroism

>"Another one that could be hard to control, and unlikely to ever sit still. It could have insights and influence with the various champions of the gods, like yourself and Peregrin, but that's not exactly a quality in line with the Purpose of Feeding."

- Darkness

>"A powerful Element, my lady, but one that the Dragon's Shadow has always been a bit territorial on; I remember him having issues with Gaia over dominion of the Darkness under the Earth. You might also think of saving it if you had ideas on making a deva for Stealth Purposes."

"Darkness would give you influence over a lot of malevolent forces. The biggest problem, though is that you'd be setting yourself in direct opposition to the Unconquered Sun. It'd be officially unholy under the laws of Heaven, and you'd be vulnerable to certain weapons and magical powers used by his servants."

- Death

"Oh, no, that... Don't. Just... The Dragon has a high-level soul associated with death, and... ugh, all right, I can't say why, it's the oath again. But don't make yourself a soul based on death. It wouldn't be good for you."

- Life

>I don't see any particular advantages or disadvantages to Life as an Element. It's in Gaia's territory, but I don't think she'd mind; and you could consider leaving it for a deva dedicated to healing or creating."
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>"You have a lot of options, my lady; but you can only choose one. You've heard our opinions, but the choice is yours. The time has come to make your decision, and take the next step towards your full Titanic potential."

>"I should warn you again: this will be very painful."


Which Element will Saulanna choose to make her new deva?

[[AUTHOR: The vote is open! To avoid strategic voting, we will use Alternative Voting: make a list of all the Elements you like, numbered in your order of preference. You can vote for Elements that haven't been mentioned already, if you like. If there are Elements you don't like, just leave them off your list entirely. If you want to try convince other players which ones are best, or want to find out what other players think, go to the discussion thread linked in the first post of this page.]]
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No. 468305 ID: 886a4d

1. Bonds
2. Time
3. Life
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No. 468306 ID: e3f578

1. Time
And shit I don't know, something like
2. Pleasure or Hedonism
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No. 468308 ID: 520da2

Time
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No. 468309 ID: d6324a

1) Bonds
2) Life
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No. 468310 ID: 0f4205

1.Time
2.Growth
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No. 468311 ID: beeca1

1. Time
2. Life
3. Arrogance
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No. 468314 ID: f2c20c

>>468304
Well, shit. It really seems like Time is our only really good option from what we came up with. Everything else that lends itself well to feeding would either be difficult to control, be better off as a different Purpose, or kinda suck at its job.

1. Time
2. Truth
3. Love
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No. 468318 ID: 400fb2

1. Knowledge
2. Time
3. Love
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No. 468319 ID: 3338b5

>Well, shit. It really seems like Time is our only really good option from what we came up with. Everything else that lends itself well to feeding would either be difficult to control, be better off as a different Purpose, or kinda suck at its job.
Yeah, Worblood reacted negatively to a lot more of those than I expected. Although, the redirecting some elements as better suited to other purposes is interesting (rebirth- healing, darkness- stealth, etc) and may be useful in the future.

>I think it would be one of my personal recommendations
Honestly, it really sounds like time is our best bet. He didn't give any glaring downsides, it was the only one Wordblood was actually interested in, and there appears to be a tempting plot hook connection to Gaia.

1.Time
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No. 468320 ID: 0426cd

1. Time
2. Growth
3. Knowledge
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No. 468322 ID: 690722

1. Love
2. Will
3. Life
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No. 468323 ID: 4a328b

1 Time
2 Growth
3 Love
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No. 468324 ID: b6edd6

1. Time
2. Knowledge
3. Growth
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No. 468325 ID: c59939

1. Time
2. Knowledge/Truth
3. Life
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No. 468326 ID: 87eba9

1. Time
2. Growth
3. ambition
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No. 468327 ID: 60fee2

1.Time
2.Love
3.Growth
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No. 468331 ID: 8113b2

1.Time
2.Light
3.Will
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No. 468335 ID: dbd3eb

1. Ego (a la She Who Lives in her Name, who is immutable)
2. Change (a la Hegra, who has no set form)
3. Hunger (a la Metagaos, who devours light, time and everything, even himself)
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No. 468338 ID: 14d963

I echo the above. Time sounds like the only reasonable choice. Enough people seem to agree that giving a second preference doesn't seem useful.

We've also gained several promising ideas for future souls (a Seeing soul and a Stealth soul both sound like something we'll want eventually), but that is an issue for another time.
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No. 468342 ID: 0c2247

1: Time
2: Love
3: Life
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No. 468346 ID: 9f1c77

1.Growth
2.Time
3.Knowledge
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No. 468349 ID: 63f851

1. Time
2. Growth
42. Racoons

Time's probably the best choice, but growth would by far be the safest. We really haven't put much thought into the disadvantages that might come with picking time, but it might be too late for that. Still, if you're having second thoughts, Saulanna, I would suggest that you pick growth.

