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999168 No. 999168 ID: eedbeb

There are two girls. They have to talk about feminine bullshit that is considered to be uninteresting to or inappropriate for men or they will fucking die.
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No. 1000361 ID: 0fae41

Can you add on to the original task so it requires more power? Like, give everybody in the world free internet access from anywhere.
No. 1000362 ID: b1b4f3

Well why don't you just try poking the rings? See if you can change this place to be more pleasant. Just removing the construct meant to torture the inhabitants would be enough, really, but optimally you'd make this place a bit bigger, or allow it to connect to the real world's internet.
No. 1000365 ID: 031458

What if, since the rings are supposedly permanent, they need a source of permanent power, hence the hell created.

Try touching the rings. See if you can gauge how much power they have in them.

I bet if you had enough power in the red star, you could take everyone back home. Dad would be happy to see his summoner again.

Is there a way to charge your red star? Suffering would probably work, but maybe if you could cause other emotions?
No. 1000366 ID: 4fb393

No. 1000374 ID: eedbeb
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You attempt to access the rings’ power, but in this pathetic devil form you can only bonk yourself uselessly against the unreal material.

If you were your normal self you could reshape the rings to make them stop torturing your friends. To your great frustration, you can’t take the easy solution.

Talking to the gold star is still your best bet. If only there was a way for the star to understand you!
No. 1000375 ID: eedbeb
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You return to the security room and see J and E sleeping on a pair of truly shitty beds. You hear a faint noise coming from the middle monitor. It looks like the fish is talking to someone in one of the rooms.
No. 1000376 ID: b1b4f3

Observe the monitor before you go in there personally.
No. 1000378 ID: 99cd0c

Let's overhear the conversation by stealthily phasing out ear through the wall of the room.
No. 1000385 ID: b8c14a

Be sneaky, go listen to their convo!
No. 1000405 ID: f2320a

support yeah we must know what is at work here
No. 1000486 ID: eedbeb
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You try to hear the conversation through the monitor, but the fish is talking too quietly. You shrug and sneak towards the middle cell and float forward so that your face is just barely poking out of the wall.

The fish is smoking a noxious cigarette and whispering to the opposite wall. You listen.
No. 1000487 ID: eedbeb
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“Remember the first week we met? I thought I could pretend it was a dream and you’d go away, and then I almost forgot you were even there.”

The fish’s tone is sweet and intimate, like he’s talking to a close friend instead of a concrete wall. To your surprise, a pair of bulbous eyes grows out of the wall to stare at the fish.

“All those times we talked, I don’t think I realized you liked me so much. I thought I was being smart when I made our contract for the house, but you were being nice to me, weren’t you?”
No. 1000506 ID: bd1ba8

Is that your dad? Cause it sounds like he’s talking about a summoner and that is probably your dad? Maybe listen some more and then pop out, Ooorrrrr sneak around and pop your head out next to the face in the wall, joining the convo
No. 1000542 ID: f2320a

how can dad be here? OKAY lets look at the wall from behind if there is anything sticking out and if dad is actually there listen more and possibly join in
No. 1000562 ID: 6b2a38

Pop on down onto Carl's lap and say hi to maybe dad.
No. 1000615 ID: eedbeb
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It sounds like C is trying to talk to your dad, or remind the parts of the star that are from your dad about their shared past. You keep listening.

“Remember all the good times we had? If I were alive again in the real world you could see me again. Think about how great that would be.”

The eyes in the wall blink slowly.
No. 1000616 ID: eedbeb
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You decide to join the conversation and hover vaguely over the fish’s head.

“Hello.” you say.

The fish jumps with shock and the eyes in the wall shrink away and disappear.

“Oh, uh, hey there.” C says. “I was having a smoke before bed, thought you were still looking around for a way to escape.”
No. 1000618 ID: 031458

I am. Though I need to talk to the uh. House.
My dad really loved you. It seems some of that transferred into this place. Could you ask him to pop back in?
No. 1000626 ID: 06781c

You know my dad really loved you and was sad when you died, can I talk to him too?
No. 1000637 ID: 9675f4

Let C seduce the house to let them escape.
No. 1000679 ID: eedbeb
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“I am. I did. Speaking of which, my dad really loved you.” you say.

