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23278 No. 23278 ID: 3416ec

Hello folks! Since this is the very first quest I've ever done, I'm looking for feedback and constructive criticisms. I want to make this quest a good one, and I welcome anything you can offer.

Also, feel free to discuss plot matters here too.

OP pic was requested by Shot.
Expand all images
No. 23279 ID: d677cc

update moooooore
No. 23283 ID: 3416ec


I'm trying, I really am! I just get sidetracked really easily, especially by video games and school. In that order.
No. 23289 ID: e31d52

Is this really alternate universe Minecraft?
No. 23291 ID: 3416ec


No it is not.
No. 23292 ID: 7839ee

You could choose one night every week to concentrate solely on updating the quest. That way you could create ten or more updates while directly reacting to the players.

Even if your update speed all in all stays the same, it would seem much faster, as players could see the reaction to their decisions right away.
No. 23294 ID: e31d52

You're actually quite a good artist. The environs and the main character are a pleasure to look at (especially the latter, hur hur) and everything is quite interesting. But the space between updates is a bit much...
No. 23296 ID: 732129

I feel guilty for making the Segdo joke, but it was a cheap laugh.
No. 23298 ID: 3416ec


I liked it.
No. 23310 ID: 3416ec

Also, it's worth noting that it probably doesn't help that I often re-do an update several times. I draw it once, and it doesn't look or feel right to me, so I have to go back and either salvage what I have, or start over from scratch. Rarely does an update come out that was done right the first time.
No. 23312 ID: 175f4a

give us slightly off ones then. instead of redoing the same one over and over again, just add it to your conviction to do the next one better.
No. 23313 ID: 3416ec


But I'm OCD about this kind of stuff! D:<
No. 23316 ID: 175f4a

No. 23341 ID: 732129


It shows. The art is often beautiful. You could do an entire graphic novel in that style and it would probably sell well (provided the writing and story were up to your exacting standards as well).
No. 23345 ID: 3416ec


You flatter me, sir. :3
No. 23353 ID: 034ee2
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I guess Shot Trip and >>333141 have a thing for lemons.
No. 23357 ID: 175f4a

i admit, i giggled.

but still say june is pretty, so :P
No. 23358 ID: 3416ec


My Head Is A Lemon, And I Must Juice.
No. 23510 ID: 3416ec

Well folks, I got a part-time job right at the start of a new quarter at college, so updates will be slow going. I apologize ahead of time, and will try to update whenever I can.
No. 23514 ID: 5d5aec

you would have plenty of time if you didn't take so long to draw the update. one afternoon should be plenty. but NOOOOO you have to take 87 hours to draw one frame cause you restart every time you are finished.seriously dude. just post the first one, we'll all like it.
No. 23518 ID: 7b3841

Does "slow" mean "as slow as usual" or "even slower than usual"?
No. 23524 ID: 3416ec


I'd say at least faster than "Gone With The Blastwave" as a rough estimate.
No. 26403 ID: 27fe93

she is just wearing tight pants. there, crisis averted.
No. 28084 ID: 3416ec
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I'm thinking of changing up my drawing style. I really want to update efficiently, and to do so I need to streamline my drawing process. The Sarah on the left is how I do updates currently: sketching out a rough drawing in blue and then inking it on another layer. The Sarah on the right is just straight-up freehanding it, no preliminary sketching or anything.

I also want to ditch the lemon heads style in favor of a more semi-realistic profile, mostly to force myself to draw decent heads rather than circles with hair.

What do you think, sirs?
No. 28085 ID: 40cb26

New style is a definite improvement. Looks better and is faster, I don't see any drawbacks here at all.
No. 28086 ID: 2563d4

The head is substantially less off-putting.
No. 28087 ID: d677cc

The head on the right is way better, and really it looks better in general.

And it saves time? Sheesh, of course you should go for it!
No. 28093 ID: 3416ec

Alrighty. Starting next act, I'm implementing the new drawing style.

Note to self: reduce Sarah's cup size. Damn my subliminal want of boobs... >_>
No. 28095 ID: 6c4937

She's the only protagonist on /quest/ who isn't borderline DFC. I don't think it's a big issue.

And, you don't have to wait for a new act to implement the new style. Just go for it. Really, people won't mind as much as you seem to think.
No. 28100 ID: 383006

I would be so offended that I would sputter and harumph and possibly lose my monocle.
No. 28142 ID: 3416ec


There's only a handful of updates left in this act anyways. I figure I can start fresh with the new act.

