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86774 No. 86774 ID: 939c7f

Here's the second discussion thread.

I'm starting another one seeing as the last one is so cluttered and filled up that it can be hard to find snippets of info among all the commentary.

I'll post a few segments of text blocked into four parts. I'll try to keep it concise and legible.
blue text means that it's an errata, that it was changed since the last edition and that this is whats to be followed.

After the blocks the thread will be free and open to discussion. Have fun~
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No. 95110 ID: 5a02f7


But that's why I think it's so important to bind Trixy to us. The tighter of a leash we have on her, the less damage she'll be able to do when she inevitably fucks us over.

It's going to happen. It's just a matter of how big the destruction is going to be.
No. 95264 ID: ad936f

Prestige classes you say? I think we should go full mental in that case, with willpower (that's the one that helps us soul-fight right?) as the stat we get every level. Physical stuff isn't that important, because we can always build and capture powerful bodies. We may want to take a few soul related perks to make the body snatching process go smoother, but hopefully having a high will will take care of most of that for us. Mental shit is great because mind reading is always way overpowered, and useful in diplomatic situations too, if we keep it a secret (we should).

Trixy is basically a yandere. Although Trixy diverges from the standard yandere template by being less psychotic and more of a loose cannon. The way you deal with yanderes is either to tell them off before they get too attached or to get them close and submissive enough to you that you don't have to worry about them doing stupid shit like getting jealous and murdering people, or, more likely in Trixy's case, pissing off someone we were trying to ally with. It's far too late to do the former, and Trixy's far too useful not to do the latter. I think that we should get [I think I love her] next level, access to Trixy's magic is way too good to pass up (and yet another reason why physical ability based perks are useless). As long as we keep a close eye on her (do we still have a knife in her?), and we work on her rough personality towards people who aren't us we should be able to at least prevent truly catastrophic actions on her part. Hell, if she's able to cast through us we might not ever need her to go anywhere in person, that'd probably stop most Trixy related disasters before they even started. We'd have to make frequent personal visits to her if we went with that plan though.
No. 95395 ID: 939c7f
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Bring lil Trixy's dreams to life and snuggle up with her in the real world~! Her life would be complete, if only she could touch you...
No. 95428 ID: 939c7f
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Front half of Le Blanc's pillow case.
Bring the idol to bed~ ... you won't crush her, she's made though...
No. 95438 ID: cc08c7


Random question. How big would LeBlanc be compared to say, Hel? Not asking for something I wanna draw or anything just curious I swear.
No. 95439 ID: 939c7f
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well here's my proportion guides, I usually use it. Hel I's just about kobold sized, so about three feet and Le Blanc is a little over six inches tall...
No. 95442 ID: 939c7f
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here's a specific if you prefer...
No. 95447 ID: cc08c7


Okie dokie, thanks.
No. 95479 ID: e18d6f

Missed the apparently too scary image in the Halloweener thread. You should put it up Somewhere for the sake of curiosity.
No. 95481 ID: 939c7f

https://e621.net/post/show/746796/blush-bone-boywiththebrokenhalo-breasts-candy-choc here you go
No. 95482 ID: e18d6f

Lol that's actually a pretty good Halloween image in my opinion. Creepy without being gross. Guess it wasn't pg enough.
No. 95508 ID: cc08c7

One more thing if you don't mind, well two.

1.You okay with explicit stuff with LeBlanc? If not I can easily make it goofy instead.

2.If yes, you got a nude reference or does the suit never come off?

Sorry if this is an inconvenience in any way.
No. 95520 ID: 939c7f

draw as much explicit as you want~ though I'm curious to see what goofy stuff you had in mind

the suit does come off, and I'll gladly offer up nude reference~ I meant to speak up about flutterkin biology recently. flutterkin are born gender neutral, they can change gender at will. kinda like some frogs or fish, le blanc sports a weird... gelatin underwear... it's weird and hard to explain...
No. 95521 ID: 939c7f

basically something like this...
No. 95524 ID: cc08c7


Okie dokie, I'll get my ass in gear and start when I get the refs (unless that last post was the ref). I could probably do something goofy too since Hel's abilities can be used for shenanigans.
No. 95530 ID: 939c7f
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Le Blanc is fun loving, blunt, action oriented and perverse, she's mostly fearless and is not one to back down from a challenge. She does not associate to either male or female, leaning towards female when need be. she does not distinguish male or female and has no sexual preference between the two, she does not shy away from play outside of her species, although mates her size are a plus, if push comes to shove, her titans are always fully loaded...

Her immense strength permits her to lift over 300 pounds above her head and her dwarven resilience permits her to resist crashing blunt weapons or the stomping feet of monsters... she's not one to be crushed in bed... piecing and slashing attacks cut her however... her modified internal organs grant her near endless stamina, held breath for over and hour, night vision, thermal vision, limited invisibility, temporary hemorrhage cease flow, near invulnerability to poisons, adrenaline dosses on command, can go several days without sleep depression...

flutterkin can sex change at will, although she is one to change her gender frequently, she prefers the cock for it's advantages. flutterkin can inflate like a balloon to then rapidly deflate to travel great distances, or float around as a balloon guiding their flight with their feathery tails. flutterkin's bones are rubbery and can dislocate universally like a rat, permitting them to slip into tight spots and land harmlessly from rapid deflations, being decendents of fairies, flutterkin have a strong resistance to the elements: being fire, ice, acid and electricity, they do feel these elements, although less than a human would, but they suffer notably less damage form them...

