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248501 No. 248501 ID: 29e68e

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No. 251089 ID: cd2f9c
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251089

using his dwarven strength Qwern rip's his tool from the stone, but just as soon the wall explodes under the sheer massiveness of your "a"
in a small and poorly drawn explosion of rock dust and gold!

rendering got messed up sorry all I have is this, also explosions are hard to draw
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No. 251092 ID: c71597

>>251089
Looks like the pick made it. Retrieve the loose golden ore and the pick. Then get bac to work. Although it might be time for a drinking pause to celebrate this epic feat of strength. Soon you won't need the pick, you can simply punch the ore loose from the wall.
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No. 251099 ID: cd2f9c
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251099

-I'm not quite sure if that was me... but I'm gonna tell every one that It was.

but just then I glanced into the newly formed crevasse. a gust of stale wind hit me and I saw some thing horrifying. it was a girl, a young girl, she had golden hair and a mask, her chest and hands were nailed to the wall behind her. symbols of blood glowed all around her. and then as if I wasn't scared shitless enough, she started breathing, a long broken hum...
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No. 251100 ID: 31e5bb

try to stay calm. look at the runes. knowing if this is a good thing sealed by evil peeps or a bad thing would help. also how to strengthen or remove the bindings depending.
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No. 251102 ID: 1854db

>>251099
Start running. Don't stop until you find someone in charge and tell them to bring the military to find out what that thing is.
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No. 251103 ID: c71597

>>251099
Oh fuck. You might just have unleashed some sort of horrifying fortress destroying elder god or something.

Should be safe as long as the stakes are still there though. See if she can hear you, and whatever she says don't pull out those stakes.
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No. 251105 ID: 05da83

>>251100
Fuck that!
>>251102
This! So much this!
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No. 251107 ID: d4f784

>>251099
SEAL OFF THE PASSAGEWAY AND DON'T TELL ANYONE!
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No. 251109 ID: 31e5bb

guys, if we run the moment anything scary shows up, how can we be brave enough to protect cunny?
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No. 251111 ID: cd2f9c
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251111

>>251102
I turn quick, My feet want to run, but I hear something that sends a chill down my spine. "KaraKara!" My eyes wander to the source of the sound. The mask had fallen my sight focuses fast on the girl, but I had missed it, her transformation was complete. her golden hair along with her skin and robes turned black, her mouth menaces with spikes of teeth, the runes had just finished seeping into her eyes. a cold scream sends echos down the shaft.
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No. 251112 ID: 426944

Hold on to your pick and brace yourself!
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No. 251117 ID: 31e5bb

show this demon what all that miner has shown you! that is, how to swing it really fucking hard!
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No. 251120 ID: 8a6625

shit brix
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No. 251127 ID: b261c9

>>251111
well it look like you finaly hit an adamantine
veine, you now get the fun :D

start to run now if you want to live
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No. 251128 ID: 426944

Is she still nailed down? If so you might be able to get the mask back on her!
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No. 251129 ID: c71597

>>251111
Ohhhh fuck. Grab that pick and prepare to sell yourself dearly for all dwarfkind. Maybe a martial trance will overtake you or something.
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No. 251130 ID: 3258ed

>>251102
um. politely say hi.

you got your pick, right? step away slowly.

are you sure noone found a vein of adamantium?
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No. 251136 ID: cd2f9c
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251136

>>251120
Brix Shat.

the nails seep into her flesh and the falls to the ground, our eyes meet and I Get The Fuck Out of there, I can see my pick on the ground. as I run to it I can hear her scream

-NURTNODDERACSMIESAELPPLEH!
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No. 251138 ID: c71597

>>251136
Holy shit! Move those stubby legs faster. You had better beat the dwarven speed record now, no other dorf may have had so much motivation to move so fast.
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No. 251139 ID: 3258ed

this sounds ancient and not that friendly.

its time to run back to the nearest joint section and collapse the cave.
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No. 251141 ID: 31e5bb

wait what.

she said
"help please im scared don't run"

yell "if you are friendly then stop immediately"
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No. 251142 ID: 05da83

Okay. What? Why is that thing asking us to not run and help it?
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No. 251143 ID: b261c9

>>251142
because she need help and we are running away,
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No. 251146 ID: 05da83

>>251143

Are you some kind of stupid?
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No. 251147 ID: cd2f9c
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251147

I grab my pick and turn around once more.
my eyes are burning again, only now my instincts aren't telling me to choke goblins there telling me to run, against my better judgment I try talking to the beast

-Listen I will help you but you have to stop!

