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133236 No. 133236 ID: 7ae189

Just realized that I should probably make one of these. Discuss away
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No. 133237 ID: 9876c4

I appreciate that the First Precinct is bound by red tape and procedure, and can't just cowboy it's way out of trouble.

...although a demon in the 80's doing Miami Vice antics might be fun too.
No. 133246 ID: 8fab7a

Hah, yeah. Good sign you're the good guys when TRY NOT TO FUCK UP DUE PROCESS becomes a part of your set of goals.
No. 133247 ID: b1b4f3

You're pretty good at this quest thing, have you run one before?
No. 133248 ID: 7ae189
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Cheers mates, I'm glad you're enjoying it so far. The life of a law-abiding detective is a hard but rewarding one. Enjoy some proto-BANs.

Many many moons ago I lurked tgchan and tried a few quests, it was a long time ago and I was pretty bad at it then though. I guess the secret to improvement was just doing nothing quest-related for the better part of a decade
No. 133251 ID: 9876c4

I'm always really impressed when people with a different default language make storytime happen in English here.

Maybe Ban will get to play with his trusty shotgun in due time...
No. 133263 ID: eb1fcc

Gotta say, I quite like this quest so far. I thought from the thumbnail it was gonna be a modstaff shitpost quest but this is just interesting well-written cop drama.

Keep up the good work, I'm engaged with this strange mystery.

I get the feeling STEVE isn't as much of an asshole as he lets on, either.
No. 133357 ID: 7ae189
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Sorry for the slight delay mates, the 4th of July has been turning into a bit of a bender. There should be at least one update this weekend, then we'll be back to business as usual.
No. 133372 ID: eb1fcc

yo, any chance we can get some color notes on Ban and the crew?
No. 133378 ID: 7ae189
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Here's most of the prominent folks so far, if you want any others as we go I've got you.
No. 133402 ID: 7ae189
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A bit of a heads-up, from here until mid-August I'll be in the process of moving out of my current apartment and into a new one a few states away. I think updates will stay pretty consistent throughout, but there might be a bit of a gap in August when things get especially hectic.
No. 133408 ID: eb1fcc

wow, so Ban himself is just stark white?
No. 133412 ID: dba489
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Indeed, it's one of the more salient features of people like himself.
No. 133414 ID: 83bd82

Is having totally white skin a characteristic only demons have? Because I notice STEVE and the guy on the far right both have totally white skin.
No. 133415 ID: dba489
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STEVE is in fact a demon. As the son of Joe Durst and ALICIA, you could say that John takes after his mother... Speaking of STEVE, I found this early draft where I planned on actually making him a human, and even angrier.
No. 133428 ID: 9876c4

This is not a criticism, but STEVE seemed to have one of the more human faces so far.
No. 133445 ID: eb1fcc

yeah without this color ref I never woulda guessed steven to be a demon, lol
No. 133453 ID: 8fab7a

I suspected. There was a pretty good hint in the naming convention!
No. 133455 ID: b1b4f3

Oh, all demons have allcaps names?
No. 133477 ID: 7ae189
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Another proto-BAN, I believe this is the oldest one in my sketchbooks. If I remember right, the original idea was Ace Attorney but in hell.

Indeed, it's the most consistent way to discern them from other critters.
No. 133480 ID: eb1fcc

oh, haha I assumed STEVE was capitalized because they always just mentally inflect his name at this point


"Ugh, STEVE. I can't believe STEVE is doing STEVE things again!"
"I know! Ugh, STEVE."
No. 133498 ID: 7ae189
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There is definitely some extra venom whenever his name is pronounced by our 1P companions, haha.
No. 133506 ID: 8fab7a

Wait, those are actual pig snouts? I thought they just had really big noses/nostrils.
No. 133507 ID: 5b93d3

Loving the quest (always a sucker for police procedurals), and loving the Patlabor/Headgear-esque art style!
No. 133522 ID: dba489
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They are bonafide snouts! There are a few critters in between humans and demons that also inhabit our city. Pigmen are one of the more common ones.
No. 133612 ID: 19da02

None of the demons have mouths, right?

BTW Love the quest so far! I think you have an absolutely perfect blend of holy shit stuff happening and also time for players to breathe and plan.

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