LonelyWorlds 2024/02/28(Wed)21:32 No. 1084877 ID: 0d1c28
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A car zooms along a dark road

Brett: "Hey Trisha, are you sure this is a shortcut?"

Trisha: "Oh yeah, it's gotta be!"

LonelyWorlds 2024/02/28(Wed)21:33 No. 1084878 ID: 0d1c28
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Close up on vehicle
Brett: "what does that mean?"

Trisha: "Well you know, if it's not we'll be late for the party!"

Folding the map comedy moment! Fold that road map! Fold it and cover up Brett’s eyes accidentally!

Radio static ups messing with it till it lands on a news report about a recent string of murders that haven't been solved.

Actually, I'm changing my vote a bit because Donut's idea is funny

Event: news on radio reports of people getting lost in the woods, and there is sometimes blood, or torn up articles of clothing around the locations of where the missing people were last seen. search parties looking for these lost individuals report sightings of an unusual giant deer wandering the forest at night.

Trisha: put on a cassette tape, news is boring. (we paid good money to get the rights to use a rock star's music for this movie)

Brett: Ask Trisha if this is the very same forest the news was talking about, you didn't get a good look at the name of this forest.

Trisha: Assure Brett that even if it is, they are in a car and totally not lost with this shortcut. but you'll check anyways, and then do this: >>1084879

oh yeah, and before or after the news report, a commercial ad for Chickadee Red plays

>>1084879
definitely this
Brett: "Hey, I can't keep my eyes on the road if you've got the road in my eyes!"

Be careful not to take the WRONG TURN!

You have to wait a few minutes before you lean into the product placement, fellas…
Brett: Swerve to avoid a mysterious road walker!

Well step on the gas and speed it up then, no-ones gonna pull us over out here for speeding.

LonelyWorlds 2024/03/02(Sat)21:01 No. 1085179 ID: 0d1c28
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Brett: "Aw man Trisha you better be right..."

Brett turns on the radio

radio: "-a third report of hikers going missing in Diamond woods , police officers hav discovered blood, and torn up articles of clothing around the locations of where the missing people were last seen. search parties looking for these lost individuals report sightings of an unusual giant deer wandering the forest-."

Trisha: "Ugh put on a cassette tape, news is boring."

Brett: "hey the news was talking about Diamond Woods, you didn't get a good look at the name of this forest did you?"

LonelyWorlds 2024/03/02(Sat)21:02 No. 1085181 ID: 0d1c28
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Trisha: "Whatever even if it is Diamond Woods, we're in a car and totally not lost with this shortcut. but I'll check the map anyways if it'll make you feel better."

Trisha pulls out the large road map

Brett: "Hey, I can't keep my eyes on the road if you've got the road in my eyes!"

Oh, no! Brett, there's a vaguely pedestrian-shaped silhouette in the road! Slam on the brakes!

Event: This is the part where Brett crashes into a giant totem pole. Surprisingly, the totem pole is not damaged, at all. but the car is totaled.

Brett: get mad Trisha, then get out of the car and check the damage. In the process of being in shock, you forgot to grab your keys when you exited and locked yourself out without knowing. whoops!

Trisha: you also exit the vehicle (your side is locked too after leaving) to apologize to Bret, and wonder how far it is to the next payphone.

Brett: Responsibly push the brakes and come to a rolling stop until you can see again.

Bret tells Trisha not to fear, and runs over the pedestrian without incident.

At the next gas station, however, they will be confronted by a spooky guy with a blind eye named Bob (his other eye is called Jim), and he will tell them they have atracted the serial killer by spilling blood, for the killer hunts it.

Hit the breaks! Then realize how low on gas you are.

>>1085181
BRAKES! It's a shame you're low on gas, though...

step on the gas, don't look back, and do not stop. People are disappearing here and if you don't want to become a statistic just keep driving.

Brett and Trisha 2024/03/12(Tue)20:52 No. 1086290 ID: 0d1c28
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Brett sees a pedestrian-shaped silhouette on the road!