-ESAELPPLEHPLEH!

as she continues on her steady pace she looses shape and consumes her surroundings.

-STRUHTI!

Its two feet away from me now and I cant control my legs, I dash off at an alarming rate.
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No. 251148 ID: cd2f9c

dangnamit! forgot to color the pick
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No. 251149 ID: 445c48

Fuck it, run. Grab your pick on your way out.
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No. 251150 ID: 31e5bb

run then. you offered help and it refused. you need the warrior dwarves.
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No. 251151 ID: 05da83

Ah. Now I get it! The girl is still in there with the demon! She wants to die!

Run as fast as your stubby legs can carry you and scream as loud as you can! That should alert someone that there is something wrong.
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No. 251153 ID: b261c9

>>251147
folowing starburst intuition she is saying
"help help please" then "it hurts"
it is obvius that you can't help her alone, tell her that you will come back whit help than go get some
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No. 251154 ID: 8a6625

>>251153
I somehow doubt qwern can understand backwards talking, lets not metagame too much, also go get some marksdwarves up in this bitch
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No. 251156 ID: cd2f9c
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251156

I grasp the door and try to open it, but it jams, I can feel breathing down my back, swinging my weapon I turn to face it. it is very close...

-SEYEEMASEHTEVAHEW

the only word so far that she didn't yell. the door opens, and just as fast I rush up the stairs

-REHTORB!

it screams as it follows.
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No. 251158 ID: 8a6625

>>251156
qwern is there things about you that you forgot to tell us?
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No. 251162 ID: 31e5bb

you need to turn off your eyes. it is gaining power somehow.
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No. 251164 ID: c71597

>>251156
Whatever this thing is saying it also seems to want to eat you. Run faster!
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No. 251169 ID: 8a6625

>>251164
omnomnomnom
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No. 251170 ID: cd2f9c
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251170

I Run, Run, Run not stopping, I think I dropped my pick, its erelevant now, something tugs my leg and I fall face first in the stairs. as I look up I see Guss lending me a hand, no need to tell me, Im already grasping for his aid.
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No. 251171 ID: 31e5bb

reach, run.
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No. 251172 ID: b261c9

>>251170
he has red eyes to
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No. 251173 ID: cd2f9c

shit I thin my scanner just broke
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No. 251175 ID: b261c9
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251175

>>251173
SSSHHHHHHIIIIIIIIIIITTTTTTTTT
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No. 251177 ID: cd2f9c
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251177

ITS FIXED FOR NO REASON!!!
THANKS JESUS
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No. 251179 ID: c71597

>>251170
Ask him for that axe so you can cut yourself free so he can pull you up. Lets hope that you don't have to cut off your leg.

>>251177
Buddy Jesus always comes through alongside with Bishie Mohammed.
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No. 251181 ID: cd2f9c
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251181

as soon as I grab his mighty hand he rips me from the monsters grasp at the loss of my shoe. I dash throught the door at my nimble speed, but I notice that hes not folowing me

-Urist, run. I can follow you. GO! find your girl you have to live!

-but?

-I cant we monsters have to fight. listen the elves are planing some thing stupid and it will fail, I have to stop this here and now. If I die its all up to you, Id I die only your heart can stop this madness!

he rushes into the darkness and silence regains the room.
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No. 251184 ID: 31e5bb

uncork a barrel of beer, shove a cloth into it, throw it down the stairs. MEGA MOLOTOV!
then run.
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No. 251187 ID: 31e5bb

>>251184
>light the cloth on fire before throwing
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No. 251189 ID: cd2f9c
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251189

>>251184
doing that would only reduce the chances of Guss making it. never the less killing it in a horrible and flaming manner is very tempting, but I cant let his sacrifice be in vain. I must run. for cunny. that being said im only a few steps from the front door.
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No. 251191 ID: b261c9