Then things will REALLY kick into gear.
No. 31087 ID: 3416ec


Thoughts so far?
No. 31089 ID: 8d8786

Thoughts so far... WHY again did you want to reduce her cup size?
No. 31126 ID: 3416ec


Because large chests does not a good protagonist make.
No. 31131 ID: 252e1b


No. 31132 ID: 3416ec


A very unsubtle reference, yes.
No. 31160 ID: 034552

less betty boop, more adult-ish.

go with what you feel is the right way. but i liked the non-betty boop style '-'
No. 31167 ID: 3416ec


Unless I'm misunderstanding you, I am going with the non-Betty Boop style.

It just seems better. c:
No. 31179 ID: 44e3c5

its ok, im a expert in being misunderstood
No. 31183 ID: a7a85a

>Because large chests does not a good protagonist make.

Son, I am disappoint.
And it's not like she has giant Eiken melons slapping herself in the face. She's just average or slightly above.

Of course she's going to be chesty when you compare her to Ruby, Rynh and Tiny Deer. But in the grand scheme of things she's not in the scope of the ridiculous, and it's certainly not debilitating.
No. 31670 ID: 3416ec
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I need a break from the daily updating regiment to focus on school and to recharge my drawing batteries.

Will return Sunday.
No. 32319 ID: 3416ec
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Aaaaaaand we are back!
No. 32320 ID: 75d7a9

AAAAAAAHHHHHHH, i nostalgiad so fucking hard!
No. 32324 ID: c71597

Have you been using cars as skateboards on your free time?
No. 32528 ID: 3416ec


No, but I have been training a Tyrannosaurus to imitate John Goodman.
No. 32566 ID: 3416ec

Apologies for missing a Daily Update; drawing out a certain pose is rather difficult.
No. 32739 ID: 3416ec


And then I said "screw it" to drawing said pose and opted to draw hallways instead.
No. 32740 ID: 8c73c8

what was the pose anyway?
No. 32765 ID: 3416ec

It was a shot behind Sarah leaning out the door looking down the hall. Basically like>>/quest/286467 , only from behind.

I couldn't get her profile and hand to look right, so I opted to take the lazy route and draw her obscured by the doorway. :\
No. 32911 ID: 3416ec

The school quarter is nearing its end, and the homework is ramping up. I'll need the rest of the week for studying.

See you on Sunday!
No. 32936 ID: 252e1b


Am I right in guessing that you based the gun on a Sig Sauer P250?
No. 32940 ID: 3416ec


It's kind of an amalgam of the Five SeveN, M1911, and the PMR 30, mostly because Kel Tec makes some wacky guns.

The Black Fang Arms SAH22 is an ambidextrous, semi-auto, blowback operated handgun that mainly uses .22 magnum hollow point cartridge ammunition. Flashlight and laser aiming module come standard. It can be fitted with a suppressor. Utilizes a double stacked magazine that holds 25 rounds.

That's for all you /k/ommandos out there.
No. 32945 ID: 252e1b


Interesting choice of round, but it makes a lot of sense for space combat. Is it the Winchester version of the round or a variant of it?
No. 32946 ID: 3416ec


Technically a variant, since Winchester doesn't exist in this universe.
No. 32962 ID: b28ada


Right, so, if we want to kill anything sometime this week, make sure to impact head or heart directly.
No. 33331 ID: 3416ec
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"Awright, dat's two pizzas, one wit' pepperonis and mushrooms, da otha wit' bell peppa's and nanroot. Dat'll be eight bucks."
No. 33608 ID: 28e94e

Not really. A .22 Magnum has about the stopping power of 9x19mm. Only real problems are that it's loud as fuck when fired from a pistol, and it's kind of heavy for its class.
No. 33649 ID: b6ca92

"All right, who ordered the damn pizza! I know it wasn't me, and fuck you Derek if ya' think I'm gonna foot the bill again!"
No. 33937 ID: 3416ec

Apologies for the delays. My best friend flew up from California for spring break, and I'm hanging out with him as much as I can before he goes back.
No. 34159 ID: 3416ec
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Apologies for the lack of updates again. My buddies are back to school, so normal daily updates should resume.