Brett: "AAh!"

Brett and Trisha 2024/03/12(Tue)20:53 No. 1086291 ID: 0d1c28
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Brett slams the breaks, and the silhouette darts into the woods

Brett and Trisha 2024/03/12(Tue)20:54 No. 1086294 ID: 0d1c28
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Trisha smacks into the map as the car swiftly halts

Trisha: "What the heck Brett?!"

Brett: "There was someone on the road!"

Trisha looks outside

Trisha: "I don't see anybody."

Brett: "I swear I saw something!"

Trisha: "Whatever lets just keep going."

looks at the dash

Brett: "Aw crap, we're almost out of gas..."

Don't worry, there's spare gas at the cabin for lawn mowers and stuff! Sure. Right.

Still, it is kind of creepy when the car's engine cuts out just as we arrive...

Brett: He could of sworn he filled the car up with gas yesterday... Regardless, he wants to go back the way they came to get gas. He's sure he saw a gas station over there earlier.

Trisha: Is really sure they are close to their destination, and believes they can hold out for just a while longer. She argues with Brett to keep going.

Event: They drive by... a torn up pair of panties on the road? Weird.

>>1086297
I'll support this idea

except instead of it being lawn mowers... it's a cabin for motorcycles.

Brett: glances over "What the heck kind of road map is that? Did you get it from a pirate?

An unexpected fork in the road comes up.

Trisha: "Wait that's not... (checks map) right, that's here. See we're totally on the right track."

We will go to the nearby gas station: Newell's Jool and Fuel ( formerly Nazz's).

Newell is super despondent though, because his store has been thrashed.

And all the Chickadee Red Soda is gone.

Almost doesn't mean that you are out of it keep driving, you just need to keep driving. You are not alone in the woods and this isn't a problem that can be fixed with a suplex.

Tricia: Here's a great idea, let's dump some of the junk in the backseat to get better gas mileage. We can come back for it after we fill up!

Trisha: "There is a gas station, but we gotta go over this river bridge."

The car lights start to flicker on their own

Brett and Trisha 2024/03/18(Mon)21:40 No. 1086733 ID: 0d1c28
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Brett: "We should head back, we could probably make it to that gas station we passed a few miles back"

Trisha: "But we're so close to the cabin! there's spare gas in the gardening shed!"

Brett: "How would you know? that map looks like it was drawn by a pirate we'd be lucky if we're in the same state."

Trisha: "Hey the cryptic guy at truck stop I got it from seemed like he knew the area... come on Brett! we're super late as is!"

Brett: *Sigh* "alright well just go"

* * *

after traveling for ten minutes The car rolls to a stop

Trisha: "This is the place! the cabin is just past this bridge!"

The front door is wide open... how spooky!

Who else is supposed to be here?

Brett and Trisha have a small argument over whether they should drive the car across or keep it parked on this side, with Brett being the more cautious of the two. Eventually, Trisha suggests they get out of the car and walk on the bridge to check how sturdy it is themselves.

Brett: "Well it better be, cause we're out of gas."
The two open the trunk and get out party supplies, including a prominent case of Chickadee Red Soda™.
Trunk also contains a hunting rifle (setting up for the climax)

Brett and Trisha 2024/03/23(Sat)21:38 No. 1087015 ID: 0d1c28
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The car stops and Brett pops the trunk
Brett: So who all is supposed to be here

Trisha grabs a bag and a six-pack of Chickadee Red
Trisha: "Well Britany and Kimberly will be there, along with Tommy and Dean"

Brett and Trisha 2024/03/23(Sat)21:39 No. 1087016 ID: 0d1c28
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Brett picks up a hunting rifle
Brett: "Nice! I hope Dean brought his gun, ducks are in season!"

