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130432 No. 130432 ID: f7fe08

I'm not really sure how these things go but here it is.
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No. 133869 ID: df76b1

This stuff is gorgeous.

I always feel very blessed when artists who could make it professionally come here to tell us stories for free.
No. 133870 ID: a34b8a
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What are some things that you guys enjoy about safety first? and what are some things that you think could be improved on?

Thanks dude.
No. 133872 ID: cffa8e

I enjoy the apparently somewhat amoral setting, the way you write fun kids, and the dynamic everyone has with each other. great characters that play well off each other are a must for quest content and I'm ESPECIALLY interested to find out exactly how much dirty biz mommy dearest used to get up to and why she left.

as for things to improve, it feels like we've been in the prologue for a while. more likely that's because of the update stagger than an actual pacing issue, but I would like to get into some more action soon, and not of the "internal organizational strife" variety!

No. 133874 ID: df76b1

With the understanding that males are not safety scouts, do they exist and will they ever show up in the setting?
No. 133876 ID: a34b8a

I agree hopefully we can get to some action soon.
Yes in fact they are part of the organization as well. One of my goals of this new thread is to introduce some male characters, into the mix.
No. 133880 ID: c5d2fe

There's a lot I like, and very little I don't. I love the artwork, the pacing (that is, the storytelling pace, not the update pace because WANT MOAR), the setting, all that. About the only thing I don't like is, as stated, the update pace, but that'd be kinda unfair to blame you, IMO.

We've had opportunities to kill before, but I just don't think we've had good opportunities or real desires to. Do I think we'll end up in a no-kill run? No, but I would prefer to leave da murda to incredibly vile individuals, not rats looking to escape from a torturous lab or a dim muscle idiot who's probably not that evil at heart.
No. 133881 ID: df76b1

I for one intend to play Bonnie as wholly chaotic stupid good, with a childlike innocence and desire to do the right thing coupled with a complete and total lack of planning or foresight.

Hopefully, watching the collateral damage amount soar will be seen as a feature not a bug.
No. 133882 ID: c5d2fe

That sounds like a plan to me!
No. 133883 ID: eb1fcc

pretty much what I'm hoping to see too.
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That's how I assumed things would go.
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look at this funny poll that will have no bearings on the near future whatsoever.

No. 134255 ID: eb1fcc

I voted rifle-lance because that sounds like a fun weapon
No. 134271 ID: df76b1

I voted small guns, but I don't know who I'm picking for.
No. 134367 ID: a34b8a
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Update's moving a bit slow cause its a huge update imo really excited to put this one out for a multitude of reasons
No. 134368 ID: a34b8a
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also some art
No. 134369 ID: b5fb67


Awesome art!
No. 134374 ID: eb1fcc

damn, giving us a whole chunk of animation here with your return, radical
No. 134375 ID: a34b8a
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now I can properly introduce Scarlett
Thanks anon
No. 134376 ID: a34b8a
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But I'm not done yet
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whoops forgot to post
No. 134378 ID: a34b8a
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No. 134379 ID: a34b8a

Song by polistrumentist
No. 134380 ID: b5fb67


I'm freaking out over how great this is
No. 134381 ID: df76b1

Getting some major Sam and Max vibes.
No. 134382 ID: eb1fcc

jazzy superhero themes and a new shortstack, really activating the neurons here friend
No. 134386 ID: c5d2fe

I'm not remotely joking- you need to PITCH THIS AS AN ANIMATED SERIES. You have the concept art. Write up a quick series bible and start shopping this thing around. It's too good to just leave be. Or I dunno, try to get it crowdfunded and maybe do a short episode...and then use THAT.

You've got something special here, I'd love to see it expanded.
No. 134390 ID: eb1fcc

calm down there sparky, takes a lot more than that to get an animated series going haha

there's definitely some interesting stuff here, but getting scripts and storyboards together for a pilot is a hell of an investment, not to mention comprehensive character sheets, background notes, etc.

don't take this as dicking on the idea, I'd watch it for damn sure, but the workload is typically pretty nuts
No. 134391 ID: c5d2fe

Oh, I know- I've actually taken a crack at it before and did some minor work for an animation studio a couple years back. I'm just saying I think there's enough good stuff here that something could happen.
No. 134399 ID: a34b8a

Thanks I'm not sure i have the animation chops just yet to do something like that tho. A lot of the stuff in the quest i'm learning to animate for the first time.
No. 134400 ID: c5d2fe

Ahaha, I'd hope that if you managed an animated series that you wouldn't be doing it alone. That's a hell of a task and not one I'd ask of anyone at any point.
No. 134516 ID: a34b8a
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No. 134517 ID: c5d2fe

Jeez, we're really the majority of the direct damage, huh?
No. 134518 ID: c5d2fe

Also I thought our Agi was C? Or am I tripping?
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you might be thinking of the old stats [spoiler[before they were immediately retconned[/spoiler]
No. 134520 ID: df76b1
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I feel like Gully and Bonnie would probably be instant best friends if they met up.
No. 134521 ID: a34b8a

Punch is the best power, she looks cool.

Light ATK - a quick attack that does small dmg

Heavy ATK - a slow hard hitting attack, makes you move at half speed


Defend - Block

First Aid- Heal

All bonnie’s moves that make contact cause extra shock dmg

Backup - Summon someone to help for a turn
Rose - Rose comes to deal a heavy blow and inflict burning on enemies
Rathoney - Rathoney summons a bunch of rats to do rat things


Poison - Poisons an enemy to deal damage overtime, deals very little immediate damage..

