Also if it would help, I could post future pictures with texts isolated from everything in here.

Oh they're pseudo-runes, not real runes. No wonder I didn't see them in the big wikipedia page on runic languages.

>>141832
It's fine, image manipulation is part of the puzzle imo.

>>141831
Nah, it's cool. Like I said in >>/quest/1085670, I just wanted to know what they were, thinking they were somehow lore relevant. I myself hardly knew what those runes were and what their significance was before I found them on Wikipedia. I had no intention of accusing you of inserting Nazi symbolism when I made that post, to be clear on my part. Probably should've put more thought and context before posting it in hindsight. Apologies.

All that aside, I'm absolutely loving this quest's narrative direction. The Lovecraftian twist honestly took me by surprise! Can't wait to see more from you!

If theres an image were having a mental chew on, we'll probably post a copy here.
To avoid cluttering the story flow.

Quick aside:
I am enjoying this quest.
Looking forward to seeing where it goes.

>>141834
I didn't get the feeling I was being accused, just wanted to make sure I got it out there once I realized the origins. All good.

Also thanks for the appreciation! Makes running it worth it.

What story is told an infinite amount of times, and is never any different? Doesn't seem like she's only talking about the banality of mortal life. Maybe I'm reading too much into this. Would it help to tell her that every generation is a new iteration in a genetic algorithm going back billions of years? Why was she suddenly having an existential crisis in the middle of cutting some dude? Did she feel like she couldn't stop from killing him? Or like she can't stop him from dying of something other than old age? Ultimately all that matters is she doesn't want to kill him, but her reaction is very... puzzling.

>>141840
It does seem a bit strange, doesn't it?

Just want to say, that's an adorable outfit for Tanna. Yay Ponchos!

>>141853
Lol thanks, I had a lot of fun drawing that one. One day she might have clothes to draw on the regular.

>>/quest/1086039
I forgot to respond to the "significance of the eyes" portion of this post, I'll do it next set. It was an important question to ask.

>>141854

I was going for her reaction to be like "Yea yea... wait, what was that part about my eyes?" so... mission accomplished!

I don't know that it's a great idea to bring up those strange visions she's only half aware of, though. Don't want to expose too much, too early. Maybe better to dance around the subject a bit, until we learn more or it becomes more urgent?

Well, just my thought on it. The eyes really are a nice touch though.

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Another good update.

In the spirit of feedback and communication, i just wanted to say
This post

>>1085983

Makes me smile,
Every time i scroll past it to check the new happenings.
I know its just a tone setting,,light hearted aside, but its adorable.

>>141874
Thanks! Sorry for taking a bit longer with this one, ended up having a lot of real life stuff going on, and I'm a pretty slow drawer.

I love scrolling past that particular image too, gotta sprinkle in the relief once in a while.

>>141876
No apologies needed.
Entirely understandable.
Always worth the wait.

Im relatively new im regards to commenting but the folk here strike me as inordinately patient types and its a good example to follow.

Hope youre doing well.

I just want to say that I love this quest!

>>141882
Thank you! It means a lot to read that, hope I can keep meeting expectations.

So for how I plan on doing combat, I'm generally going to take suggestions and try to mash them together and act like Tanna. Tanna is decently smart with her category 3 intelligence, so she'll usually pick try to make the best option out of everything.

I like to codify things as well, so below is a reference document of stuff that I’ll try to set in stone in relation to this quest.


https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ddQBe4rbaabuj_iRA-ig6LbSgBUWltFjToTDtGsmoqc/edit?usp=sharing

>>141925
Sounds fair.
The first round went well.
Different suggestions bled into each other nicely.
I like the dice mechanics here and prior.
Good fit for the quest.

Next update is going to take a little bit. It's a bigger one, and I got a few things irl I gotta do.

Thanks for the heads up.

Will be patiently waiting.

Jeez, the response to the last update were super in depth. I just finished story boarding them. Thanks for the engagement! Now I just gotta start drawing it out lol.

There any questions mechanics wise by the way? As I'm going along, I thought of some improvements to the system I could make, in particular towards spells. I'll ask about this again after chapter 1 is done, not going to change anything now.

I think in terms of systems it seems all fine.

Considering things, the only area im a little blank on would be the casting.
Namely how many times. Id it a set amount on daily refresh or a loosely defined capacity that can be stretched at the cost of inducing fatigue and associated debuffs?
How closely does it hew to PF rules?
Stringently or adopting the general shape of it in regard to spell levels, casting types and domains of power?