Trisha: "you guys and your guns... oh Brittany said her brother Kevin and his nerdy girlfriend Tina are doing some bird watching, so make sure you just shoot ducks"

Brett: "no problem. anybody else around these parks"

Trisha: "just the old caretaker, Frank Wilkins"

Brett and Trisha 2024/03/23(Sat)21:40 No. 1087017 ID: 0d1c28
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Brett and Trisha cross the rickety bridge, a figure with a lantern is at the other side

event: the figure is a mysterious scary old man, being all like "the sacrifices have finally arrived, the ritual can begin!" or something scary and threatening like that.

Trisha: freak out

Brett: tell Dean or Tommy to knock it off

Old man: reveal to be Tommy or Dean this whole time, it's just a prank, bro

>>1087020
But then the actual old caretaker jumps out of the bushes and gives a cryptic warning to get inside because 'something' is out tonight.

>>1087017
In a bit of a twist, it actually IS Frank Wilkins. But he's anxious for whatever reason. Ushering them to hurry up, follow him so they can get INSIDE, DAMNIT! Thunder sounds in the background, though that's not what Wilkins is referring to...

>>1087031
This

>>1087017
Brett and trisha approach slowly with clear tepidation.
Rifle held tight but safely.
Delicious chickadee red soda clutched across trishas chest, logo in shot.

Mysterious figure is...
A long coat hung by the hood on a signpost and a latern resting on a nearby fence post.

Visible relief but confusion.

...followed by the real old man wilkins stepping into the light from behind a bush, adjusting his pants and apologising for being caught short.

I dont know the owoverse too well, but if he could be a felid form thatd take care of something important.
All good slasher movies have a catscare.

Brett and Trisha 2024/04/07(Sun)13:42 No. 1088179 ID: 0d1c28
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Frank Wilkins emerges

Frank: "What are you kids still doing out here?"

Brett: "uh we got a little lost?"

Frank: "Then hurry up! this is no night to be out"

Thunder cracks in the background

Trisha: "Good idea, I don't want to get my hair wet!"

Frank: "it's not the storm you should be worrying about"

you can suggest for and cut too any side characters at any time

All secondary characters have the quest objective to be slain in unique and entertaining ways, this quest only fails if the death is poor quality, a character can always have a good death in a sequel if they survive!

Trisha: Ask if this is about the missing people you heard about in the news. Ask where your friends are.

Frank: Tell them there's no time to explain or worry about them. Move!

Brett: tell Trisha to go with Frank. You'll find your friends.

jumpcut to Kevin and Tina. They are somewhere alone in the forest looking at ravens

>>1088179
Cat scare!
Perfect.
Ticked box.

>>1088197
All of this.

Especially the ravens.
All of whom look well fed.
One of the ravens may even have an eyeball from... something held in beak.
...but they all watch kevin and tina with curupioys, unnerving focus.
like a thirsty man looking at a cool, refreshing glass of icecold chickadee red soda...

Brittany is playing solitaire and wishing her friends would show up so she can play poker!

She notices the Joker card seems to be… smiling just a little too wide…

Kevin and Tina 2024/05/02(Thu)13:42 No. 1090159 ID: 0d1c28
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Trisha: "is this about the missing people? we heard the news... Where are our friends?

Frank: "Follow me I'll explain on the way."

Brett: "I think we should do as he says"

Trisha and Brett follow Frank along the path to the cabin.

Frank: "Your friends are mostly there already, all cept for those two sight seers kids, but I'll find them soon enough and when I do I'll tell the whole lot of ya about the truth to that news story..."

CUT AWAY.

Kevin and Tina are in the woods

Tina: "Wow look at the size of that raven!"

Kevin: "-And it's just gotten a fresh kill! this shot'll be perfect for the college bulletin!"

Dang! All thumbs on the camera after looking at the picture... and it just flew away! Maybe we can find it again and hey... maybe it goes back to what it was feasting on? That would be a great shot of it eating right from the corpse.

After taking the picture, the flash of the camera scares away the Raven as it caws very loudly. Maybe to alert it's friends? or... something else...