I still wish we could pick Racoons though.

P.S. About how it's gonna be painful... I don't suppose that you, Wordblood, or Peregrin might have some kind of anesthesia for the soul? That would really help here, since this is not gonna be easy.
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No. 468350 ID: 925aa6

1. Time
2. Life
3. Hate
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No. 468351 ID: b24894

1. Raccoons
2. Darkness
3. Time
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No. 468353 ID: b6178d

You have a big choice ahead of you Saulanna. Good luck.

1. Confidence
2. Content/Matter/Substance
3. Time
4. Eternity
5. Need/Necessity
6. Freedom
7. Fear
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No. 468358 ID: 9b155d

1)Time
2)Growth
3)Knowledge
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No. 468360 ID: 3c4695

Time
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No. 468368 ID: e3814c

1 Time
2 Bonds
3 Truth
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No. 468372 ID: 84df54

1: Bonds
2: Time
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No. 468375 ID: ecfcdc

Man, what's the point in being a titan if it means the only elements and connotations we can use are ones that already exist?
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No. 468389 ID: 7f2a1b

1. Time
2. Life
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No. 468391 ID: e297bb

1) Will
2) Time
3) Growth
4) Restraint
5) Desire
6) Life
7) Love
8) Bonds

My reasoning on my top 2 can be found here: >>/questdis/63018
I really think folks should read the discussion thread, there's lots of good pondering that goes on there.

Wordblood: I really don't want to step on your tail with these other Lord Devas. I'm sorry the Culture suggestion, and pointing out the need to husband our resources hurt your feelings. You really are a helpful, and special fellow.

Also, Saulanna: Please make sure your forehead light doesn't let shadows back in before making the Feeding Deva, whatever the result is. A bit brighter might be better, yes. It'd be hard for Peregrin to get help that way, but also help prevent you from being accosted.
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No. 468400 ID: 784b66

1. Time
2. Will
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No. 468408 ID: b3952d

1. Time
2. Knowledge
3. Growth
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No. 468421 ID: 0b6cf6

1. Time
2. Change (We are a Moon Hero, why not emulate Luna. It should synergize with our powers.)
3. Fire (Fire is an element that naturally feeds)
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No. 468434 ID: aa76fd

Well, Time seems to be the major contender and it's understandable. Plenty of range and safe if we aren't dicks. I can see Bonds being a social purpose so at least that's a idea for the near future.

1>Bonds
2>Time
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No. 468439 ID: 575dba

1.Time
2.Poison
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No. 468444 ID: 404f8a

1: Time
2: Bonds/Love
3: Maybe some kind of combination of the two?
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No. 468488 ID: d1f1b7

1: Time
2: Love
3: Life
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No. 468506 ID: 38cd76

1. Light
2. Life
3. Truth
4. Time
5. Bonds
6. Beauty
7. Freedom
8. Strength
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No. 468513 ID: e56566

1.Time
2.Space
3.Sass
4.Raccoons
5.Peace
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No. 468515 ID: 1da170

1. Love
2. Life
3. (Oh fine, if we have to) Time
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No. 468516 ID: da9049

>>468513
really? sass?
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No. 468517 ID: ec0dea

Sometimes I wonder if others think you are crazy because of the suggestions we give you (e.g. Raccoons for Element). If only you could tell them about the voices in your head so people won't think you are crazy. :V

1: Time
2: Raccoons

...What? The idea of Raccoonbending is still hilarious.
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No. 468518 ID: 84b8a7

1. Time
2. Knowledge

Bear the pain for the rewards Saulanna. We'll build you back up afterwards with some more titan's will.
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No. 468533 ID: 610bd7

1. Life
2. Growth
3. Time
4. Raccoons
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No. 468574 ID: 6a9fdc

1: Time
2: Raccoons
3: Time Raccoons
4: RACCOON TIME
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No. 468578 ID: c7abbb

Given his opinions on the matter, just
1. Time
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No. 468583 ID: 5d793f

Time
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No. 468591 ID: cee89f

1 - Time
2 - Raccoons
3 - Knowledge
4 - Bonds
5 - Love
6 - Desire
7 - Life
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No. 468653 ID: 16d49c

1. Growth
2. Evolution
3. Bonds
4. Love
5. Time

While Wordblood told us a Growth themed soul would likely be restless, a continuous drive for self improvement isn't necessarily a bad thing.
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No. 468688 ID: 072a73

1) Time
2) Life
3) Racoons because fuck all y'all.
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No. 468695 ID: a744c3