“Right…Yeah, I was just reminiscing about our good times together to this totally blank and normal wall.”

This fish is very silly. “I saw the construct looking at you. It was listening.”
No. 1000680 ID: eedbeb
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You float close until you’re almost touching the fish’s mouth. “Even though mortal intimacy is very gross and uncool, you should try to seduce it. I think there’s enough of my dad in there that it would work and we can ask it to let us go.”

“Great idea. Yup. I’ll just go back to talking to the wall.”

“Mention kissing. My dad likes kissing.”

The fish has the good sense to look vaguely embarrassed.
No. 1000681 ID: 1ab3d0

Give the fish man a forehead smooch, smooches may be uncool but your trying to be a NICE magic now, and smooches are NICE.
No. 1000683 ID: 031458

By the way, our forms and genders are fluid. Dad could be anything you like if we get out of here.

I'll leave you alone for now.

Go look for some baby rats to shove in the big rats mouth.
No. 1000711 ID: 96c896

No kissing but maybe a headpat is fine.

And yeah. Tell him you'll be back later, you uh, don't want to watch him talking about kissing, ugh.
No. 1000795 ID: eedbeb
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You give C an encouraging nudge and leave him to soften up the gold star. Surely nothing bad could come from this decision.
No. 1000796 ID: eedbeb
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The imitation Gruoch corpse is still in the hallway. There seem to be smaller rats spilling out of the body cavity. You consider the still wet blood with a frown.

The real Gruoch was getting a headache because her curse could somehow tell that the star was pulling a retirement on her. Since the imitation can’t be revived with the tube in the kitchen, the anti-Magic was at least making giving the star a hard time.

One of the small rats twitches weakly. It’s still alive! Do you want to feed it some valuable foodstuffs or leave it to rot?
No. 1000803 ID: 7893e3

Eat rat.
No. 1000805 ID: afe7de

You could feed it... or you could EAT it and gain a bit of your magic back
No. 1000809 ID: 96c896

Can't you just feed J or E to them then revive the body donor?
No. 1000812 ID: eedbeb
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>Eat the rat

You stare at the small rat and lick your lips. In your weakened form, eating other creatures seems awfully appealing.

Once the rat has wriggled out of the corpse you position yourself so that it’s wriggling headfirst into your body sack. You know how to eat, despite never having done it before, and soon the rat has wriggled its last.
No. 1000813 ID: eedbeb
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Once you’ve digested the flesh into nothing, a pair of strong arms emerges from your devil body! They have prominent muscles and neat rows of fingers.

Do you:
-Rest until J and E wake up
-Make breakfast with your newfound limbs
-Punch shit
No. 1000814 ID: e442b6

Make breakfast, the dinner of the gods
No. 1000816 ID: 7893e3

Punch the rings! Violence is the only language they understand.
No. 1000821 ID: 031458

No. 1000858 ID: eedbeb
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With your modern arm technology, you fly outside the facility to the orbiting rings and give them a good what for. You actually manage to dent the smooth representation of a surface and you feel very proud of yourself.

Maybe that wasn’t the nicest thing to do to a magical organism that you’re trying to commune with, but it sure felt good.
No. 1000859 ID: eedbeb
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Once you’ve calmed down, you try your hand at making a mortal breakfast to surprise J and E when they wake up. There’s bacon and eggs in the fridge, and you fiddle with the nobs on the oven until everything is crackling merrily.

You load up two plates and take the stairs to the security room, where J and E are struggling to become vertical.
No. 1000869 ID: 031458

You have become MIGHTY. I wonder what else you can eat.
Offer food to the local carbon based life forms.
No. 1000871 ID: afe7de

offer food to them, flex and be an overall goof.
No. 1000872 ID: 9675f4

Serve breakfast. Eat breakfast. Gain more power.
No. 1000879 ID: f2320a

we could eat the rest of the rat corpse
No. 1000945 ID: eedbeb
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You offer the food to E and J, who thank you and start to eat.