Lethal injection - Marks an enemy slowing them and causing them to take extra damage from any attacks for a short while.

Vaccinate- Heal any status ailments on a target.
No. 134522 ID: b1b4f3

Uh, I'm guessing the Bonnie and Scarlett sections there are for skills that each character has, and Engage/Protect are universal actions that everyone has.
Which means the update picture has Poison listed in the wrong spot.
No. 134523 ID: a816de

Its for everyone's unique abilities or skills ehere poison is unique to Scarlett
No. 134716 ID: c5d2fe

Everything still okay? Hoping it's just been a bit of a work delay.
No. 134782 ID: c5d2fe

Is this quest dead? That's unfortunate. I really liked it.
No. 134784 ID: b5fb67


It's not dead, just on hiatus. FUN is trying to catch up their external Safety First website before continuing on.
No. 134785 ID: b5fb67

Also if you wanna check out their cool website:

No. 134786 ID: c5d2fe

Oh, wow! I didn't know this was a thing! Neat!
No. 134824 ID: a34b8a

Things will continue in 2 weeks.
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oh heres some funny pictures
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No. 134841 ID: b5fb67

These are all excellent and I love them.
No. 134850 ID: df76b1

There's every bit as much character in your still images as in the gifs. That blows my mind.
No. 134925 ID: a34b8a
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how would you feel if safety switched to a style more akin to this
No. 134927 ID: 07ed53

Whatever style you wanna go with is AOK by me
No. 134930 ID: f8fa51

I would not prefer it, if I was given the choice.
No. 134931 ID: 9a2966

Go by what works for you!
No. 134933 ID: 0fae41

It's cool, do this style, do any style. Heck, why not keep changing it up when you want to try new ones.
No. 134934 ID: c5d2fe

Doesn't seem too different. If it's easier on you, sure.
No. 134938 ID: b5fb67


I love all your styles, so I am down for whatever you got planned, my dude.
No. 134939 ID: df76b1

Im pretty confident you can vary style while maintaining quality.

go for it.
No. 134958 ID: 777990

I think the thing that makes it most interesting and really set the art apart is the occasional really beautiful animated frames.
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No. 135034 ID: b5fb67


You sure did!
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No. 135237 ID: c5d2fe

Gotta admit, for a tutorial fight, I'm not 100% sure how we win this.

Also great art.
No. 135271 ID: a34b8a

This is the DIE fight
No. 135272 ID: b5fb67


Aw man, I hate RPG fights you're supposed to lose!
No. 135273 ID: df76b1

De agony of Die Fight
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School's done for me, so expect more frequent/smaller updates hopefully.
No. 135622 ID: 9a2966

Oooh, neat.
No. 135633 ID: c5d2fe

Say, is that Bonnie model rigged? If it is, can I get the download to try and animate it?
No. 135634 ID: a34b8a

It is not unfortunately.
No. 135636 ID: c5d2fe


...can I get it to practice rigging then? (Don't actually have to, just shooting my shot.)

On another note, I know it came from a suggestion, but does Molly actually know any martial arts? Like, I could see her (and Bonnie for that matter) basically participating in youth classes for taekwondo/boxing. It'd be fun.
No. 135637 ID: a34b8a


Here you go. If you can figure out how to make it work.

Molly is actually a black belt, which is why she's so confident she can take down the glasses lady herself, and Bonnie is taught boxing by her fitness crazed mom
No. 135638 ID: c5d2fe



*Screams like a little girl*

More of a Maya fan meself, but...alright, let's try and make this work.
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This one, however, is!
No. 135640 ID: eb1fcc

preview breaks for some reason but the fullview shows the full rotation, lmao
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Look at this familiar scaredy-cat.

Thanks again for this dude.
No. 135677 ID: eb1fcc

you bet homie
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Now i can show this stuff off
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at one point i was gonna have bonnie lean more into her descent into ratdom, which is why she had red eyes and crawled on all fours for a brief moment
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No. 135692 ID: eb1fcc

never too late, plenty of time for a sick power form to develop
No. 135711 ID: c5d2fe

I was thinking she was going to kind of evolve a Rat Queen kinda pesudo-power.
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I'm curious: https://strawpoll.com/d2gz74wo6

Also some old art when these 2 were good guys.
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new bonnie
No. 135758 ID: c5d2fe

Awesome. Hope you've got big plans for her.

Also, the new peeps in the update give me some BIG Dead Cell (from MGS2) vibes.
No. 135764 ID: df76b1

No. 135765 ID: a2493c

Bonnie becomes a v-tuber
No. 135969 ID: 30aff5

I can’t show you captain Honey’s power. cause I haven’t thought of it yet
No. 135970 ID: 2d57a3

She wears yellow, her name is "Honey."

Maybe the power to cause happiness and good demeanor....or something to do with custard.
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I admit I thought she was just The Pain, but friendlier.
No. 135992 ID: c1b91d

I was thinking more a toned down Fat Man from MGS2. Like, instead of explosions it was sparklers, or plasma. Something to do with heat.
No. 135993 ID: c1b91d

Oh wait, it just hit me.

Sterilization. Anything she touches is 'cleaned' at will of specifically dust and viral microorganisms. Not perfect but still cool.
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