1. Time
2. Raccoons
3. Growth
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No. 468750 ID: 2b353b

1. Love
2. Time
3. Life
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No. 468770 ID: 629257

1. Time
2. Life

Everything else sounds like a bad idea.
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No. 468776 ID: b3143d

1. Time
2. Life
3. Love
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No. 468778 ID: 888f37

1. Growth
2. Love
3. Time
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No. 468786 ID: fb9917

1. Growth
2. Time
3. Silence
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No. 468814 ID: 7758a1

1. Growth
2. Time Racoons
3. Sound
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No. 469102 ID: 245d1a

1 - Raccoons
2 - Time Racoons
3 - Time
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No. 469313 ID: 3dd855

1. Time
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No. 469396 ID: 6a5ddd

1. Time
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No. 469698 ID: 522afb

1. Time
2. Raccoons
3. Growth
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No. 469845 ID: 368bd2

1) Love
2) Bonds
3) Life
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No. 470081 ID: f3fd71

1)Time
2)Bond
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No. 470125 ID: c14efe

1) Time
2) Growth
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No. 470154 ID: 5c8068

1: Life
2: Bonds
3: Time
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No. 470250 ID: c1807b

1.Time
2.Memory
3.Camaraderie

We shall watch and witness with six separate eyes.
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No. 470268 ID: c1807b

Ask Peregrin if he likes the idea of a Time-Soul.
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No. 470346 ID: 38cd76

>>470268
We already know he likes the idea of a Time-Soul.

What you should ask is if he likes the idea of an AWESOME soul.
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No. 470353 ID: f5588d

1. Time
2. Heroism
3. Strife
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No. 470398 ID: dd287a

1. Awesome
2. Time

Seems like time would be an interesting one to go for.
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No. 470581 ID: d30d0a

1. Time

First time posting, and I just wanted to weigh in my opinion, since Time seems to be the favored one by Peregrin (Who's been helpful) and Wordblood (Who's been even MORE so)
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No. 470975 ID: e3a7f8

1. Time
2. Growth
3. Will

Everything else seems better put to use for other types of souls. Time could be used delightfully in many other types of souls, but Time is the overwhelming favorite. Also, it will help us gain power quickly. That's not to be underestimated.

It may also eventually give us a nice "Undo" button. Turn back the clock, as it were, and let us respec should we dislike our former choices. Dangerous, certainly. But we may need to risk it someday.
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No. 471046 ID: 67e8b2

1: Comedy
2: Desire
3: Love
4: Time
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No. 471198 ID: 67e8b2

1: Raccoons
2: Fuck You
3: Raccoons
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No. 471293 ID: 5d98c3

1.)Time Because Akatosh is awesome
2.)Ambition
3.)Knowledge
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No. 471350 ID: dd56d7

1. Raccoons
2. Raccoons
3. Raccoons
4. Also Raccoons
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No. 471353 ID: 4411c7

1. Time
2. Movement
3. Mass
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No. 471459 ID: 266ffb

1. Time
2. Raccoons
3. Compassion
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No. 471739 ID: b978d0

1. Time
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No. 474209 ID: 3246fd
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>Element selected: TIME

As Saulanna comes closer to her decision, the anxiety over what she's about to do creeps up on her. Having been distracted before, she hadn't really considered that she's essentially going to create a new living being. That is sort of a big deal even for normal humans, and she's intending to make something that will eventually be more powerful than even the majority of the celestial gods! She wants to, of course she does, but... it's pretty huge!

Also, the talk about how much it's going to hurt has kind of put her on edge.
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"You should probably sit down, Saulanna. I would have liked to make you more comfortable before you did this kind of thing, but we'll do what we can."
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No. 474212 ID: 3246fd
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"Also on that subject, something between your teeth. And best if it was quick; tensing yourself isn't good for you."

>"Yes, I agree. Right off in one go."

Wait, t-
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No. 474213 ID: 3246fd
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**********************!!!!!!!

>Saulanna's Soul force is reduced to 2
>Saulanna can no longer use her SIGHT BEYOND SIGHT.
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No. 474214 ID: 3246fd
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********************************************
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**************************!!!!!!!!!

>TW 5 -> 3
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Saulanna returns to herself with no sense of how long the... the pain... went on for. It might have been just a split second. It might have been longer. It might have been an eternity. Her sense of time feels... strange. Different. Almost uncomfortable, but almost not. Like a new shoe. The sensation begins to fade almost immediately.

>"Rest, my lady. The remainder is easy."
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>"You need do nothing more, simply observe. This is our first true step together to... to... Hold on a moment. Wait."

>"It's- "

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"I've... changed."

"Therefore..."

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"... I am!"
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...
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"... Hey!"

"You guys aren't going to leave when I've just been born. Come on and talk to me!"


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((Just a couple of bumps...))
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((Aaaaaand... done.))
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