“I like your new muscles.” J says. You blush and perform a mighty flex.

“This food is good.” mumbles E. “I like all the flavors. Like salt.” She offers you her plate. “Want to try?”
No. 1000947 ID: eedbeb
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You take a bite of bacon and eggs. The crunchy meat and fluffy eggs please you greatly, but do not make you stronger physically. Instead, you feel an increased kinship with your creation and your summoner.

Your father might disapprove, but you care very much about these silly mortals.
No. 1000948 ID: eedbeb
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“You are not girl talking.”

E and J flinch and look for the source of the voice.

Above you, a section of the ceiling bulges outwards and becomes an insect-like body wrapped around a familiar pair of bulbous eyes.
No. 1000956 ID: 87f492

No. 1000958 ID: 031458

And still you ignore me!
Fine. I've learned a new way!

No. 1000971 ID: afe7de

Punch and devour!!!
No. 1000998 ID: eedbeb
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C’s seduction technique was clearly lacking if the star is still trying to torment E and J. You are offended that it’s still ignoring you and soar to meet it in the air.

You deliver a legendary punch that knocks the centipede’s head to the side.
No. 1000999 ID: eedbeb
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While it’s stunned, you seize one of the construct’s many arms and tear it off. Blood showers down on the very shitty beds and the computer desk.
No. 1001000 ID: eedbeb
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You swallow the arm in one massive gulp and sprout a muscular set of legs. Wow, eating things is great.

Since you get more powerful when you eat parts of the gold star, you should be able to escape without having to reason with it. Which method do you prefer?
No. 1001002 ID: 19da02

Reasoning is for stupid nerd losers
No. 1001003 ID: 96c896

I feel like we should at least try talking to it directly, now that we know how to do that.
No. 1001022 ID: 031458

Wait... What if E and J ate parts of it too?

No. 1001026 ID: afe7de

I rlly like this idea tbh. You'll give it a last negotiation but if that doesent work... meat's back on the menu boys C:
No. 1001028 ID: 1f53e8

Dismembering someone and eating them alive is not a nice thing to do.

Let's ask the creature why is so important to girl-talk.
No. 1001046 ID: eedbeb
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Reasoning is for stupid nerd losers! But you will talk to the centipede, after you beat the snot out of it.

You drag the construct down to the floor and start kicking it with your fresh feet. E bends over and tears another arm free while J joins you with the sick kicks.

“Doesn’t taste like much.” E comments. “Darn, I’m not getting a cool power-up.”

Once you judge the centipede to be subdued, you back off and speak in your gruffest, meanest voice.

“I have some questions that you’d better answer.” you say.

J cuts in. “What’s with the obsession with making me and E talk bullshit?”
No. 1001047 ID: eedbeb
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The construct lies on the floor. It opens its mouth and stutters something unintelligible.

“What was that?” J says harshly, with a kick to the armpit for good measure.



The large eyes stare through your form and you get a strange sense of seeing yourself in the third person. “I want you two to be friends.”
No. 1001049 ID: afe7de

Can't you just let them be friends naturally? Forcing two girls to do girl talk doesent make them friends.
No. 1001053 ID: 6a2a09

If you wanted us to be friends, why did you try to chainsaw us to death?
No. 1001054 ID: 031458

You coulda just said that!
Why so creepy instead?
No. 1001055 ID: 53560f

I’m pretty sure they’re bonding pretty well just surviving and beating the centipede up together.
No. 1001063 ID: 96c896

Oh. It's... just extremely stupid. Well tell it that it wasn't working, and the threat of death isn't really helping either. They got along better when they were rebelling against it. What about the other two? What was it trying to accomplish with them?

Also, why, in general? You didn't intend to do this when you made the rings, so... did it read your innermost desires and act upon it with the power left?
No. 1001137 ID: eedbeb
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“That’s a dumb.” says J. “We bonded more from beating you up than anything. You can’t force friendship, dude.”