>>251189
go for it and don't look back
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No. 251192 ID: 8a6625

>>251184
beer doesn't have a high enaugh alcohol percentage to burn, besides, it would oubviously kill guss to.

also did he say "we monsters" what the fuck is going on with guss?

run forn now, learn all in time
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No. 251194 ID: 8a6625

>>251189
posted late, oh well.

get the fuck out of there
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No. 251196 ID: c71597

>>251189
Run faster. Even if the hateful glare of the sun is likely to cause you to feel an exteme sickness at first.
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No. 251197 ID: 31e5bb

just keep running then.
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No. 251201 ID: cd2f9c
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251201

My body launches forwards but is yanked back. I try not to look knowing full well what has me

-TSIRUYRROSOSMIELBIRROHSTI

the monster turns me around and clings to me, my face is pressed deep in her bosom... of darkness!

-REHTORBEMETAHTNODYRROSMIYRROSMIYRROSMI!

A loud "click" can be heard from above

-NAMTAHTLLIKIMIHLLIKI!
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No. 251203 ID: 500736

>>251189
wait your trash. you need at least your gold.
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No. 251210 ID: c71597

>>251201
Oh fuck. It can survive the light. Quick, jump up and heabutt it. Hopefully it will release you so you can get outside and trigger the remote doomsday weapon that wipes out the fortress for the saftey of all.
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No. 251212 ID: 31e5bb

engage dwarven might and break free.
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No. 251228 ID: f0b4bc

>>the monster turns me around and clings to me, my face is pressed deep in her bosom... of darkness!

Give her the titty twister of light.
It's the only way.
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No. 251230 ID: cd2f9c
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251230

I try to break free but her hold is to strong, CLANG! The metal bars seal of any escape root for me and the demon. her body is cold, but her tears are warm they trickle down the side of my head. her screams of terror had turned into twisted sobs. thinking back on what she just said it takes me a moment to figure out what she meant.
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No. 251231 ID: c71597

>>251230
Aww crap. Your escape has been sealed. Hug her back instead and pat her on her back while telling her that all is going to be ok.
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No. 251232 ID: 31e5bb

welp, only thing left is TRY to play nice.
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No. 251234 ID: d677cc

>>251230
She seems kind of like she could use a hug.

Plus I don't know what the hell else you're supposed to actually do.
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No. 251237 ID: 500736

hope for insane plot device to save you and end this in hot (cold?) kinky sex
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No. 251239 ID: cd2f9c
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251239

a little away elves are talking...

-sir the trap worked she is inside

-I am well aware Tim

-but look sir there's a dorf in there with her!

-yes I can see that

-Sir! we cant let him escape with out the target escaping

-TIM! im not blind I know that if you don't shut up right now I will cut off your dick and feed it to your mother!

-...

-good. wow you don't look to good, you ok Tim?

-euh.. no... but thats not important, what about the dorf?

-he'll be a good sacrifice to the monster

-...
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No. 251241 ID: cd2f9c

im out of Hd pics, that last one was just a drawing of an elf that was on my desk, tim and background were improvised
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No. 251242 ID: 31e5bb

Guss was right, the elves are dumbasses. hug girl hope for best.
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No. 251249 ID: c71597

>>251239
Hmm, this seems to be quite moronic of them. This cage probably won't stop her.

Well then, hug the girl and try to console her. Possibly start crying a bit yourself over the hopelessness of the situation. Although giving those leafloving bastards the satisfaction of seeing a dorf crying isn't acceptable. Pray to BeardBeard for strength instead, the strength to deal with these two treeloving deaviants like he did in the past.
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No. 251255 ID: cd2f9c
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251255

Guss is dead? and it wasn't liver poisoning... im surprised. I think I understand what he meant now. I hug her tightly and mutter soft words thought her breasts.

-I don't know what there gonna do to you, but im not gonna let them. say do you have a name?

-EMAN?

-you don't?.. I guess I'll call you Goldie. you like that name?

-EIDLOG?

-yah. its sounds good on you. much better than monster.

-REHTORB?

-you keep calling me that... I guess I can be your brother.