Le Blanc is mildly obsessed with tattoos and piercings. Flutterkin naturally recover extremely well, leaving no scars. making her hobbies more of an on going thing... piercing holes fill in over weeks and tattoos fade over months. she constantly re-inks and re-pierces, which lead to her obsession, she does how ever keep them mild most of the time...
Her augmented liver makes alcohol intoxication difficult as it filters out poison extremely well. And rather than not being drunk her solution is to drink more. often if possible by imbibing large quantities of alcohol via enema often wile bathing in said booze.
Le Blanc sports a bizarre bio slime instead of traditional underwear. this slime is in fact a living creature, though it is non sentient and incapable of thought, it does writhe and cling reflexively. the slime, known as "biowear", sticks to skin and it's self only, it is scooped and peeled of or dried with sand and scratched away when removed. it is edible and tastes like exotic unknown fruit, however it offers little in the way of sustenance... Le Blanc swears by biowear, wearing nothing less under her suit, claiming it offers better mobility, less chaffing, extremely hygienic, remarkable comfort, unparalleled formfitting (being a fluid), and mild arousal... biowear is manufactured via alchemy and feeds off of bodily fluids such as sweat... Le Blanc is naturally a brunet, thought she constantly dyes her hair, typically white. Her hair never grew on the left side of her head...

So for artists wanting to use this character... not saying who... just if anyone wants to... she's super strong, can't be crushed, prone to fucking who ever and always at least curious about the latest fetish, never gets tired, is either male or female as you see fit, capable of inflation fetish if that's you thing, fey resistance permits fun with fire, ice, acids and shocks, unnaturally flexible, her tattoos, although mandatory, can be what ever the artist see's fit, her piercings, although mandatory, can be what ever the artist see's fit, likes to be drunk, however this requires quite the dosage...

Le Blanc might seem a bit op... and she is to be honest. but she is a war hero after all... she's not exactly marry sue, being arrogant and self centered, aside from play she's hard to motivate and harder to get compliance, she'll often fight against something in the name of laziness, to the point of mediating the laziness to begin with... "I will work all night! ALL NIGHT! I will fight tooth and nail for the right to do absolutely nothing but jack off all day!! Fuck you! I'm gonna go tune my ride..."
No. 95532 ID: cc08c7

Perfect, I'll see what I can do.
No. 95712 ID: 939c7f

By the way, before anyone freaks out about forced romance... She's not asking you to love her, she's asking to feel loved, it doesn't have to be true love (besides, Gatling is currently incapable of true love) so long as she feels loved her pink mana will charge...
No. 95835 ID: 939c7f

who should I draw for ass day?
No. 95840 ID: 088824

No. 95841 ID: cc08c7


Hel or Trixy. For no real reason.
No. 95843 ID: d78b39

Bold!Gatling, just to spice things up.
No. 95846 ID: e18d6f

The royals: Eadoo and Shenzi in an ass-off with Roza and Martin
No. 95850 ID: dbe554

Double agree on the bold!gatling
No. 95852 ID: 88e46e

No. 95896 ID: e18d6f

Voting for Shenzi here..
No. 95897 ID: 88e46e

Too late.
No. 95948 ID: ea0ad9

Maybe that was a vote that was for who won.
No. 95952 ID: 211d83

You might want to explain the naked class in a bit more detail here so that people do not get the wrong idea of what class to vote for.

Also would suggest making a strawpoll for the vote in this thread to not clutter up things.
No. 95957 ID: 939c7f

1) what is a straw poll?

2) naked is not a class, It's nothing, no abilities no feats. It's putting all the class system aside and focusing just on knives, basically for those who disagree with having a body and don't want anything like attacking and spell casting distracting tg from the knife build...
No. 95958 ID: 211d83


Lets you make quick little surveys that you can link here. Makes tallying up the votes quick and easy.
No. 95962 ID: 939c7f

I kinda like voting in quest because it lets me have a little bit of incite, as of to why you're voting and permits folks to change their votes or say: I vote for this so long as it's what I think it is...
But if people overwhelmingly want to use straw poll... we'll use it.
No. 95971 ID: ff0c76

oh I thought Nude meant that we didn't specialize in any thing, like a blank slate that could become anything we wanted it to be like mixing the other Classes but it would just be harder for us.

Think like Brawn starts with high strength and innately knows how to not be a complete spaz with most weapons and a wizard is the same with high magic and skills in a few low level spells but both have the aptitude to progress in their class at a steady pace, But Nude means we start with nothing but have the ability to lean how to use magic, how to use a sword, how to use a bow, how to shape shift and so on with ability's unique to the other classes, it just takes us longer to learn and become proficient with them.
No. 95982 ID: 939c7f

Shameless self endorsement!!!
~I've started a lets play channel~
No. 96061 ID: d4940a

So I want to bring up that the starting a religion for our class really flies in the face of the everyone is equal new Kingdom we are trying to make. I don't think at any point we've ever tried to make the whole quest about Gatling as a character, and making a new religion sort of superceeds everything else.

Honestly, I think as a whole no one really understood the consequences of being an Avatar of oneself (or any other God, since again Gatling is not the worshiping type).
No. 96102 ID: 939c7f

I won't disagree with you. But I confident you guys can make it work.
No. 96105 ID: ad936f

I agree, I think that even if we do decide on starting a religion we should wait until our kingdom is more established, so we don't get shoehorned into becoming a theocracy.