“Yeah, and you were trying to chainsaw us do death earlier. Why didn’t you just say that you wanted us to get along instead of threatening us? Why any of this?” E adds.

The construct stares at the ceiling and doesn’t reply.
No. 1001138 ID: eedbeb
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You stand over the bloody concrete and think.

You had made the rings because you wanted Emma and Jo to communicate with each other. And you had wanted them to get along, despite Emma being a killer and Jo being a bit psycho.

You slowly raise your eyes to look at the far right monitor, with the note that reads ‘Me’.

You’ve stumbled upon the part of the star that is you.
No. 1001141 ID: 031458

I see. So the rest construct was mom, this one is you, and the... Wall... Thing... Is dad.
Seems you'll need to eat them all since they won't talk to you. At least this one.

Maybe C has figured a way for you to talk to the dad one. In the meantime DEVOUR
No. 1001147 ID: afe7de

Consume the yourself manifestation to gain more POWER
No. 1001149 ID: 1f53e8

Let's inspect the monitor more closely before mindlessly putting it in our mouth.

So, hey, what was the reason for C playing and smoking and the rat running in the wheel?
No. 1001158 ID: eedbeb
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When you created the rings, they must have picked up your goals and personality and jumbled everything together with the rest of the Magics in the star.

This construct has more of you in it when it’s addressing E and J. That makes sense because it responded to romance talk like your dad would when C was the only one there.

You slurp up the centipede as you ponder life’s mysteries, and the energy makes you grow in strength and size.
No. 1001159 ID: eedbeb
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Where is that fish anyway? You stomp down the hallway to check on the middle room.

Nobody’s there. You leave E and J to play video games while you check the rest of the facility.

You can’t find C anywhere. He’s not even showing up on the respawn tube tablet anymore. The fish is gone.
No. 1001160 ID: afe7de

Maybe he left with dad? Hmmmm. Talk to your summoner and minion
No. 1001165 ID: 1f53e8

I have a bad feeling about this.

Let's try testing our powers with the monitors.
No. 1001168 ID: 96c896

Sounds like he convinced the Dad part of the ring to let him go. Do you have enough power to get E and J out yet?
You could always go to G's room and see if the entity there will show up.
No. 1001171 ID: 031458

Hmm. Check the monitors. Check the outside.
If need be you can always easy the rings outside of it comes down to it.
Take another look at yourself. How much power does your red star have? How much power do you have? Are you only physically stronger? Or can you do some fun stuff?
It's there a way to take these clones with you?
No. 1001174 ID: eedbeb
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C must have convinced the Dad part of the ring to let him go, without asking for freedom for the rest of you. That darned fish! You are both impressed by his selfishness and disturbed by the thought that he could suck your father back into a toxic relationship.
No. 1001175 ID: eedbeb
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Before you report back to E and J, you assess your current power. You have enough juice that you could send one person back to the real world. The remaining power sources you can consume are the respawn tube and the orbiting rings.

Your stomach burbles and you feel vaguely ill. All this conflicting energy is disagreeing with your digestion.
No. 1001176 ID: 0fae41

Send the other Emma back first. She needs backup.
No. 1001183 ID: 031458

Hmm. Then maybe slow down. Perhaps it will take some time for you to properly absorb the energies you have consumed.
There are video games and your two favorite people here. Hang out.
No. 1001187 ID: 96c896

Send one person back, that will burn off extra power and calm your stomach; afterwards you can regain some power and send the other one. Might as well send Jo back first since she's less likely to cause trouble.
No. 1001192 ID: eedbeb
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You decide to send one girl back now to relieve your nausea, eat some more, and then send the other. You explain the plan to E and J, who both nod eagerly.

“Who are you going to send back first?” J asks.

“I’ll do it randomly.” you declare. Showing favoritism would be in poor taste.

You shut your eyes and wave your hand in the air.
No. 1001193 ID: eedbeb
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“It’s just us now.” J says cheerfully. “I probably should have mentioned this before, but E wants to eat her other self.”