-EMTCETORPLLIWREHTORB?

-yah of course... sis.

the end

now before you all start telling me about how lousy my ending is please wait for me to wright this next post. it explanes everything. and Im sorry to every one about the graphic quality of the last scene.
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No. 251256 ID: 31e5bb

not bad end, just confused. what happened?
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No. 251258 ID: cd2f9c

now allow me to explane. Qwern quest was suppost to be a oneshot. and was joyfully dragged along by Cunny who was not supposed to be important.
moar over. and here's were it gets interesting... Qwern quest is in fact one of many prequels to my much larger JamesQuest.
that being said every thing you all did and said are regarded and will have changed what might and might not happen in JamesQuest.
Ex:since you managed to not get a badending Qwern may (depending on your choices) be in James Quest, he may also never be important or maybe a rival? who knows?
so since im not quite done ready for JamesQuest I will start a new quest soon. It may be another prequel It may not. here's waht im gonna do for you all. tomorow (im to sick to do anything else today) I will post in this thread (lets hope its still alive tomorow) 3-5 ideas for new quests and you may vote for wich one I should do. sounds fun right? see you all tomorow
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No. 251259 ID: b261c9
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251259

Goldie, her name was Goldie
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No. 251268 ID: 31e5bb

>>251258
ah, that explains everything. you rushed the ending.
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No. 251290 ID: cd2f9c

>>251268
nono don't get me wrong the ending was preplanned. there were infact 5 possible endings, you got good ending1. Qwern does not get killed by Goldie, but is a little afraid of her. alternatively you could have been more open an loving, as well as dead, or killed in the mine.
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No. 251294 ID: 8a6625

well, I liked it. looking foward to JamesQuest.

>>251258
alternatively, if the thread isn't here tommorrow, just start a discussion thread
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No. 251296 ID: 31e5bb

>>251290
wait, is that 'open loving and dead', or 'open and loving, or dead?'
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No. 251302 ID: 8a6625

>>251296
good question lol
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No. 251306 ID: cd2f9c

open and loving, or dead? well you could have just been killed in the cage if you were far more bitchy with her. but if you all tried to comfort her more, even thought running was the right choice. the end could have been different. fighting would have cause death. and the bonus alternative ending would have been a good/bad ending (rape Cunny Die of fire and sex) mostly bad... so yah good, better, bad, worst, bonus.
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No. 251319 ID: fba40f

>>251306
> Rape Cunny die a true dorf

Fixed
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No. 251332 ID: 8a6625

>>251306
beautifull
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No. 251386 ID: c71597

>>251306
Nice. It was a fun quest, I look forward to seeing the future ones. I just hope we find out what happens to Qwern and Goldie. Maybe see them again in some elven arena where they rule supreme as top gladiators or something.
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No. 251462 ID: f0b4bc

It was a fun ride while it lasted. I look forward to more. Plus, I want to know what happens with Qwern and his googly rage eyes.
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No. 251517 ID: cd2f9c
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251517

1/5

3rd PennyLane

genre: horror thriller
main character: Bert. age7 no particular skills
not particularly intelligent relatively disobedient.
quest length: somewhat short. (3-4 chapters)
quote: -nothing you do, no madder how far you run. you cant escape him... SCCRRRIIIIIIAAHHH!! he's the boogieman!
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No. 251518 ID: cd2f9c

the votes will only be counted after the 5th
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No. 251535 ID: cd2f9c
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251535

2/5

Blake Quest

genre: Action Romance RPG
main character: Blake SteelHeart VI. Competent photographer, good with computers. always heard voices in his head, often followed them with out question.
quest length: Quite long. (4-5 chapters)
quote: -what! your going out there with no were to live?!
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No. 251571 ID: cd2f9c
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251571

3/5
Victoria Quest

genre: Action Comedy Echi
main character: Victoria (Vikky) Competent musician, Grandmaster? captain, negotiator, warlord. thought very stupid and perverted Victoria's determination and original way of thinking makes her next in line to become the "king of everything"
quest length: very long (no known end(episodes start and end in separate threads))
quote: gold, ale, power and a small army of naked squirming women at my feet! that's what I want! I'll be the king of everything!
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No. 251572 ID: cd2f9c