I think that the focus of this quest should be more on Eadoo than Gatling, his name is in the title of the quest. Plus, fully quest controlled protagonists tend to turn out bland.
No. 96107 ID: ea0ad9

I wanted to keep Richard being us a secret from most people so that we could have Richard mention "us" being a God but not pressure people into following. Without any enforcement or proof, the amount of worshippers will remain small, but we'll still gather some that way, and gain a bit of power.
No. 96261 ID: f7a64f

We should probably throw all that discussion in here, so as to not clutter up the thread and so bwtbh doesn't make us start arguing with ourselves in front of everyone.
No. 96296 ID: c6d510

So what's Gatling's charsheet like now?
No. 96320 ID: f7a64f

I'm also curious, apparently I missed some of our last level up (which was pretty damn long).
No. 96326 ID: 939c7f
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Level 14 male/female Sentient Shard
Level 2 male/female Avatar of Al'Gattaya

Weapon Skill:30
Ballistic Skill:26
Will Power:85


--Sentient Shard--

-Telepathy [Communicate telepathically with allies within short range]

-Multy-possession 3 [Dominate up to 3 hosts at a time]

-Recal [instantly recall to an ally's hand within a short distance (same as telepathy)]

-Soul Eater [Gatling's voracious appetite permits him to eat and meld with his victims. But in this, Gatling can now control his hunger, to an extent (Gatling can roll to avoid devouring their prey entirely and can avoid corroding his host)]

-Inner contempt [Gatling can make a will save to ignore the effects of self loathing]

-Spiritually distant [any attempt to locate, spy upon or commune with Gatling via divination (scrying, tarot etcetera) is increased in -difficulty by two tiers. Gatling cannot yet prevent or control this]

-pleasure form pain [Gatling and those possessed by Gatling, are immune to pain and pain effects.]

-Blazing blade [Gatling can engulf its self in flames at will, this effect does not harm the wielder]

-Self loathing [HATE!! Burned into my mind like hot iron! On each inch of my memories written a thousand thousand times Hate hate hate, but for you... HATE!! HATE!!! (plus 15% critical hit chance, when rolling to wound yourself.)]

-Woundless [Gatling can elect to not cause injuries when inserted]

-Self control [+20 to resist devouring souls]

-Tongues [You vaguely understand any language]

-I... I think I love her? [I'm not going to say outright what this does, but when this ability is in affect, there will be a pink note]

-greater telepathy [you can now read the surface thoughts of others (I.E. when you actively think. like when you read...)]


-You've got the touch! [The mojo is in you, what does that mean? It's kinda hard to explain...]

-Blessing of crossed race [Those who earn The gaze of Gatling are not divided by the barriers race, may their flesh be one in childbirth, amen~]

-Basic almighty spells [you know the basic spells for all of your domains [typically 2-3 per domain]]

-Orison [Gatling can cast a number of level 0 spells without using mantra]


Level 0 spells cost 0 mantra

Fairness [Merchants cannot lie, gamblers cannot cheat]
Self sacrifice [you take damage instead of the target]
Pray [all allies worshiping you, everywhere, gain +10 to everything, so long as you do nothing but pray for their success]
Telepathic bond [touched targets share a telepathic channel, there can be any number of targets in a channel and any number of channels]

Aid [+5 to int, cha and will for one skill check, does not stack]
Trivia [A trivial question is answered [such as, where is the capital, what year is it, is there a tavern nearby, who is the elected leader?]]

Drive [Target possesses long lasting libido and stamina]
Pink wall [Target's sexual desires are temporarily, not factored by race or gender, being purely objective]

Contraception [Render target temporarily infertile]
cleanse [make water safe to consume]

Torchlight [you shine like a torch]
Light Eater [Blow out all flames nearby]
Symbol Divine [Manifest a divine symbol]
Trick of the eyes [target cannot avoid your gaze]

Level 1 spells cost 1 mantra

Back to back [Two targets gain +15 to [all], for as long as they work together]
King's cry [target becomes calm]
Rally [target squad looses the pined, panicked and confused conditions]
Moment of greatness [double targets moral bonuses]
attention [target can be heard by all in a large area]
Bells [all npc in a large area gain the [Martial weapon training] and [Medium armor training] perks]
the law [target is compelled to not commit crimes against his own people]

Tongues [target can speak any language]
insight [target gains +15 to int, cha, wis for one skill check]
Diagnose [detect and identify target's injuries and illnesses]
Augury [A simple question is answered]

Binding [Binds target in tight leathers, agi save negates]
White tentacles [summon weak grabbing tentacles, offering mild healing powers]
Enthrall [target seeks to serve, will save negates]
pink touch [Touched target is paralyzed with rapturous pleasure]

Bless the fields [target land, body of water, or person becomes fertile and prosperous]
long live [target land, body of water or child resits the effects of weather]
The egg [one pregnant target lays an egg within three hours, child gestates normally within the egg]
destined birth [Target unborn persons's stats are raised and begins with a character class, target is marked from birth with your blessed sigil]

light and dark [target location is illuminated / is plunged in darkness]
black and clear, skies [weather improves / worsens slightly]
Bless and afflict [target gains or losses -/+ 10 to chosen skill]
Mend and wounds [stops bleeding and helps healing / worsens injury, causing bleeding and infection]
hellfire and holyflames [produce holy / hellish flames]

Things that need investigation:
Does woundeless work on your body?
Does possession work on your body?
Does Flaming work on your body?
Does Recal Work on your body?

~A kind god, presenting unison between the common folk, fond of Fellowship and respect. Teamwork is the favored weapon of Gatling! They are also a god of insight, oft to help spread guidance and secrets. Fond of pleasures and just rewards, they are not offended by the mutual enjoyment of their followers, if anything it pleases them. Rich and plentiful, Their blessing extends not only the farmers fields, but their wives bellies as well~
No. 96331 ID: 939c7f
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--Gatling's quests--

Main quests offer a lot of Exp to the individual tied to it while also gifting significant exp to others who helped. You can never gain less than one level from a main quest.

Side quests are less important and offer less exp, but form the bulk of the campaign, Some quests are time dependent! So plan your actions carefully...

Achievements don't offer any exp, but accomplishing them grants you special items.