“Oh. I’m sure they’ll work it out.” you say.

Your legs have shrunk back into your body and you settle into the threadbare couch to rest for a moment.
No. 1001204 ID: 96c896

So ask J if she's gonna get along ok with Jo.
No. 1001209 ID: 76d753

Whatre you gonna do when you go back? Make friends with yourself? Go traveling? Make out with yourself?
No. 1001213 ID: eaa5e7

When you're ready, eat the cloning machine, punch a hole in the wall, and take J with you as you eat the rings (in case doing so collapses the structure)
Then go back together
No. 1001225 ID: eedbeb
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You play a quaint co-op cooking game with J while you wait for your appetite to return.

“What will you do when you go to the real world? I hope you get along with Jo.” you say.

“I mean, she’s different from me. I have tits and no job or boyfriend. I think I’ll say hi to her and then go do my own thing.”

She pats you on the head. “Send me back with some cash and IDs and I’ll be happy.”
No. 1001226 ID: eedbeb
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After several levels of sizzling meat and cooking soup, your stomach starts to growl. J follows you as you head up the stairs and gulp down the respawn tube.

“Stay where I can see you in the window.” you tell J. “I’m going outside to eat the rings.”
No. 1001227 ID: eedbeb
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You sprout a spiky pair of wings and soar out into the vacuum. The rings glow faintly, like angelic strips of cheddar cheese.

It will take you a while to eat the rings. What do you do to avoid getting sick while you eat?
No. 1001230 ID: afe7de

Can you poop out the toxic parts that make you sick while you do it?
No. 1001231 ID: 031458

Shave it down with your teeth continuously into your mouth. This way you are forced to pace yourself
No. 1001245 ID: 3ba2bb

Ask j to make some tea for you
No. 1001271 ID: eedbeb
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You take it slow at first, scraping away the rings with your teeth and letting the shavings fall down your throat. Whenever you feel sick you stop for a brief rest.
No. 1001272 ID: eedbeb
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As the rings shrink, you grow until you’re larger than the facility and can easily swallow whole sections of gold nothing. You taste each piece carefully and leave particularly conflicting parts behind.
No. 1001273 ID: eedbeb
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J offers you a steaming cup of tea when you return, swollen with success. You take it gratefully.

“I think I can send you to the mortal world and go back home.” you say.

“Great.” says J.

Is there anything you’d like to do before you leave?
No. 1001274 ID: afe7de

leave something behind like a note or message for the next people to enter
No. 1001277 ID: 031458

This hell is inactive and has been abandoned. Feel free to play the video games. They're alright.
If you are trapped without Star-power, this dimension responds to Hope, Despair, the Power of friendship, and Video games.
Good Luck.
No. 1001286 ID: 96c896

Can you look at the place better now that you're powerful? Maybe find out what your mom's part of the facility was doing with the wheel and G.
No. 1001291 ID: 2996dc

Do we bring the whole house with us?
No. 1001324 ID: 53560f

Consider finding a way to repurpose the pocket dimension.
Maybe we could turn it into a clubhouse or other fun stuff?
No. 1001370 ID: eedbeb
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You’re not sure if the retirement dimensions are connected, but you pen a polite hand-written note for any Magic that may stumble across the old facility. You include advice on how to avoid torturing mortals for eternity.
No. 1001371 ID: eedbeb
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You create a bubble of air for J and let her hop onto your head.

The two of you admire the facility for a moment. You memorize the structure so you can analyze it later.

“What was the deal with the rat?” J finally asks. “The construct wanted her to run on a wheel, which is like, unpleasant after a while but not the worst thing in the world.”

You ponder the question. Your mother wants Gruoch alive and healthy, but suffering.

“Running must make you age better. Like a wine.” you say.

No. 1001372 ID: eedbeb
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“I’ll make sure you’re doing okay in the real world.” you continue. “Let’s go.”

Girl Talk has ended. Your story will conclude in Good Impression: https://questden.org/kusaba/quest/res/997795.html
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