I'm lazy and the next two are somewhat complex... I will render them if they are chosen but until then please make due with Pencil drawn, and don't judge them by this fact but instead by there plot character...
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No. 251575 ID: cd2f9c
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251575

4/5

TwinLance's Quest

genre: action comedy
main character: Lance Gallagher (TwinLance). Excellent spear user and gallant showoff. Lance is talented and he knows it, he intends to use said talent to obtain what he wants, more talent.
quest length: somewhat short (3-4 chapters)
quote: -Why do they call him TwinLance?
-what are you stupid?
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No. 251580 ID: cd2f9c
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251580

5/5

Rotbeest Quest

genre: action romance
main character: Jager Rotbeest. competent Hunter. son of the great huntmaster, Rotbeest is left brittle and cold by the great shadow of his father
quest length: somewhat short (3-4 chapters)
quote: -do you have any experience?
-well this one time I took down an basarios in one punch... other than that I killed a kelbi and a velociprey.
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No. 251582 ID: cd2f9c

ok now you may start voting for your favorite quest. and I will collect the votes tomorrow at 7:00. needless to say, please only vote once.
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No. 251584 ID: c71597

>>251571
This one seems a bit interesting. I'm always a fan of world conquest, not that big a fan of only lesbians though.

>>251575
This one seems like it could have some nice crazy over the top action moments as well as be quite a bit of harmless fun.

I'm voting for Twinlance. Seems like something that would be quite wacky an enjoyable.
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No. 251585 ID: 1aaf7e

Go with Victoria quest or Twinlance quest.
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No. 251587 ID: 31e5bb

why choose? do all of the above.
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No. 251588 ID: b4d7d6

>>251587
but wich one first
I vote for 3rd PennyLane
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No. 251589 ID: fd6d7e

>>251535

I'm all for this one. Photographing, awkward moments, animal crossings, hot off-screen sexings you don't have to draw. Do be aware that we will refer to Blake Steelheart IV by something entirely sillier and more feminine than his nom de plume.

>>251517

That quest might work, but only if Ben is the boogieman. Otherwise it's just ordinary survival horror, with a frustrating protagonist to boot.

>>251571

NO HOMO

Seriously though, way too easy to make Vicky a "Mary Sue." Also rock and roll is dead. You could do this one, but you'd have to prove to me that you can handle a strong protagonist before I could support it.

>>251575

Doesn't seem to have much of a point. Get it? Point? Lance has a point? Heh heh.

>>251580

Haven't we already had like two quests about wandering in the easily drawn desert as a vaguely monstrous warrior thing who forever lives in the shadow of his father?
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No. 251614 ID: 644ca1

Blake Quest sounds fun.
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No. 251622 ID: cd2f9c

I'm sorry I forgot to explain the plot for the quests

>>251517
3rdPennyLane-wake up, horror movie stuff happening. quest to find parents, and not die.

>>251535
Blake-tragedy at home forces main character to return to homeland. seek to find a happy live, and investigate the mysterious organization nearby.

>>251571
Victoria-pirates in space. become king.

>>251575
twinlance-become or confirm your existence as an old one. collect all the legendary spears.

>>251580
rotbeest-find girl of dreams and prove to her that your the man of hers. while not following in your fathers foot steps.
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No. 251625 ID: c71597

>>251622
Still voting for Twinlance.
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No. 251649 ID: 8a6625

blake or victoria


...or maybe 3rd penny lane but only if you promise us that it's possible to get bad end, I'm tired of this maincharacter brand immortality
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No. 251663 ID: cd2f9c

>>251649
as for 3rdpennylane, I have a few endings planned out... but yes play your cards right or it might be quite short. If its to impossible I might have to use a "save" function. but I'm hopping you all wont need it. and yes there are many ends to this quest, most are bad... very bad.
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No. 251685 ID: 24a9bd

Blake seems fun, reminds me of beyond good and evil.

Apart from that, twinlance.
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No. 251919 ID: cd2f9c

sorry I'm late on this one.

>>251535
blake quest wins with 4 votes.
I'll be starting in the near future. proly tomorrow.
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