In the meantime, gun porn!
No. 35851 ID: 3416ec

So, now that Act II is over, any thoughts? Questions? Feedback? Cookie recipies?
No. 35870 ID: 1854db

Turned out pretty good. There's a pretty big sandboxy element now but we have clear goals...
No. 35900 ID: 3416ec
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Here's some Behind-the-Scenes stuff. I imagine this is also how DM's map out dungeons.

This was the first draft of the medical bay, before I changed some of the layout. The rest remains accurate, though.
No. 36231 ID: 497092

I can't wait for the next chapter to being. I can't think of any to ask... so yeah! I'm lovin' it!
No. 36232 ID: 3416ec


Thank ya kindly. :)
No. 37915 ID: 3416ec

And we're back.
No. 37923 ID: 2e2675

Huzzah! :D
No. 38534 ID: 3416ec
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Phrix wanted a picture of Sarah in overalls for his birthday.
No. 38538 ID: b1f0e2

very sexy
No. 41174 ID: 3416ec

Apologies for the large delay; just got a new job and it's been busy IRL.
No. 41176 ID: a9ba96

Well, it's nice to see you back
No. 45278 ID: 210977

is this gonna update soon? i really want to see where this goes.

also, you might want to make a new op picture to reflect your new style. just saying.
No. 45325 ID: b235f9

Why change the past? If anything it presents a better yardstick.
No. 45329 ID: 210977

one other thing: what does UTR stand for?
No. 45343 ID: e79d6a

Yeah, I'm working on a two-parter update. It's hard to draw, though, when work drains all the energy out of you.

I leave the OP decision up to you guys. Should I replace it? Or keep it?


United Terran Republic.
No. 45360 ID: 252e1b

If you're on a time budget I'd prefer you invest it in the updates, myself.
No. 45376 ID: e79d6a


Will do.
No. 46469 ID: 210977

so are you going to update, or have you been bitten by the skyrim bug too?
No. 46482 ID: e79d6a


Yeah, I seem to have contracted Skyrimitis. Very bad case.
No. 46486 ID: b6edd6

I hear the only cure is dragon souls. That or mudcrab meat.
No. 48570 ID: 252e1b

>Wait 2 months
>Pick out Sarah's lunch
No. 48585 ID: e79d6a


Yeah, sorry about that. I'll speed it up in the next several updates.
No. 48586 ID: 252e1b


No, it's fine. I think it's funny.
No. 48605 ID: 210977

hooray, it returns!
No. 48618 ID: cf49fc

It's RETURNING!? I must prepare!
No. 50141 ID: 210977

hey man, glad you updated. was worried you might have abandoned this quest.
No. 50147 ID: f730a1


I'm not dropping this any time soon; I'm in it for the long haul.
No. 50590 ID: f730a1
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Finally drew up a character reference sheet. Hopefully my drawings of Sarah will be a little more consistent from now on.
No. 50712 ID: 210977


is there a naked reference sheet somewhere?

No. 50715 ID: a760e9


holy shit, I just realized she's really fucking top-heavy.
No. 50723 ID: f730a1


No. 50724 ID: d5ee6f

Rude. She'd modestly top-heavy.
No. 50726 ID: ed57e8

no she isn't, she's rather normal.
No. 50760 ID: a3b384

She doesn't look top heavy, but she is standing off balance so it feels like that.
No. 51628 ID: 210977

update please!
No. 51741 ID: 1f8505


Working on it. All in good time.
No. 54519 ID: 1f8505
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Another reference sheet.
No. 54672 ID: 210977


is there a naked ref. sheet for him too? ;)
No. 54696 ID: 1f8505


No. 54724 ID: 8db51b

well now you have to show us
No. 54769 ID: 1f8505


No. 55941 ID: 1f8505

Yet more reference.
No. 55949 ID: 7fa03c

Update, plaeeeeeeese...or else you know what will happen
No. 55956 ID: 1f8505


No. 55958 ID: 1f8505
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No. 56417 ID: 1f8505
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Hastily colored Sarah ref. for Idiom.

Subject to change later if the colors bug me.
No. 56431 ID: 1f8505

Oh hey look another reference sheet.

Just a couple more to go.
No. 56443 ID: 36562b

At last!...but this wont save sarah tonight hahahah!
No. 56622 ID: 1f8505
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Changed the name.
No. 60690 ID: 1f8505
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Just wanted to clarify that the bridge bathroom is a unisex bathroom. Rob kind of obscured the graphic on the front.