-Main quests-

United in all
Tied to: Eadoo Gatling
"The world will follow in the light of the one marked by the Everything, The black fated prince, so goes the prophecy"
world united under one rule [>1%/80%]

The Dragons throne
Tied to: Eadoo Gatling
"The dragons rule will rise again, under the will and call of the Black fated princes. It is only a matter of time"
Crown of dragons [0/1] Scepter of Dragons [0/1] Throne of Dragons [0/1]

Out for Demon blood
Tied to: Gatling
"Gorister is out to get you, but maybe there's still time..."
Kill Gorister [0/1] opt: Change his corrupted heart [0/1]

The son must be Stopped
Tied to: Gatling and Eadoo
"Kaleb the Vile has plagued Eadoo's home and killed her family, He must face death..."
Son killed [0/1]

I want it all!!
Tied to: Eadoo
"I want Wealth, Women and Power... That is my wish little bunny rabbit, I want it all."
Square feet of riches [>1/10] - Harem girls/boys [3/50] - Loyal servants [16/300]

Together for ever
Tied to: Trixy
"In my deepest dreams, we never leave each others sides. Be mine my love"
Wed to Gatling [0/1]

Blood Brothers
Tied to: William
"I will kill him, even if it kills me. He will die with my hands on his throat!"
Brother killed [0/1]

To Heavens gate
Tied to: Ean
"I will see the golden gates in death. This I swear"
absolution [0/1]

A fathers death
Tied to: Pipo and Yulfa
"He must be avenged, he must, he will."
Father/husband avenged [0/1]

To rule once more
tied to: Sasha
"A witch has taken my form and rules in my place, I must have back what is rightfully mine"
Form returned [0/1] witch killed [0/1]

-side quests-

Take the Castle
"Clear the castle Arimasho of the foul undead that haunt our town and it's walls are yours, these people your servants, this land your kingdom"
Castle taken [0/1]
Time: irrelevant

A map to Treasure
"Banzai's map leads to a relic who's military worth is greater than an army... but it's path is treacherous indeed..."
Treasure found in the blighted path [0/1]
Time: irrelevant

Gnomish taxes
"Gnomes are being dicks to your peasants to be, kill the or Deal with them."
deal with the gnomish villages pacifically [0/2] opt: kill them all [0/2]
Time: irrelevant

Taken by trolls
"a little girl was abducted by trolls, kill them."
Little girl retrieved [0/1]
Time: Urgent

Iron Root Wall
"send emissaries to iron root to help smooth over trade roots with them."
trade roots [0/1]
Time: ongoing

Strange soldiers
"strange soldiers have been seen on the outskirts of a near by farm. investigate them."
soldier groups scouted [0/1]
Time: expired

find mah chickens
"chickens have been taken by orcs. Save them."
Chickens remaining [21/30]
Time: Urgent

Fey moods
"the dwarven smith has fallen to a fey mood and needs copper cables, bones and star metal. The first two are abundant, but star metal is rare."
unites of star metal [0/1]
Time: Still Time

spooky scary
"there are skeletons in the grave yard that dance at night. Kill them."
Skeletons killed [0/4]
Time: Plenty of time

Love for a goblin
"rekindle trade roots with the goblins so that some fool can get off with a goblin"
Trade route [0/2]
Time: irrelevant

dire situation
"there are dire boars in the forest. kill them. Disperse the miasma for optimal results."
Dire boars killed [0/4] opt: find miasma and stop the source. [0/1]
Time: Difficulty grows with time

Can I fuck her?
"Concu desperately wants Alanna all to her self... maybe you should step in..."
Charm spells undone [0/1] Opt: Convince Alanna to accept Concu's new feelings, potentially pedophilic off screen sex? [0/1]
Time: irrelevant

Gone mining
"A dwarf wants his son back from the mines, go get him"
Return the Dwarf named Qwern to his mother
Time: Difficulty grows with time

But the Jacket though...
"Carl is likely to die in his jacket, maybe he should stop wearing it..."
Jacket worn [1/1]
Time: Uncertain

Give the little guy a chance
"A young elf in town wants to be a merc and claims to be a master swords man"
interview [0/1]
Time: irrelevant

The mask The mask The mask The mask
"get to the bottom of that mask"
Bottoms got of the mask [0/1]
Time: irrelevant


Ten tomes in
"Reach 10 chapters in total"
Reward: Valor's sword

Take a little journey
"group traveled a total 3000 miles"
Reward: Golden steeds.

Take a long journey
"Group traveled a total 15000 miles"
Reward: Seven leagues Boots

Don't take this Journey...
"Group traveled a total 300000 miles"
Reward: Steel dragon Ragnaros

I need help
"acquire 25 soldiers"
Reward: captains sword

I need an army
"Acquire 100 soldiers"
Reward: Captains vest

one to rule them all
"acquire 500 soldiers"
Reward: captains hat


Quite rich
"Gain 10 gold"
Reward: Beacon of light

more than enough
"Gain 50 gold"
Reward: gold sniffing nose

Swimming in it
"Gain 300 gold"
Reward: Gold grieves of stepping

Monster attacker
"slay 10 monsters"
Reward: Vile bane weasel

Monster hunter
"Slay 30 monsters"
Reward: Dragon bone greatsword

Master hunter
"slay 75 monsters"
Reward: Golden hunting dog

Monster's nightmare
"Slay 100 monsters"
Reward: Monster bane greatsword

Don't make this a habbit
"1 named team member dies"
Reward: Heartless sword

Just the beginning
"3 named team members die"
Reward: ghost calling collar

You should of tried harder
"5 named team members die"
Reward: unicorns blood

you're trying at this point
"25 named team members die"
Reward: immortalizing flask

High card
"Just you and her, if you know what I mean! Kobolds that is..."
Reward: cuffing lace