All of the above is for my own clarification.
As i said, the systems work and are serving the story well. No adjustment necessary.

I like the magic so far. We got a lot of use out of simple illusion spells.

The scroll of paralyzation only working on humanoids is odd. I guess you are planing to have a big monster that could be cheesed with paralyzes.

I'm a bit concern with the "cognitohazard" mechanic. I've see this getting abused and ending up very stupid in SCP articles.
The concept work best when it's a immutable true of the universe that goes against normal sanity. A more realistic version is the "forbidden knowledge" that is more cultural dependent and hard to talk about in the abstract (if you ever came across one of those you know).
In this case it seem to be the influence of deities over mortals, that's fine as long as the gods are not too human in behavior. I guess it's a literal "when you stare into the abyss the abyss stares back" kind of deal: the gods react to be contacted by the mortal observing their symbols.

>>142024
At the moment, it's only adopting the general shape of the Pathfinder 1e ruleset. I wasn't sure when starting the quest if it would be too complicated or not for readers, since 1e is fairly complex. So I wanted to make things a lot simpler. But I think I was probably being a little to careful, I'll probably be slowly adding complexity as things go on that follow a little more in line with Pathfinder.

I kinda like making a system up as I go along though, so I don't think it's ever going to be 1 to 1 Pathfinder.

>>142029
The scroll of paralyzation I probably should've just let you use on anyone. It's a Pathfinder holdover of "Hold Person", which can only be used on humanoid typed creatures.

As for the whole cognitohazard thing. Honestly, when I first started I had no idea what that was lol. I can't really go to much into what I plan on doing with things, but I'm going to try to not punish or negatively affect the main character for you all just talking about things. As things go on, I'm hoping stuff will be understood more. I love seeing theories on what's going on, and it kinda makes me think sometimes if those theories were actually the case.

>>142031
sound choice.

A degree of quick familiarity for fresh readers, but freedom to adapt to needs and setting.

Hahahah, I like making people look things up! I win points when that happens, see?

;)

Hah, happy to oblige. Was an interesting topic, has given me a few different ideas

Hi Capitulize! A bunch of questden authors have been doing a card duel thread in the style of Yu-Gi-Oh https://questden.org/kusaba/quest/res/1034777.html and we were wondering if you wanted to have Aldequest represented in some way as a character/trap/spell card? Thanks!

PS, been enjoying the quest so far!

>>142132
That sounds fun, sure! Do you need anything from me? I can pop into the Discord if needed.

Thanks! And your permission is all that was needed. We'll design a fun little fanart card based on something or someone from Aldequest ourselves that the duelist characters can use in quest at a future update, so jumping into discord isnt necessary (unless you want to design a card for us)

Hope you look forward to what we make! Ill let you know when an Aldequest card shows up!

Took a little longer than I would've liked lol, one of the images was a bit higher effort than normal, but I figured color would be important there.

Had a really good time making this update though, hope you all enjoy!

Do you want some help with that? I could do something like coloring.

>>142200
Ah thanks for the offer, maybe after chapter 1, but I started this to challenge myself. Wanted to learn how to draw. I can't accept help for the moment.

>>142205
Ok. When you think my help is welcome just let me know. And if you want some kind of contact information for this.

>>142207
Yeah for sure, if anyone wants to really, I'm capitulize on discord. Don't mind talking.

>>142213
I've sent a request. ...I think. When it's about Discord I'm a luddite.

Next update's got a lot to it, the wait might be slightly longer.

>>142369
Eagerly but patiently waiting.
Bake it as long as you need.

The dancing tanna gif was adorable

>>142523
I love drawing this weasel doing silly things.

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Hey! Sorry for the wait, had a lot going on, but I'm almost done with the next update! I wanted to get it done this weekend, but I'm not sure if I'm gonna get that goal done. Here's a little sneak peek though!

So does the song response thing work as intended or is writing more lyrics necessary?

I can write in more of the lyrics if that would help!

>>143018
Whatever you wish to do! General intent is enough though, writing more lyrics isn't necessary.

Nice animation this update.
Also, that image was adorable.
You know the one.

>>143042
Lol thanks, I figured some cuteness was needed after all the recent series of dark vibes.

Christmas tanna over in the secret santa is gonna fill that requirement too.

>>143137
She's even wearing pants this time!

Nice crowd scene in the secret santa, such a fun image

>>143140
Thanks!

I'll post the sprites tomorrow in the fanart thread if people would like them, they were a lot of fun to make.

I also commend you for the dedication. It is a lovelingly detailed scene and the Tanna's inner monologue is pretty funny as well!