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102415 No. 102415 ID: 1afd58

Something happens.

She is awake.

There is a light in the darkness.
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No. 113934 ID: 1afd58
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She tries to move the door but it is stuck. There is no handle. It is flat. Smooth and flat.

Doctor K---- and the Thing below are talking. The thing is going up and the Doctor is going down like sin.
No. 113936 ID: c0f3bf

Can you hear what they are saying?
No. 114180 ID: 632862

I guess you don't have much choice. Go up.
No. 114349 ID: 1afd58
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The Thing said it would go up and the Doctor said she would go down. The Thing's hooves are clacking on the cold steps.

She moves up. She finds a door and opens it. She crawls forward hands and knees. The Thing below shouts that she is on the roof!
No. 114351 ID: 1afd58
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Outside is cold. It is dark and high. There is a loud noise that rings and drones. There is a U shaped building! There is also a tower with a light. The light is not warm but she feels found.

There is a flat part and then a wall around it, and then the building goes down and down.

There is an innocent on the wall. The innocent is looking at her. She wants to go to the innocent.
No. 114403 ID: 632862

Stay away from the innocent. Walk around to the tower, staying away from the edges of the building.
No. 114648 ID: 1afd58
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She tries to stay away from the edge. The building goes down and down. She moves fast.

The innocent talks. It speaks slowly and it's voice is quiet and pretty but she can hear it from far away. It says Jessica. It says she shouldn't be up because she is not an innocent. It says she should go down. Down like sin.

She runs quickly and goes to the tower. There is a door and a thing to turn. She sees the Thing coming out of the stairs and looking for her, but it probably can't see her here.

The innocent speaks slowly. It's voice is quiet and pretty. It says Jessica. It says she should go down like sin.

It is cold and there is moving air. Should she go in the tower? Should she go further up like an innocent?
No. 114649 ID: c42be6

Continue going up.
No. 114667 ID: 1afd58
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She pulls the handle and opens the door.

There are some things in here. The room smells like burning sticks. There are papers on a table and a couple other things. Some... glass. She doesn't like that glass.

There are some boxes and a chair too.

Also there is a ladder! It goes up and up and then there is a door in the ceiling.
No. 114670 ID: 2cbe3e


Look at papers, carefully touch and then lift glass if it's cool.
No. 114673 ID: c0f3bf

Can you read the papers?
No. 114695 ID: e9a4f7

Is there any way to tell where the burning smell is coming from?

Also what's wrong with the glass?
No. 114769 ID: 1afd58
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The glass looks cool. Mother told her.... Mother told her not to touch the glass. The glass is full of something like water but smells different.

She doesn't... she doesn't like that glass. When she sees it it makes her hands feel bad. It makes them hot and like sin.

The table! The table has some things. There's a phone with buttons. There's some papers covered in words. There is another thing she shouldn't touch. Father said not to touch things like that.

The papers are boring. They are about keeping people here and not letting them out. They are about not sleeping when you are watching. They are about not smoking when you are here.
No. 114783 ID: 8dc9d5

Use the thing father said not to touch on the glass, then leave the tower with the thing father said not to touch.
No. 114787 ID: 632862

Look closely at the glass. Try to remember the heat.
No. 114788 ID: 632862

What are you, nuts? You want a gun in the hands of an unmedicated schizophrenic?
No. 114913 ID: 1afd58
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She picks up the thing she shouldn't touch. Gun. Its name was that. It is heavy and cold. She holds it and keeps her fingers outside. She has held one before. She remembers but she doesn't remember.

She holds the gun and looks at the glass. She feels hot. Her hands feel hot. Her finger slides.

She remembers... the glass. She remembers yelling. Mother went out. Father commanded her to be an innocent. Mother's lips were red. Glass. She touched... she touched the glass.

The glass was hot. It held a fire. She touched the glass. She liked the fire. The fire was dancing. The fire danced in the glass. The glass... The fire danced...
No. 114915 ID: 1afd58
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She shakes her head and looks away from the glass. She isn't sure how long she was thinking but she feels scared and she thinks people are watching.

She didn't mean to touch the glass! She didn't mean to touch the gun!

She breathes. She needs to go somewhere. Somewhere else.
No. 115130 ID: 8dc9d5

Step back.
Shoot the fire glass.
Drop the gun.
Run outside.
No. 115131 ID: 9e9b47


Jessica, just take the papers and leave
No. 115182 ID: 632862

(psst, innocent = 'good girl'. she's too old to be a 'girl')

(also I think maybe her mom jumped out a window to escape a burning building, but got riddled with glass shards)
No. 115184 ID: 632862

Put the gun back and go onto the roof.
No. 115203 ID: 1afd58
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She puts the gun down on the table. She doesn't want to think about the glass. She picks up the papers. They ruffle and are white. She walks to the door but stops.