Apologies for any confusion.
No. 61174 ID: 0b214d


Question, as players in the quest what are we and what role do we have? Are we just helping in an advisory way and such, or can we do other things? Like for example, doing a psychic equivalent (effectiveness could be decided by a dice roll, per individual poster) of a punch/kick/attack to whatever the hell is the source of Sarah's hallucinations?


Hallucination: "Wooo, freaky stuff, ahoy! Come to meee!"

Quest-Players: "Hold it right there, criminal scum! Get her!" *hallucination is rushed by a mob and psychically beaten down and ejected out of Sarah's mind*

Sarah: :D "Thanks, guys!"


Of course if that makes stuff too easy, you can always limit the amount of help, besides advice, we can give.
No. 61176 ID: 1f8505


You, the players, are Sarah's subconscious and as such able to offer suggestions, ideas, strategies, and instinctual actions. You can't really force her to do stuff against her nature though, e.g. "rub your boobs on everything" or "kill yourself." At least within the realm of what is realistic.

Instinctual actions refer to when something happens suddenly and Sarah needs to react instantly, such as a bulkhead is falling on her and the suggestion "JUMP OUT OF THE WAY!" is made, she is going to jump out of the way.

Psychic powers are based on Sarah's physical and mental capabilities, at least for now. There may come a time when you (the subconscious) can directly use her abilities, because I find that idea interesting.

Hope that addresses your concerns! :)
No. 61179 ID: 0b214d


It does, thank you. :)

Anyway, do we necessarily have to have access to her psychic abilities to be able to defend her mind?
No. 61180 ID: 1f8505



Depends on what happens in the story!
No. 61181 ID: 0b214d

You're a tease. :p Anyway, I look forward to the update when it comes...
No. 64886 ID: 9f7b7f

update faaaaster!
No. 65020 ID: ad76be


hooray~ :)
No. 65054 ID: 1f8505


Just be patient, I'm chipping away at it.
No. 67402 ID: ad76be

why is that window so fragile? shouldnt ship windows be super ultra thick or something??
No. 67403 ID: 5d98c3

Amateur spaceship designer here! Why would you have windows on a spaceship? Couldn't you just have Telescreens attached to Hull Cameras?
No. 67404 ID: ad76be


but that's boring.
No. 67405 ID: 9ee360

Well, those are no good during power failures. Or if the computer glitches. Or if the cameras or screens are damaged, both of which are generally more fragile than the not-glass you should be making spaceship windows out of.
No. 67406 ID: 5d98c3

Well, apparently someone decided large fragile windows were far more sensible than either cameras or anything-but-a-massive-structural-weakpoint. Like the construction crews in Dead Space 2.
No. 67407 ID: 5d98c3

Hold a tick, why do you NEED windows on a starship anyway!? When the hell are you going to be doing navigation at orbital speeds by sight?
No. 67408 ID: ad76be


well it is a civilian ship, so I guess the peoples like looking out at things?
No. 67409 ID: c59939

real men use transparent aluminum windows, but put the bridge and other important bits in the center where hull breaches can't affect it.
No. 67411 ID: bf54a8

actually it was explained in irc, the windows ARE basically indestructible... from the outside :V

it spreads the force evenly across whole pane, but from the inside there is no counter pressure so it overloaded it.
No. 67412 ID: ad76be


No. 67413 ID: f2c20c

That is not what indestructable means. No matter how you shape the material, a bullet will do way less damage than a micrometeorite.
No. 67416 ID: 1f8505

It's a Plot Window. It's cracking due to all the dramatic tension.

(seriously though, it's just a really shoddy window and this ship is a giant bucket of bolts)
No. 67457 ID: aeaf2b


somenbody is gonna get fired over that window... or a lawsuit!
No. 67754 ID: 4d1d8e

hey, so when are you going to update? really want to see what hapens next!
No. 67759 ID: c92d04
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Did someone say LAWSUIT?
No. 67767 ID: 1f8505


No. 67777 ID: 5d98c3

It's me. I'm a lawyer specializing in faulty construction. Look, Sir Briggz assigned me an appearance, so by god I have to use it.
No. 67935 ID: c59939
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200% canon view of Devin's head behind the beard
No. 70979 ID: 58038b



lol this is the best.
No. 70982 ID: 095c28

now another two months before the next update
No. 70984 ID: 11a38f


I hope not. somebody threaten anon44's kneecaps if he doesn't update soon.
No. 71001 ID: 1f8505