The Polaroid is being developed, so they won't be able to look at the picture right away until it fades in. So they decide to head towards the lake, or maybe towards the direction where the raven flew away to as they wait since they figured the Raven's caw scared the other birds away, and they talk exposition

but of course when they look at the picture, that's odd, hey it almost looks like some kind of shadowy figure in the background.

>>1090165

Oh yes.
This could work.
Exposition as they walk.
A little banter.
All the while one is holding the polaroid prints, and waiting for ut to develop.

The picture fades in and its good, but then that shadowy figure illuminated by the flash comes into view.
Odd. Just a creepy shadow though, right.
Play of the light.

...but as the next photo develops its there, more clear and... closer?
Again on the next.
Yes.
Closer and very clearly staring right at them despite the lack of focus.
And again, but this time it can be seen to be almost at the edge of the clearing and is carrying something...

They both hold the last photo together.
Trying to will it into developing quicker.
They have to see.
The dark almost seems to gather around them, closing in as they huddle closer and move quicker down the path.
Their attention is locked on the photo.
And its...
just the bird.
No shadowfigure.
Almost like its left the photo.

The quiet of the moment is broken by the loud snap of a branch being stood on behind them.

Kevin and Tina 2024/05/21(Tue)19:55 No. 1091533 ID: 0d1c28
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FLASH!
a picture is flashed and the raven flies away

Tina: "Did you get the shot?"

Kevin "I think so, but we won't know for sure till it develops"

Tina "while we wait let's check out the lake, I think the Raven went there! maybe we'll see the carcass it was feeding on!"

Kevin: "yeah Okay!"

Kevin and Tina walk to the dark shiny lake

Kevin and Tina 2024/05/21(Tue)19:56 No. 1091534 ID: 0d1c28
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Kevin shakes the photo as it developes
Kevin: "So Tina, you think there's anything dangerous like that old man said?"
Tina: "probably just a bear.

The photo develops
Kevin: "Uh Tina, can you take a look at this?"

Oh, deer! It's him! I recognize him from the papers!

Jason Burpees!

He was a kid that was bullied for his obsession for Chickadee Red Soda until he was pushed down a vat during a school trip to their main factory and he drowned. cue flashback of all this stuff happening

They said his restless corpse still haunts the region surrounding the old school grounds, draining victims of their blood, as he now confuses it for that delicious, nutricious, revitalizing elixir that is Chickadee Red. cue flashback of newspapers mentioning mysterious dissapearances/violent deaths

I didn't believe those rumours... until now! He's here, Brett, clear as day! He's real! Jason Burpees is really real! What will we do?!

>>1091535

What is that thing?! Where is it, is it right behind you, looming over you, rushing at you at an insane speed?!

>>1091534
The two had wandered onto the jetty as the photo developed.

As they look at it trying to fathom the nature of this oddity, looking back up the shore looks to be so much further away...
And if something were to stand at the end of the jetty they would surely be trapped.

Kevin shows Tina the scary deer looking thing.
When Tina looks at it, she doesnt see anything wrong with it.
When Kevin looks again, the creature is... gone???

>>1091552
This. Absolutely. Let's start revving up the spook-machine.

>>1091552
Oh, i like that.

Supernatural and mysterious.

Just like the bewitching flavour of chickadee red soda pop.

Kevin and Tina 2024/05/27(Mon)07:29 No. 1091883 ID: 0d1c28
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Tina follows Kevin to the end of the Jetty
Tina: "Huh? what'd you snap a shot of?"

Kevin and Tina 2024/05/27(Mon)07:30 No. 1091884 ID: 0d1c28
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Kevin:" Some sort of creature, see?"
Tina: "I don't see anything Kevin"
Kevin: "huh? it's gone..."