Two pair
"Two on one, if you know what I mean~ Kobolds that is..."
Reward: fitting lace

Three of a kind
"All three and all for you, if you know what I mean~ Kobolds that is..."
Reward: loves red lace

"Four on one, wouldn't be fair otherwise, if you know what I mean~ Kobolds that is..."
Reward: lace of gold

Full house
"Sexual innuendo involving having sex with five Named Kobolds, if you know what I mean~ Kobolds that is..."
Reward: lace of irresistible desires

New Faith
"15 religious followers"
Reward: staff of faith

Now we're talking
"45 religious followers"
Reward: pendant of true faith

A proper following
"300 religious followers"
Reward: Robes of the martyr

Wide spread
"750 religious followers"
Reward: Mitre of divine grace

Like a plague
"2000 religious followers"
Reward: new prestige class for Gatling

Total sell out
"subscribe to coffeefueledgaming patreon"
Reward: five levels distributed as you see fit.

seven rings in hand
"acquire seven magical rings in total"
Reward: Arrowed heart's fire

true identity
"name all of the stories over arching villains"
Reward: Foe slayer

Nod to Vlamibad
"kill all the bitches, be king, fuck bitches"
Reward: kings foil

Fuck the king and fuck kings landing
"Who needs heros!"
Reward: lone wanderer perk

--More quests and achievements are sure to come--
No. 96333 ID: ad936f

Boy, you've been playing too much World of Warcraft.

>Gone mining
>"A dwarf wants his son back from the mines, go get him"
>Return the Dwarf named Qwern to his mother
>Time: Difficulty grows with time
What? How did we get this quest? Would it be out of character to drop everything to go do this? Watch this kid turn out to be one of Qwern's descendants, or like, his great great great grand nephew.
No. 96337 ID: fa8f9d

What about the quest for the dwarf that needs metal? Also I feel the need to focus on something William related; he has gotten little to no love in the story considering he was one of the original 5... I mean geez... He isn't even involved in the war council stuff.
No. 96339 ID: f7a64f

Now that we are corporeal we should abandon all our companions and go on the road, just so we can get the achievement for it. Well spread gatlingity to the globe.
No. 96340 ID: ea0ad9

>All three and all for you, if you know what I mean~
Wait, there's a thir--It's Eclipse isn't it.
>Four on one, wouldn't be fair otherwise,
Four?! Are we bringing the Son in on this?!
>five Named Kobolds
...Now I'm just flat out lost. I think we need to find an unnamed Kobold, give them a name, and then bed them?
>Convince Alanna to accept Concu's new feelings, potentially pedophilic off screen sex? [0/1]
Wasn't Concu of age, though? She's married! ...Or was Alanna underaged?
No. 96341 ID: f7a64f

Is EIGHT a reference to the demo for the Stanley Parable?
No. 96344 ID: c6d510

I believe it's more reference to the achievement in the HD edition based off of the incident in the demo for the stanley parabke. Which means we'll probably be seeing a keypad sometime in the future.
No. 96398 ID: bae3ea

guys, I just got an idea, if the soul surgery works out and 'richard' is still standing, then we can repeat the process and get a small army of gatlings
No. 96403 ID: c6d510

Very small army. We used up a blade to manifest Richard, remember?
No. 97233 ID: 2ccbb3

Important question: What happens to souls that are unclaimed and do not die in the name of any?

Would like a percentage demographic plz
No. 97449 ID: 939c7f

I feel a bit bad for not updating a lot lately, i know my update rate is already pretty low, but I've been tasked with a lot of extra hours at work lately since one of my coworkers took his vacation this week...
No. 97450 ID: 939c7f

oh and the souls that aren't claimed wander around between he afterlife... usually snatched up by devils looking for a quick meal or sometimes they find a door that lets them in, for better or for worst...
No. 97453 ID: 665ed8

How does one get virginities, im assuming there are ways other than sending an avatar and actually taking it
No. 97458 ID: 3663d3

probably any followers can also lay claim.
No. 97459 ID: 665ed8

Yeah but it said that they had to be sacrificed to us so that wouldn't make much sense
No. 97462 ID: 3663d3

a priest is given power to make sacrifices to their god.
No. 97478 ID: 939c7f

Priests tend to actively try to gather roses for their god, as it usually gains their gods favor. However anyone can consummates the flower in the name of a deity, sometimes even, women will offer their flower to a deity directly. Virgin souls however require a small ritual and is best left to priests...
(Of note: the rose blooms around the age of 16, regardless of race or species. (so you can't grind a wealth of 2.6 year old kobold roses) only valued souls (sapient creatures) have roses worth mention. The breaking of the hymen is not required or relevant for gathering roses. Until a living penis penetrates, the rose is still within the maidens souls. (if anything it's an obstacle...)
No. 97576 ID: 939c7f
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Hey guys,
It's been a little over three years now I've been writing Eadoo quest, and I had a great time doing it! But I've got some problems with eadoo quest and I think it's about time I move on...

I'd like to point out that all of these problems are my fault, I'm not blaming anyone but myself.

For one, it's been three years and the plot only advanced 4 days... The game was supposed to be about empire building and resource management and the stagnation really didn't help the plot along, to put it into perspective: it'll be four days before the away team reached iron root, seven days before we storm the castle, nine days before we discover who tass's champion is... and if it continues as is, those days equate to years for us...
The other problem is that there's too many characters and too little spotlight... In trying to keep the story fresh I crammed in more characters, granted these characters would have arrived sooner or later but, still. I feel the characters don't get the love they deserve from me and that saddens me because I honestly really love all of my characters and world lore...
Finally we can all agree that the game mechanics are shit... I tried making my own thing and rolling with it, but it's very broken and unrefined in so many ways, and the fact that no actual resources exists makes it pretty hard for me, I'm pretty much out of inspiration for it...

so I'm gonna put Eadoo quest down for now... I promise to myself that at some point, the next quest I wright will be a return to Eadoo, but given that amount of time I'll rewrite the game mechanics and have a new approach... For now I'll write a simpler, less politic and empire driven story.