No. 74567 ID: 794a2b

Kneeee caaaaaps
No. 74572 ID: 1f8505


I'm working on an update, honest!
No. 74593 ID: c3454d

re you sure they are the kneecaps? I'm sure I said porn of Sarah...
No. 74605 ID: 1f8505


...is that you, Pudding?
No. 74691 ID: 60ad76

i thought his grammar made it obvious. also threats of sarah porn.
No. 79086 ID: 1f8505
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New Wheelbot design is courtesy of sketches Psuedonym did for me.

No. 79087 ID: e9e331

the wheelbot army is almost complete sir, soon the world shall be ours for the taking.
No. 79090 ID: 955dc5

What will it take to have a pikmin army of wheelbots included in a chapter.
No. 79096 ID: 2784bd

Do want!
No. 79100 ID: 1f8505


Probably getting to the Engineering section and finding the large cabinet labeled "MAINTENANCE ROBOTS."
No. 79594 ID: 1f8505
File 139202069296.png - (27.94KB , 800x600 , June_200.png )

So hey! Upgrades are now a thing!

Also, this marks the 200th update panel I've drawn for June Quest. I would just like to take this opportunity to thank you guys for sticking with me this far. Hopefully I will update faster and get this thing going at a better pace.
No. 79830 ID: 1f8505
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Forgot to upload this.
No. 79834 ID: a87e3a

That sideways-pointing foot is too thick.
No. 79838 ID: 1f8505


Yep. Another thing for me to fix.
No. 81884 ID: 2bfcdf

The "Patient Zero" in this case is a crazy psion who is most likely killing people then raising their corpses in various forms. Nobody's been bitten then turned, the zombies just showed up and forced the survivors to hole up somewhere. There's no evidence that people can turn into a zombie without dying first. Also, we've seen that at least one zombie is controlled by the psion, which implies that the others are indirectly controlled at the very least.

So. No contagion, no galaxy-rending outbreak. Calling this a threat to the galaxy would be ridiculous even if it WAS spread by bites or whatever, because any trained military squad would be able to easily take on these zombies. They are vulnerable to bullets and aren't even faster or stronger than normal. The only galaxy-threatening zombie plagues would be airborne and produce smart zombies that aren't immediately obvious as zombies so they can infiltrate security and further spread the plague. They'd have to be physically superior in some way just to turn a profit off of killing people, too.

Oh, and don't bring up necromorphs, they aren't zombies.
No. 81891 ID: e3aff6

They probably wouldn't be able to end civilization, but if they make it to a populated area they would likely be able to take out a city or two, which would still be pretty bad. A military force can fight the zombies as they are now, but as well as the zombies mutating there is the matter of another psychic attack to turn the soldiers into more and better armed zombies. (We have not yet established whether the mass zombification was a one-shot event that missed a small minority or a continual effect that a small minority are immune to.) The doctor's logs also indicate that the psion can disrupt electronics on a ship-wide scale, which combined with the zombifying attacks would leave them only vulnerable to a group of people who are immune or to long range bombardment.
No. 82417 ID: 45e338

That man has no nads!
No. 82447 ID: 1f8505
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It's only a model.
No. 82583 ID: 1f8505

Act done. Time to work on drawing better.

Also, no more GIMP. Gonna be using Manga Studio from now on.
No. 82584 ID: 45e338

Will the uguuuu~ kawaai desu desu pantyshot quotient rise because of this switch, or will things remain suitably western?
No. 82585 ID: 1f8505


Manga Studio is a great drawing tool that has a ton of options that GIMP or Sai do not offer. So things will stay Western, as it were.

Besides, Sarah can't have pantyshots in slacks.
No. 82590 ID: 4a20fa

>You were using GIMP previously
Jesus Christ, you masochist, Anon.
No. 82597 ID: 1f8505


It was a couple years ago, and I was broke. I had to make do. :\
No. 82600 ID: 889404

>Besides, Sarah can't have pantyshots in slacks.
I believe that is what is known as a challenge.
No. 82602 ID: 1f8505


No. 82604 ID: 9dd1ee

>Besides, Sarah can't have pantyshots in slacks.


as you can clearly see from this evidence
Sarah very clearly CAN have a panty shot while wearing slacks!

and as you yourself commissioned these pictures, you were well aware of this
and in fact wanted such a thing to happen!
No. 82605 ID: 1f8505



Let the records show these are considered "wardrobe malfunctions" and not real "panty shots." In the traditional sense, panty shots are when the clothing remains fully intact and the underpants are exposed.