Kevin and Tina 2024/05/27(Mon)07:30 No. 1091885 ID: 0d1c28
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Tina: "You're seeing things' maybe that old guy was was right and it's getting too dark."
Kevin: "Nah it's probably just my glasses fogging up"

Since they're at the lake with a killer monster nearby, this is usually the part where something kinda lewd happens to make the victims more vulnerable before the kill.

Tina notes that Kevin's glasses isn't foggy and he's probably so stressed out about this college project that he's starting to see things, and suggests doing a bit of skinny dipping before they take more pictures to help him relax a bit.

(although this could help raise the ratings of the movie, consider how exposed they are allowed to be If we want to keep Chickadee Red Soda's sponsorship. If the company disapproves of being associated with full frontal nudity, we may have to just have some convenient censorship going on, or have them just strip to their undies).

>>1091894
She should make some quip about really steaming up his glasses. Which of course would mean he won't see anything sneak up on them.

So how good are you at swimming? If for no specific reason, you need to jump in the water how far would you be able to go?

>>1091894
Fully agreed.

Got to keep that sweet deal alive.

So!
Skinnydipping in undies.
Only one in while the other complains
"Its too cold"
"There could be leeches"
Dismissed with a playful smile that freezes as they see the THING step onto the jetty behind their companion.
Ththeir eyes widen and they freeze as the cold hand of terror clutches their breath and steals away their voice.


C

>>1091921
This

Kevin and Tina 2024/10/02(Wed)11:57 No. 1098149 ID: 0d1c28
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As a note Blood Hunt is an R rated movie, the only content sponsors care about is their brand being portrayed positively, violence and nudity levels are irrelevant to that.

Tina: "here let me give you something to really fog up those glasses~"
Tina begins undressing

Kevin: "Woah! Tina! the water's too cold for swimming!"

Tina: "I think we just need to warm it up a bit~"

Kevin: "w-what about leeches?"

Tina "is getting sucked really so bad?"
Kevin gulps and gives a nervous smile

Cut to a view from the bushes as the two undress and get in the water. Whatever is watching draws ragged, unnatural sounding breaths.

View from the bushes is good cinematography!

Tina gotta help the nervous Kevin let loose, by just playfully pushing him into the lake.

and then jump in after him

>>1098162
Certainly is.
And the ragged breathing to top it off.

Follow with tina leading kevin into the water.
Wet tshirt scene.
Coldness very apparent, (...striking a fine balance between outright nudity and our sponsors consideration. Also gives us space to escalate later...)
Kevin very flustered.
Frolicing ensues.

Of course, kevin would leave his glasses up on the dock.
And the tomfoolery would happen to ensure he is the one facing the dock.
At first the blurry shape comes into some focus and kevin thinks they have a peeper.
But then he hears the crunch of his glasses and the ragged breathing.
He cant see clearly but tina, alerted by the noise can...
A violent swift movement from the dock,
Choking panic and struggling splashes.
A wet, hollow cracking then an uneven splattering noise.
a scream peircing the night.
Fade to red.

Watcher 2024/10/06(Sun)19:49 No. 1098322 ID: 0d1c28
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Kevin: "B-But I..."

Tina plucks off Kevin's glasses and pushes him into the lake with a big splash

Tina: "Tee hee!"

CUT TO Watcher in the bushes

Watcher: *Heavy breathing*

The Watcher somehow is able to sneak right up to Tina- mostly because she's focused on Kevin in the freezing water. Boy, that water is cold.

Kevin sputters in the water. Blurry shot from his perspective (water over the lens) of Tina on the dock. A looming presence is just visible behind her. By the time he swims through the frigid water and pulls himself up on the dock he finds himself alone.

she is also gone without a trace as soon as Kevin pulls himself up, except for the clothing she stripped off. No blood or anything. gotta build tension, and hope in the audience that she is still alive.

>>1098324

I like this. Maybe he cleans his glasses afterwards, and the presence has vanished.

