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1008685 No. 1008685 ID: eedbeb

This NSFW quest takes inspiration from Moot Point and CATALYST, and has a malformed hybrid setting. Slow updates because drawing bodies is difficult.

Ahpin is the main character.
-When Ahpin is alone, suggest actions for him
-When he is around others, suggest actions for them
-All sex in this quest will be consensual
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No. 1010468 ID: eedbeb
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A reddish-orange slug sticks her head out of a stone doorway that Ahpin never had the chance to explore. “Eh? You guys are leaving right?”

“Yep, heading out.” Ahpin says.

“Good. Apparently another adventuring party was just sent in after the people who came in yesterday morning. Poor Dusty is real stressed.”
No. 1010470 ID: e5b672

Does she need our help? Anything I can do?
No. 1010471 ID: 3ed3c3

I am more than a little tempted to tell them that it isn't worth it.
No. 1010476 ID: b55c59

Aphin: Offer to tell the other party that it isn't worth it, but don't commit to anything more.

Maddie: Stay out of sight until the other party is out of the way. You didn't get rescued just to get potentially murked by 'friendly fire'
No. 1010492 ID: 208562

Ahpin, offer the Chuck egg to Dusty to take care of, ask her to call you when it hatches in the future. Should make up for the egg she lost and prevents Chuck from becoming an eldritch
No. 1010493 ID: eedbeb
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“Let’s go help her. The adventurers I was with earlier said they’d send people in after me but they didn’t know Dusty’s pissed about the whole egg theft thing.” Ahpin explains.

Maddie hesitates. “What if they see me and freak out?”

Ahpin thinks for a moment. “The hallway’s pretty narrow, so I can walk in front and make sure everything’s cool before you go in.

They set off towards the echoing voices. Ahpin rounds the final bend to see Bob from Nun’ya Business getting wacked in the face by Dusty’s magic feather duster. The other nuns aren’t there, but Rhine is clinging to Dusty’s free arm licking mana off his paws.
No. 1010495 ID: 894419

Okay this guy you can punch and he definitely deserves it.
No. 1010497 ID: 410416

Bob say you found Vivian. Dust tell Ahpin how Rhine's doing. Maddie, be unimpressed by Bob.
No. 1010501 ID: e51896

I'll go with my original suggestion here: >>1010492

Except leave out the eldrich part out, we might offend Bob. Make sure to get Dusty your number to call you when it's hatching time.
No. 1010517 ID: 96c896

Ahpin warn Dusty about Maggie, like you should. Also, inquire about eggs after things calm down.
Dusty be weirded out by Maggie.
Maggie shrug.
Bob be extremely amused by Maggie's plight, and get whacked by Dusty some more.

other nuns: have fled.
No. 1010536 ID: 5c1bb5

Rhine: forgive your pappy.
No. 1010537 ID: 094652

Rhine: Wonder about how deceptive life is as you harden into an egg.
Vivian: Regret life choices and punch wall.
No. 1010550 ID: 96c896

Oh right, another avenue we could pursue regarding Vivian is sprites. They literally suck out mana through a needle. Inject some back in!
No. 1010551 ID: d052fd

Rhine: it's always been "mana this" and "mana that" since you came of age yeaterday, and frankly you're sick of it. Who wants to be a big dumb egg anyway? Sex is apparently some big deal for dad's people like becoming an egg is for yours, and HE seems to be doing fine without it. Screw all that noise, you're gonna be a changeling forever!
No. 1010597 ID: eedbeb
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“Hey, there he is.” Bob says, “Easiest hundred rollad of my life.”

“You were only paid 100 rollad to—fucking adventurers.” Dusty turns to see Ahpin, who tugs at his scarf nervously. Rhine buries his face against the spirit’s chest and refuses to meet Ahpin’s eye.

“You and your friends can go now.” Dusty gestures for Ahpin to join the eldritch.
“Where’s Vivian?” Ahpin asks.

“Amy and Joey are with her at the entrance. New anti-mortal ward keeps people out but not me.” Bob cackles.
No. 1010598 ID: eedbeb
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“We’re leaving, but I have a few things to explain first.” Ahpin addresses Rhine, whose ears twitch to show he’s listening. “I’m really sorry for grabbing you and putting you in danger. I could see that you were scared but I wasn’t thinking and I hurt you.”