If an actual panty shot were to occur with pleated trousers like the ones Sarah currently wears, either the trouser waistline would need to be low enough for exposure, or high enough for exposure (the latter being statistically unlikely).

Defense rests.
No. 82606 ID: 9dd1ee


Tsk, Tsk I see the defense continues to lack evidence

please review this TV Tropes article
there is NO requirement for clothing to be intact, only for the Panties to be visible

>either the trouser waistline would need to be low enough for exposure
am I to take it the defense is admitting that a pantyshot while wearing slacks is possible in this manner?

and since the defense's original claim is "Sarah can't have pantyshots in slacks." I take it the defense is admitting defeat.

since the defense failed to provide evidence in even this regard the Prosecution will oblige.
note Sarah's visable panty waist line
No. 82612 ID: 1f8505


Defense moves to plead the 5th.
No. 83164 ID: 1f8505
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Working on redesigning Sarah.
No. 83165 ID: 0f858a

i'm seeing a worrying lack of sweaters, anon.
No. 83167 ID: 483d7f

Sheesh, give Anon44 a break, anatomy is hard. First you have to make sure the bones, muscle and other stuff fits together properly, and the skin has appropriate features. Once that's done you can finally work on putting cloth and hair over it.
Depending on how far into the process they are it might be premature to put underwear on her, let alone outerwear. That means you'll get your sweater when Anon44 is good and ready for it, if they want to, and no sooner.
No. 83223 ID: e1609c
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I fixed the eye
No. 83227 ID: 1f8505


This is some Woll Smoth stuff right here.
No. 83285 ID: ba8629

Rule of thumb for eye placement is to keep one eye-width worth of distance between the eyes.
No. 83286 ID: ba8629

Also, careful with noses. They're hard to draw the same way twice.
No. 83299 ID: 1f8505


Good to know.

Man, don't I know it. I spent a lot of time redrawing noses.
No. 86732 ID: cb63f0

so i've reread this quest and I noticed something: it seems everytime Sarah gets contacted by the entity in the ship, she gets a new power. so far these are the encounters:

~medical bay - telekinesis
~elevator - telepathy
~dream sequence - self heal

confirm or deny?
No. 86787 ID: 1f8505


Hmmmmmm! Interesting relation you've discovered!
No. 88786 ID: 1f8505
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New character sheet.
No. 88873 ID: a08637

>outfit: blouse, sweater, slacks and shoes
commando mode confirmed.
No. 88887 ID: 1f8505


I didn't list underpants because I thought it was obvious that they are worn.
No. 88888 ID: 6c42b7

Too late! Commando mode is now Double canon!
No. 88890 ID: 1f8505


No. 88892 ID: a19cd5

GET confirmed, it's TRIPLE canon.
No. 88899 ID: 1f8505


Also nope.

It's almost like I have to post the underwear reference page.
No. 88901 ID: 88960e

Where do you think you are.

Of course you need to post panty refs.
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This is all you get.
No. 88910 ID: 066a87

You decided to make her boobs bigger?
No. 88924 ID: 1f8505


Not really, no.
No. 88945 ID: a19cd5

It's an optical illusion brought on by her patented FÜtureCrappe® Suctionsweater©, now in select retail outlets across the galaxy!
No. 89023 ID: 1f8505
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Another one down.
No. 89057 ID: 1f8505
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No. 89521 ID: 066a87

I'm glad they're not red shirts!
No. 89526 ID: 1f8505


There was a time when I was tempted to color them that way...
No. 89897 ID: 1f8505
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Finally got another done.
No. 89898 ID: 1f8505


Also, that's technically a smart watch. Not a plain ol' early 90's digital watch.

Just FYI.
No. 89981 ID: 2839a0

smart watches are bad and Cherie should feel bad for having one.
smart glasses are where it's at.
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Five down, two to go.
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Hopefully the last new character sheet.
No. 125037 ID: b5fb67

Why did this thread get bumped? I have a newer one.


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