>>1098322
Heavy breathing in a bush always makes me think of someone masturbating

Kevin and Tina 2024/10/09(Wed)21:59 No. 1098425 ID: 0d1c28
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Kevin: *sputtering water* "That wasn't funny Tina!"

Tina: "it kind of was~"

Creature: *heavy breathing*

Kevin: "Are you going to come in then?"

he gets no response

Kevin 2024/10/09(Wed)21:59 No. 1098426 ID: 0d1c28
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Kevin: "Come on Tina! it's really cold in here"

Kevin: "Tina?"

Kevin puts on his glasses, recovered from the dock, he is alone

Kevin climbs on the dock, examining the clothes left behind. As he does...

Tina pops out of the water behind him and catches him by surprise, eliciting a girlish squeal outta him.

First rule of monster movies: You gotta fake out the audience like 8 times before something actually goes down.

Tina’s gone, sorry Kevin!

Time to run back to the group in your skivvies and form a search party. No splitting up!

Cut to Tina getting an angel's eldritch wings forcefully grafted to her back. This clip should only last 0.25 seconds.

>>1098427
This is good

>>1098427
Yes, more fakeouts

>>1098426
Kevin, frustrated to be pramked again, clambers out to recover his clothing.
Hevpickscit up but...
Wait.
Red stains?
He does not remember enjoying a delicious Chickadee Red Soda recently.
He certainly would as the taste is as memorable as it is refreshing.
Plus hed never spill any...
What IS this red stain?

Kevin and Tina 2024/10/11(Fri)21:41 No. 1098505 ID: 0d1c28
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Kevin: "Tina? Where are you?"

Kevin rummages through the discarded clothing

Kevin: "Huh? did she just leave her clothes here?"

SPLASH
Tina bursts out of the water!

Tina: "BOO!"

Kevin: "EEEEEK!"

Tina: Laugh at easily frightened dork

Kevin: Splash her in the face

after a bit of splashing from tina & Kevin, Kevin notices that there seem to be a lot of scavenger catfish near them. Tina thinks it's kinda cute and tries petting one. They seem pretty docile. Weird since you'd think they would swim away. It's almost like they are waiting for something.

Oh yeah, Kevin also needs to also ask Tina if she saw or noticed anyone behind her. He could have sworn he saw someone standing behind her at the dock there

Kevin and Tina 2024/10/13(Sun)11:21 No. 1098582 ID: 0d1c28
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Kevin: "TINA! come on that wasn't cool!"

Kevin splashes Tina

Tina: "AHAHAHAHAHAH!"

Kevin: "Okay maybe it was a little funny... when you were on the dock did you see anyone else up there?"

Tina: "Nope! why?"

Kevin: "Oh, well I thought I saw someone..."

Oh no! Someone saw you in your underwear!

Tina teases that he's worried that someone will see what they're getting up to~

Kevin and Tina 2024/10/15(Tue)19:34 No. 1098646 ID: 0d1c28
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Kevin: "It's probably one of my sisters dumb friends"

Tina: "you afraid they're going to see some undies?"

Kevin: *Gulp* "we should get out of here"

Tina: "Aw Kevin, that's no fun"

the Producer feels too much time is being spent on Kevin and Tina
A) Cut back to the stars Brett and Trisha: What are they up too?
B) Spice things up to sway the producer: And how?
C) Go for the kill: make sure little more screen time is spent on Kevin and Tina

B) You have a good CGI artist right?
Spikes jut out all across the lake while the dock disintegrates. The killer casually strolls out of the bushes and insults their victims: "See you soon...", leaving them to drown.

A, we gotta use those big names!

A) Something creaks on the dock. The two turn to see. Tina looks terrified while Kevin can't see and asks what she's looking at. Just as she's about to scream we cut to Brett and Trisha entering the house.

This keeps Tina and Kevin in reserve to show up later as a wild card, or as a corpse to stumble on to ratchet tension before the killer is fully revealed.

>>1098652
ooooh, that sounds fun!