“’s okay.” Rhine mutters.

Dusty sniffs. “Rhine will stay here. He isn’t in a hurry to change but I see the other one has turned into an egg, which means he trusts you enough to take care of him. I’ll give you the benefit of the doubt one last time.”

“Thanks. I appreciate it. Um, also one of the adventurers who came in earlier killed an elemental and bonded with its core and she’s waiting behind me—”

“I want to see this!” Bob interrupts with a grin.
No. 1010599 ID: eedbeb
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Maddie carefully steps into the small foyer, silver arm stretched behind her to hold the bodies.

“Eugh.” Dusty says. “That’s not natural.”

“I love it.” Bob says, clasping its tendrils together.

Maddie considers Bob. “You’re one of the nuns, aren’t you? Me and Amy go back, I thought she didn’t do dungeon gigs.”

“She was very drunk at the time.” Bob says. “Let’s get out of here so we can get back to the Nutz while Winks is still paying for booze.”

“Yes, please leave.” Dusty shoos Bob towards the exit.

“Bye, stay safe.” Ahpin tells Rhine, then follows Bob into the entry tunnel.
No. 1010606 ID: 6e4236

Everybody: sing and dance to the tune of Nobody Knows It to celebrate the conclusion of this great adventure!
No. 1010609 ID: 71201a

Toilet: plot twist, you were a mimic the whole time, but you want to just chill and hang out at the Nutz with the others and follow them.
No. 1010615 ID: eedbeb
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The faucet of the first floor sink spills its unending stream of pure water. Motes dance across the surface of the white marble.
The tank of the toilet flickers and gains a pair of pixilated green eyes.

“Ah, dat was an interesting visit.” Silicon says to itself. “I wonder what will happen to the girl on de surface.”

It flushes the toilet and watches the water swirl into the bowl.

“Dey didn’t even ask why I was closing de mana vents. Silly adventurers.”
No. 1010616 ID: eedbeb
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Bob sings a cheerful sounding song in a language that hurts to hear while the cool colored crew treks towards the dim opening in the sky.

“I missed wind. And the smell of plants is really good too.” Ahpin says as a breeze blows through his hair bringing the scent of a grass and dust.

Maddie helps them up to ground level and then heaves herself up to the rocky field on the edge of a full sunset.

“That was really fast.” Amy burps. The shark and chinchilla are sprawled on one of the boulders, a radiant lantern between them. At the sight of Ahpin and Maddie, Vivian jumps to her feet in shock from where she was sitting on the ground.
No. 1010617 ID: afe7de


Vivian: Punch Aphin and goad him, say come on, fight me, im fucking pissed, your safe, you have your *fucking girlfriend* and im pissed I have no mana so fucking fight me or I'll feel like shit forever.

Maddie: try to intervene but Aphin stops you

Everyone else look on knowingly and slightly sadly.

Someone: explain the situation with the dungeon to the outside world
No. 1010628 ID: 36784c

Maddie: Ponder how you can try to restore Vivian's mana.

Ahpin: Introduce Maddie and explain that one of the elementals said the she became a half god somehow.
No. 1010636 ID: c92a02

Vivi: hug Aphin, mad as you are you were scared he'd die alone.
No. 1010698 ID: eedbeb
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Ahpin flinches as Vivian runs towards him. "Sorry." he says instinctually and squeaks when the kobold socks him in the stomach. It's a weak punch, but Vivian follows up with the devastating headbutt to his diaphragm.

"I thought you were going to die alone." she sobs against his chest. "But of course you're here and you got your fucking girlfriend and everything's fine but I still don't have my mana and I feel like shit."

Ahpin gently pats Vivian on the back while Bob reports to Amy and Joey.

"We need to report that this dungeon is officially closed to mortals. There's a silicon elemental in there who's over 400 years old and they've been using other metals to build machinery." the eldritch says, surprisingly serious.

"I'll go to the guild office tomorrow." Joey glances at Maddie, who carefully lays her friends' bodies on the ground.
No. 1010699 ID: eedbeb
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Maddie shrinks her silver arm to a normal size, takes Vivian's hands in her own, and drops to one knee.

"You helped Ahpin through the dungeon when no one else would. I'd be crying in the dark still if it wasn't for you. I have elemental powers now and more mana than I know what to do with. Please, will you let me try to restore yours?"