How I'm gonna not gonna fall into the same traps...
First off the story wont be very time oriented, it happens when it happens, and without having multiple groups, sometimes there will just be over world travel, or a time skip... but I'm not factoring in long term plans on in internal level...
I'm keeping to a short cast, and leaving one open slot dedicated for side characters at a time...
lastly, the game will run on pathfinder... no fancy custom made game rules, just pathfinder. for those who don't know, pathfinder is d&d 3.5, but newer... Yes I know that's not exactly true, but you can argue about that in another board...
You can find all the rules for pathfinder here http://www.d20pfsrd.com/

I'm making no grand illusion that this quest will fail me in new interesting ways, but I'm excited to see how it breaks down~ Here's hoping you guys stick with me for another three years!

For those wanting to know what my new story is about... I'll put it in spoiler warnings since it has a cold opening...

You play as a highly advanced learning AI who fell upon two siblings, a younger brother named Varonos and an older sister named Doukissa as well as their close friend, Prince... Your prime directive is study demi human emotions and culture in hopes of understanding or even integrating them...
The game takes place in pseudo fantasy setting with a bit of a modern twist to it... It's a romantic comedy with a eldritch call of Cthulhu style twist~

No. 97578 ID: 665ed8

While I can't say I am happy you are leaving the quest I do approve. Your reasons are logical and I am more excited to see what you make next than see you stagnate in this one. Thank you for telling us and not just moving on.

Excited to see what you do next, Purpose~
No. 97580 ID: cd886c

It'll be sad to see eadoo quest ending but in the end you should do whatever you think is best for your art.
Thanks for the story so far. Excited for what you do next.
No. 97582 ID: e18d6f

Your reasons are sound, but I still wish you'd reconsider. There are a lot of loose plot threads that are going to be difficult to let go. And while it's true that the pace is very slow given the scope of the quest, the multitude of interesting characters is one of the quest's strengths. You could still speed up the pace artificially by withdrawing the viewpoint a little. Have Gatling begin feeling like a deity and all of a sudden not every single gear in the works of their empire will be important enough to learn every minutiae of their insignificant lives. That's how a common adventurer with absolutely no influence builds a power base. We now have that and it's pretty reasonable that the pace of the quest will now shift with the focal point being an immortal demigod rather than a charismatic fuzzbold. It could be explained away pretty reasonably by having something significant happen to Gat to cause this withdrawal. Either something revealed by our uncle or something happening that is painful enough emotionally that we embrace our inhumanity to escape being caught in the tangles of our followers' lives.
No. 97583 ID: e18d6f

In other words while I'd happily watch Eadoo quest Wheel of Time it for another 10 years, I'd sooner see Gat Dr. Manhatten it and have events unfold montage style apart from the key points of conflict and plot development. We don't need to Tolkien things and talk about every footstep as we head to the castle.
No. 97584 ID: b17b81

I remember helping choose stats at the start of Eadoo quest. That was a fair bit ago I guess. I kinda fell off after a couple months. I genuinely look forward to your next quest.
No. 97595 ID: 99a64d

I stopped reading Eadoo a little while ago for pretty much exactly the reasons you listed. I could tell you were getting bored with it as more and more random, barely explicable shit started happening. Like suddenly Eadoo wasn't special and there were two of him?!? All of the cast seemed like they had the potential to be interesting characters, but they fell flat due to a complete lack of development. If you had kept the cast down to maybe, Gatling, Eadoo, Trix, Shenzi, Roland, and a few others then it would have been better. You also included a bunch of sidequests, and while I appreciate giving the suggestors more options, the story was slow enough without them. Eadoo quest could've been great, if it had just been a series of important events and battles with the suggestors making plans inbetween I would have loved it, but it got bogged down with minutia, fluff, minor characters, and other plot irrelevant things.
But that's just my two cents. If your next quest is anything like the good bits of Eadoo quest then I'll probably be reading.
No. 97596 ID: 99a64d

Plus, considering Eadoo Quest's reputation, it's probably good to be getting a fresh start.
No. 97598 ID: 665ed8

Though I am curious, given the way people reacted to the sex in Eadoo will the new one include such?
No. 97635 ID: f7a64f

Sad to see it end, but I can't say I don't understand. It ran so long with such a huge cast of characters that alot of the characters and their development got lost just because it happened so long ago most of your suggestors wouldn't remember it. Thinking back on how different it was having corny adventures with Eadoo and the princess as compared to later on with our cast of dozens, it's like that stuff never happened.

I almost wish you wouldn't quit it. The story may be unfocused, but that's because it's broad and detailed. Maybe what's needed is just to make some broad strokes so that all the little conflicts we've been building to with no resolution turn into defined direct conflicts instead of overarching situations (I.E. force a confrontation with Gorrister, or the church of magnus, or hidden revolution).

Then again, if you aren't enjoying it anymore, you shouldn't do it, and you shouldn't worry about me or any other poster in your game.

Regardless, you are a great writer and I hope your next game turns out great. You work is top notch and a cut above most stuff on tgchan.
No. 97642 ID: e18d6f

I get what you're saying but I think you overestimate the number of people who have actually read the quest start to finish and think it's just a sex quest. Most of the detractors I believe are a vocal minority who never read much of the quest or are simply squeamish about the particulars of some of the sexual situations. While early on there was unnecessary nudity (which I personally don't care about), anyone who reads the quest can see how Flynn matured as an author. Sex is present at times, but it's all presented well within the context of the plot. And remember that it's the readers who chose almost all current instances of sex. We built Eadoo into a charismatic succubus, and we made Gatling a lust/fertility deity.