>>1098652
Yes!
Focus on tinas face
Tina draws breath to scream, flash cut to bretts face
Letting out a contented "ahhhh" as he steps under the cabin awning and tries to open the door.

Kevin and Tina 2024/10/19(Sat)21:42 No. 1098784 ID: 0d1c28
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Tina looks wide eyed at something off screen

Kevin: "Tina what are you looking at?"

she gapes in horror a scream held back for a moment

Brett and Trisha 2024/10/19(Sat)21:44 No. 1098786 ID: 0d1c28
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CUT TO THE CABIN with Brett and Trisha

Brett: "Ah finally we're at the cabin"

Brett grabs the handle and moves to open the door

>>1098784
Shes a natural screamqueen.
Great shot, excellent projection of building terror tina!

When Brett opens the door, the cabin is surprisingly well-kept. Somebody must have cleaned it up for the party.

Trisha points out that there must be someone already there, since she spies an open can of Chickadee Red Soda on a nearby table.

They enter the cabin to see a horrible sight...

Dean is on the ground motionless, with red liquid on the floor and on his shirt

the red liquid is actually Chickadee Red soda, Dean is just trying to prank Brett and Trisha. Maybe Tommy is in on the prank and will jumpscare Brett and Trisha for a laugh

>>1098788
This

>>1098788
Subtle.
I like it.
Maybe lingerbon the condensed moisture a moment. So cold. So refreshing.

Brett and Trisha 2024/10/22(Tue)18:50 No. 1098886 ID: 0d1c28
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Brett opens the door,

Brett: "it's surprisingly well-kept. Somebody must have cleaned it up for the party... but where are they? that creepy guy said everyone should be here"

Trisha: "Look! a refreshing can of chickadee red! I bet one of our friends was drinking it! I bet they're around somewhere."

Product placement, front and center!

straighten all the paintings

Can't do another spook so soon, so the others should be in the kitchen unpacking.

Brett: Pick up the can of chickadee soda, take a long sip, turn to the camera, and give a smile and a wink, along with some kind of slogan they use in their commercial

Preliminary script for this scene:

Brett takes a sip of the crimson ecstasy that is chickadee red soda.

"Brett!" Trisha says in protestation at his consumption of someone else's delightful drink.

"Oh, come one! You I can't resist a Chickadee Cheer!" Brett smiles cheekily while Trisha puts her hands of her hips.

"Whoops!" Brett lets out as his hand slips and the can of scarlet bounces off his chest and onto the floor. "Ah, great. Now my shirt's all red." This profanation of the scarlet ambrosia will be important later.

"Serves you right, you butter-fingers!" Trisha says as she walks away.

"Hey, I'm usually good with my fingers." Brett says, smiling again. If you pay attention you can see the actor inwardly groaning at this line.

Trisha then walks to the desk by the wall and finds her first clue as to the nature an origins of the slayer! Spooky!

Brett and Trisha 2024/10/24(Thu)12:09 No. 1098972 ID: 0d1c28
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Brett picks up the can of chickadee red, and takes a long drink

Brett: "Ah that really hits the spot! nothing like a Chickadee Red after a long hike!"

Trisha: "Brett! don't start drinking it now! Chickadee Red is best shared with good friends over good times!"

Brett: "but with this smooth spiced flavor who could resist this carbonated delight?"

Trisha: "Well you're going to have to try with these babies as they're going right to the fridge to get chilled to perfection!"

Trisha heads with the six pack to the kitchen

hahahaha, very sponsor

Trish: sneak a sip when you're sure nobody's looking

Chickadee Red in-universe side-effect: slowly enhancing knockers. None of the characters will notice this effect, actors just stuff their bras between scenes. This will give a subliminal message that Chickadee Red gives you something more, which should increase sales.

Brett: While Trish is in the kitchen, head upstairs and see if you can find any sign of Dean

>>1098984
This

Brett 2024/11/04(Mon)17:36 No. 1099394 ID: 0d1c28
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Brett goes to the top of the stairs

Brett: "Hey Dean! where you at?"