Vivian's lip quivers. "Okay."

How does Maddie transfer mana to Vivian?
-A chaste kiss
-A tight hug
-Vigorous boning
No. 1010700 ID: bc11b8

No. 1010701 ID: c92a02

A not-chaste kiss. The symbolism is important.
No. 1010702 ID: a58e8d

They gotta bone, Aphin needs to look super uncomfortable one last time.
No. 1010705 ID: 629f2e

No. 1010706 ID: c992c6

They HAVE to bone, best way to transfer mana. Plus like you HAVE to make it both awkward for Aphin and rewarding for Vivian.
No. 1010707 ID: 0838d6

Bone zone? Yes. Also seeing Aphin get hit for being dumb turned her on. She doesen't NEED to do it and only says that after they're done, but she WANTS to do it, y'know, test out the body, etc, reward the lass who helped him out
No. 1010709 ID: df76b1

chaste kiss, you monsters
No. 1010711 ID: 4a933b

Vigorous boning
No. 1010713 ID: 6e4236

Chaste kiss, the exclusive cat Is watching.
No. 1010714 ID: d052fd

He doesn't own them and I'm not sure he'd care anyway. Fuckin' go to town on her, I assume that's the best way.
No. 1010715 ID: e85a08

vigorous silvery boning
No. 1010728 ID: eedbeb
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Maddie gently pulls Vivian to a soft patch of grass. The women kneel across from each other and Vivian runs her hand through Maddie’s hair.

“10 rollad they start fucking.” Amy whispers to Ahpin.

“What? They’ve never met, I think that’s a little fast to be—“

Maddie kisses Vivian and their bodies glow silver. The kobold puts her hands tentatively on Maddie’s bare chest and squeezes.

“You’re a cute thing.” Maddie breathes, tracing one of Vivian’s horns. The kobold blushes and spreads her legs shyly. Maddie smoothly lowers herself between Vivian’s legs and uses her long tongue to lick along the kobold’s thigh. The glow brightens.

No. 1010729 ID: eedbeb
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Vivian whimpers and lies back on the grass while Maddie starts eating her out. The dog curls her fingers into Vivian’s wet hole while bumping her clit with her long snout.

Ahpin watches for a moment, then turns away.

“Yup, still ace.” he says to nobody in particular.

How do Maddie and Vivian finish?

No. 1010730 ID: 410416

No. 1010731 ID: e51896

>How do Maddie and Vivian finish?

With a very respectful handshake, and a thank you and you're welcome for Vivian gaining her Mana back.
No. 1010732 ID: c92a02

Silver bullets, chief.
No. 1010734 ID: afe7de

By UZAK Aphin's sister showing up and giving us a retelling of the ending.
No. 1010740 ID: 7d8322

by asking Ahpin to join in
No. 1010751 ID: 094652

Maddie steals Vivian's silver-tinted glasses and stares into her eyes.
No. 1010782 ID: 435078

Firm handshake and saying no homo.
No. 1010783 ID: 0838d6

What's an UZAK? Is that some kind of fish?
No. 1010793 ID: eedbeb
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The air crackles with energy as Vivian leans back on her hands and lets out a cry. The flames from her mouth explode above her like fireworks, red tinged with bright silver accents.

"I can feel it!" The kobold summons a shower of sparks from her claw tips. "It's a little different, but that's fine, thank you so much!"

Maddie pushes herself to a sitting position and extends her hand. Vivian takes it, slightly confused.

"No homo." the dog says with a wink.
No. 1010796 ID: eedbeb
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Vivian and Maddie laugh and talk the whole way back to the gate station, where everyone goes their separate ways. Ahpin is content to watch them, though he gives Maddie a pat on her shoulder when it’s time for him to go.

He gently puts his bag on the floor once he gets home, tucks Chuck into a cardboard box lined with pillows and blankets, and enjoys an order of takeout while stretching his sore feet.

Nothing can ruin this evening, which is the cue for Ahpin's phone to buzz.

There are several messages from Cepha, asking why he's missing from work, a reply from Eldoon, and at the top, a text from his dad.

Dad: Can you check on your little sister? I haven't heard from her in a while.
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The story will continue in a couple months, thanks for reading!
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