No. 97677 ID: 939c7f
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Thank you so much for the support, it means a lot to me and it's not easy to let go of Eadoo quest, so it's really nice to see you guys have my back~

>Regardless, you are a great writer and I hope your next game turns out great. You work is top notch and a cut above most stuff on tgchan.

This actually had me teary eyed...

This is a pretty good idea and I'll definitely consider it when I eventually come back to Eadoo quest. But that might be in a long time, I hope you'll still be interested in reading my quests when that time comes...

>Though I am curious, given the way people reacted to the sex in Eadoo will the new one include such?

It wouldn't be a proper flynn quest if there wasn't controversial themes and nudity, But I'm going to tone it down significantly... There will be occasional breasts but I'm going to avoid giant floppy cocks all over the screen all the time... Nudity will not be forced and appear naturally if and when there would be nudity. Sex on the other hand will be more of a reward, something that doesn't just spawn because the author got a boner. All of the characters can end up having sex, but they're not destined to without TG's effort. Also sex scenes will be tame and sensual in stead of wild and sexual...

Characters from Eadoo quest might be making appearances, thought they may be modified or renamed, they won't be the literal same characters, but rather recycled faces...

I'm thinking, since I'm using the pathfinder system, there will be moments when you're asked to chose a feat or spell from a seemingly never ending list... in these cases, we'll settle the vote by first to 5 votes or most votes after a set time, I reserve the right to break a tie with my own personal opinion... We may lower the vote count to 3 or raise it to 7 if need be, based on over or under whelming votes...

I'm hoping you guys like the next story... The slave, the thief and the slut / Rise of the Vile Bloods
No. 97684 ID: e18d6f

Booh, no giant floppy cocks? Preposterous. :P
Look forward to the next quest.
No. 97686 ID: 3f9dc0

My impression, especially recently, was that the pacing in Eadoo ground to a halt because every time we sat down to try and get stuff done, another thing crashed into the spotlight needing to be dealt with first. All you had to do was wait to introduce a new element until AFTER we had resolved an old one.
No. 97688 ID: b17b81

Since I'm gonna miss at least one round of voting for stats or class, I'm putting my idea here.

Ranger Gnoll
Str 16 (+2) 10pt
Dex 12 2pt
Con 14 (+2) 5pt
Int 14 5pt
Wis 14 5pt
Cha 8 -2pt

Medium Int because it affects how many skill points you get per lvl (real important in pathfinder for skills) and also it would let us learn 2 languages (otherwise we are just stuck with gnoll)
Medium Wis because rangers are the Wis class
High Con and Str for rolling two weapon fighting ranger
Meh dex because we have a nat +2 to armor class and it's hard to make every stat great
And bad Cha because it is the best dump stat
No. 97689 ID: 88e46e

To be fair, that really depends on having a team. Unless we're guaranteed a few allies we can also reliably control, we can't really afford dump stats, since even Charisma is important for social stuff. TWF ranger is legit great as part of a team, but I'm somewhat concerned about how survivable it is solo.

Can we get some author input on how worried we should be about having to fill every role? Also, how do you feel about Dreamscarred Press's stuff, Broken Halo/rest of you guys?
No. 97691 ID: 3f9dc0

Nothing about Dreamscarred specifically, but I have never looked in to a pathfinder 3rd Party Publisher write-up and found it not to be broken in some way. Either overpowered, or badly put together.

I mean yes, you can break the game with the core rules too, but you have to kinda work at it. No sense making it easier by including 3PP.
No. 97693 ID: 88e46e

That's why I said DSP specifically, they're actually excellent and much better balanced than actual core. Most of their stuff is on par with bards, inquisitors, magi, and so on. The only things that might actually be problems are some of the full-manifesting psions since they ported Astral Seed and Psychic Reformation from 3.5e, but the rest is generally as powerful as a sorcerer. Some of the Path of War stuff also does a bit much damage at very low levels, like 1-3, but they're actually working to fix that. I legitimately consider them to be much better than Paizo, especially where taking feedback is concerned.
No. 97710 ID: 939c7f

you have two allies that are npc controlled but not stupid, and a dedicated slot for side characters that come and go as they please. (like in kingdom hearts) one of your allies is a jack of all trades does everything (not saying what class yet) and the other is going to base it's self on your character to fill out the team so we don't die horribly.

as for third party rules, I generally stay away from them, there's already a little over too much to process in the vanilla rules, and I have a completely biased opinion of third party vs first party and balancing issues, (once again, it's biased and I stand by it) I do how ever use the advanced bestiary guide.
No. 97711 ID: 939c7f

oh also, hands raised, no lying... who voted for gnoll just to have a dick girl?
No. 97713 ID: 40c6ad


Well, I was the one who suggested NOT a spotted-hyena-like gnoll, so not me. Really there's nothing to say gnoll ladies have to be dickgirls in any case, they have other non-hyena traits. The original D&D gnoll (at least, after the "cross between a gnome and a troll") was just a human with fur and a hyena head, like most beastmen-esque races.