There is a ringing! The phone's buttons glow. Should she talk? Mother would make the phone ring. Mother told her how to talk to it.
No. 115212 ID: 2cbe3e


Pick up the phone, don't say anything.
No. 115213 ID: c16184

Instead, breath heavily and pant into the phone
No. 115763 ID: 1afd58
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She picks up the phone and listens. She does not talk.

A little time passes first.

"...Hello? Warren?"

The voice gets quiet, like it's not talking to her.

"Hey is Warren up there today? What? If he's sick, who picked up the phone?"
No. 115764 ID: c0f3bf

Say you're a temp, ask how you can help him.
No. 116267 ID: 1afd58
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"Temp. She is here for helping temp she is going out like mother but up like innocent."

A second or two of no talking.

No. 116277 ID: 4f694b

They know where you are now! Where do we go?
No. 116631 ID: c0f3bf

Tell him you'll find Jessica for him, then hang up.
No. 116634 ID: 1afd58
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She doesn't want them to know! No!

"Not Jessica! She isn't! Jessica goes down like sin! She goes up like innocent! She will find Jessica!"

The voice responds slowly and calmly, like the Thing before. "Now Jessica... Slow down. My name is Benny, ok? Look, just... stay there. I don't know anything about innocents or sins or any of that. Just... stay there and we will come get you so we can help you. We're your friends, ok?"
No. 116637 ID: 632862

Fire! There is fire! Get out!
No. 116700 ID: 2cbe3e


Ask how he knows you before you leave
No. 118342 ID: 1afd58
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She stays to ask. "How did it know who she was?"

The voice waits just a second, and replies slowly. "You escaped your cell, and Doctor K---- alerted everyone when she saw you. We've been looking for you, to help you. Just stay there, Jessica. Things will be ok."

She puts down the phone and runs.
No. 118343 ID: 1afd58
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She opens the door and falls outside. Her legs are tired and she doesn't want to move anymore.

She hears shouting but can't understand it. She doesn't know what to do.
No. 118578 ID: 1afd58
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(no suggestions)

She pauses, not knowing what to do.

There are two Things here. One is holding a stick and is holding a burning stick in his mouth.

The other is holding something else that makes her think of sparks. She remembers sparks. She remembers being in the chair and then there were sparks. There was a hurt in her head and they asked questions.

The Things are moving towards her. The Thing on the right is speaking about Jessica and about helping.
No. 118581 ID: c42be6

Point inside and yell that there is a fire. Then run back down the stairs.
No. 118607 ID: 1afd58
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She points. "FIRE! It is burning! It dances with her! Inside!"

The Thing from the left moves close. It kneels. It touches her! It is carefully holding the sparky thing. It says Jessica. It says to stay calm. It says that it will help her.

The other Thing is tense and has moved the stick. Now more of the stick is forward. It is watching her carefully but it does not talk.
No. 118620 ID: c42be6

...if you try doing anything they are going to shock you. Just stay calm, and let them handle it.
No. 118632 ID: 632862

Grab the shocky thing and use it against him.
No. 119385 ID: 1afd58
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She struggles halfheartedly. She feels defeated. She tries to pull the thing from the Thing but it is too strong.

It holds her arm and talks loudly. "Damnit Jessica just sit still. Don't touch that!"

The other Thing is closer now but she can't pay attention to it when fighting.
No. 119389 ID: c0f3bf

No drugs. No syringes. If they're trying to help you, they're not doing it right.
No. 119400 ID: 2cbe3e


Kick the Thing right in the nuts!
No. 119401 ID: 632862

Fall over to one side.
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She tries to kick, but he moves too quickly. She tries to follow but something hits her!
No. 120352 ID: 1afd58
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She falls. She lands and can't move. She can't hear well and she can't think.

She hears talking. The Thing says the Thing shouldn't have. It says... something...
No. 120422 ID: 1afd58
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No. 120424 ID: 1afd58
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She can't move. Dark. She can't move. Mother went out. She can't. She is too old. Too old to be an innocent.

She can't move.
No. 120427 ID: 1afd58
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The voices fade from her mind.
No. 120460 ID: 65e590

A fitting ending. I would have liked more insight into her insanity and her though processes, but you can only expect so much out from the point of view of an insane person.

I enjoyed the ride.
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