Also striped hyenas and aardwolves are cute and there should be more gnolls based on them.
No. 97714 ID: 99a64d

Will the new quest be getting its own disthread?
No. 97717 ID: 47160d

Also are we the slave, the thief, or the slut?
No. 97718 ID: 939c7f

No. 97719 ID: e18d6f

Is dickgirl ever a bad choice?
No. 97720 ID: 0cdf95


Well, there are various biological and social ramifications, many of which could be negative, so yes.
No. 97722 ID: fbed30

Well in the case of a gnoll, if it's a hyena style pseudo-peen, biological ramifications aren't as major as in the case of a trans like Roz was. And socially it might actually be a hindrance to be the only gnoll chick without one (assuming the gnolls in this setting are the same as in Eadoo's). That said it could be explained away with our bloodline; and I will admit that I mainly want it because when we do get fanservice or fanart, that's my personal taste in soda pop.
No. 97723 ID: 0cdf95

>if it's a hyena style pseudo-peen, biological ramifications aren't as major

Depends on if you want your firstborn child to actually manage to take a breath.

>And socially it might actually be a hindrance to be the only gnoll chick without one

I don't think hyena social rituals would really apply to gnolls. The spotted hyena dominance ritual is about displaying your genitals for your superior to have a sniff and taste of and to threaten with their big jaws, and that whole thing becomes waaay more awkward for a bipedal species that wears, for example, loincloths to protect their junk from getting frozen off and/or bitten by the wild animals they're hunting.

And if there isn't a social dominance reason to have a pseudoschlong then it's really only a big hassle and a threat to their health. In fact, even if you assume some magical melding of humanoid traits with a hyena to explain it in place of some kind of evolution, this being a fantasy setting, then it might actually be a situation where some female "circumcision", in the sense of a ritual surgery to open things up down there, would actually make some degree of sense, for reasons of the previously mentioned stillbirths and et cetera.

I don't think spotted hyena females even ever use their dicks as dicks, it's only there for the submission display.
No. 97724 ID: 0cdf95


Now that I think of it, actually, just being bipedal by itself makes giving birth a lot harder, because of the different hip structure you have to have. Humans have a lot harder time than quadrupedal mammals, death by childbrith was the leading cause of death for women through most of history. If you combined that and the spotted hyena biology, which can also kill the mother quite often as well as almost always killing the first child, then you might well end up with something that doesn't really work at all.
No. 97725 ID: 7178cd

They do occasionally somewhat use it in mounting dominance displays actually, but I fail to see what that has to do with what a sapient female might do with one. Or what that has to do with whether it should be an option or not. You also seem to be arguing using both "evolution must be kept in mind" and "fantasy setting so magic explains all", so I'll just ignore those bits except to say that using hyena social rituals or biology as a direct map of what gnolls would be or do seems silly. It's like seeing chimps groom each other by eating each others parasites then getting upset because humans give each other backrubs instead of picking off bugs. Same goes with the physiological concerns of a pseudo-penis. If Flynn does decide it's an option then there are plenty of ways to explain it scientifically. Gnoll babies could run small, or the canals run large - or not - just as in hyenas the actual genital configuration could be an example of social dictates deciding evolution's course. Or it could be a genetic throwback that only a percentage of females possess.

Regardless I'll find my justifications just as you'll find yours, so it boils down to preferences. If Flynn gives the option, it will come down to votes. He's about the only author here who provides that particular brand of girl, so I hope he does.
No. 97726 ID: 939c7f

I'm a futa lover myself so it comes as no supersize that my gnoll ladies have pseudo dicks, but I also like the matriarchal attitude that it gives them. still I leave it up to vote and thank you >>97723 for the brilliant suggestion. If we vote against having a pseudo phallus on our gnoll it's due to a ritualistic circumcision to help with child birth, assuming the alpha females don't go though this process to maintain their superiority. also it could vary from clan to clan tribe to tribe... in pathfinder not all gnoll tribes are matriarchal, some are lead my alpha males, other by blond gnolls named flinds. But the females tend to be larger and more dominant like their hyena counterpart, hense my suspicion of their lady junk, but pathfinder never Ever Ever touches base on such sexuality, so ultimately it comes down to preference...

given that he wanted a ranger gnoll should I post the stats for him?
No. 97727 ID: b17b81

Nah, different stats for different classes. Just trying to make whatever we go with(personal preference) viable/good. (trying to mix roleplaying and rollplaying) Given enough time I can make most things work well. (it's what I did for my Forest gnome fighter)
No. 97730 ID: b17b81

>who voted for gnoll just...
Going with the flow.
Also, if I had realized sooner that kitsune was an option, I would have voted for that. (cause fox chicks are my thing)
The new stats I came up with are the same, just wis and cha swapped. Took a little to see what affects what in this class.
No. 97735 ID: e18d6f

It definitely factored in. It's one of the things I like in your quests and your take on gnolls.
No. 97780 ID: 939c7f

I'm thinking I'll roll between posts instead of in the posts themselves... would tg trust me to roll off screen and not cheat?
No. 97782 ID: 7b82a3

Sure, and maybe you'll show us some mercy from time to time.
We're pretty shit at rolls.
No. 97787 ID: e18d6f

No. 97936 ID: f7a64f

I've seen you fudge rolls before to protect us, but I with the crazy number of rolls you put out nothing else will work
No. 97942 ID: b17b81

You're the Dm behind the Dm's screen. You are allowed to fudge any roll you want so long as you have a good reason. (story or mechanics reason) I trust that you'll be fair, not that you'll be honest. It's fine for us to have shit luck sometimes (or the majority of times), we're used to it; just give us a break every once in a while if it's for an important roll.
No. 97946 ID: 939c7f

That is my intent, also it makes posting quite easier... But yeah, the goal is to be a fair dm... But for the record, I did not fudge any rolls in the chase scene, since there's an entirely alternative path if you fail the chase~
No. 97947 ID: 939c7f

for those who are curious...
You're serendipitously saved by one of the main villains who's trying to get the artifact... you escape as he kills off the hellknights and are blamed for their murder since you're the only survivors... one way or another you end up falling into the pit when you escape...
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