Does something happen when Brett reaches the top of the stairs, does he hear something?

He can hear someone fooling around in one of the rooms. Its the perfect opportunity to try and scare them.

Unrelated random survivor crashes through door, pivots across the railguard, falls on head and goes crazy.

>>1099400

I don't have anything better cooking in my noggin, so I'mma support this.

Brett 2025/03/22(Sat)19:24 No. 1105246 ID: 0d1c28
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Brett listens at the door

Panting and moaning

Kimberly: "Oh Dean~"

Dean: "I loooove you Kimberly~"

They should be interrupted before being hunted down by any psycho killers… but how to do it without a party foul?

There is no way! Darn! Guess they’re doomed. Leave them be.

(edited

Brett gets an idea for a prank, and decides to sneak back downstairs to get Trish to plan for a prank on them.

scene change to inside the room

you see a shadow moving up and down.
Kimberly is saying something like: Yes Dean Yes! Just little more...
andthe camera pans over to the source of the shadow.
And we see...

Dean and Kimberly playing Field and Track on the Ninsixdo! they've been running in place on the Force Pad! Hence the panting and moaning. They're impressed at each other's aerobic movements and getting a high score. What else could they be doing?

Brett makes some yowly animal noise to prank them.
(Not enough to throw them off their game, thus setting up for later them getting murdered and Brett thinking the scream is just them still going at it.)

>>1105249
Strip field and track?
Nothing too risqué, but loser sheds an item of clothing. One or two items down.
Enough to keep the viewers watching between cans of red.
Theyre trying to put each other off with the loveydovey noises.

The prankening draws closer.
I like the idea of an animalistic yabbering and scrabbling in the hallway.
The prankster scritching claw and nail along the floor.

Kimberly&Dean 2025/05/06(Tue)12:07 No. 1107614 ID: 0d1c28
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Kimberly and Dean are playing Strip field on thier Ninsixdo, complete with Force Pad

Kimberly: *Pant,Pant* Yes Dean yes!! I'm gonna break my record"
Dean: "this is awesome! I love you so much!"

Brett 2025/05/06(Tue)12:08 No. 1107615 ID: 0d1c28
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Brett gives a horrid wailing howl
Brett: "AAAARRRRRROOOOOOW!"

Kimberly&Dean 2025/05/06(Tue)12:08 No. 1107616 ID: 0d1c28
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Kimberly dives into Dean's arms
Kimberly: "EEEEEAH!"
Dean: "Oh man what the HECK was THAT?!"
Kimberly: "D-Dean! protect meeeee!!!"

Brett can't help but laugh at their reaction, giving himself away.

>>1107630
For sure.
Set things up for the jumpscare.

I feel kinda bad for these two adorable idiots.
Gladvits only a movie but...
Its gonna be horrible.
Which i guess is the point.

Guess we need to start vectoring the cast towords terror now.
Get some red on the screen.
And i dont me the delicious chickadee kind.

Keep it up! Claw at the door and really heighten the fear. Would be a shame to let a good scare die early.

throughout the scares Brett the winner pulls, there's also another subtle scare (scary television interference, or something knocking on the window) that wasn't caused by him. that way, in a later scene, they can be like "hahah, nice prank. But I wonder, how did you manage to scratch on the door, and also knock on the window/do that to the television"
and Brett can be like "huh? I didn't do that?"

Brett is pulled back and kidnapped by a shadowy figure that looks like Mario but on steroids

Kimberly&Dean 2025/05/19(Mon)09:12 No. 1108261 ID: 0d1c28
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Scratching is heard at the door

Kimberly: "AH! I'm so scared Dean! what IS that!
Dean: "I don't know Kimberly!"
Laughter is heard beyond the door
Kimberly&Dean: "BRETT?!"

Brett&Kimberly&Dean 2025/05/19(Mon)09:14 No. 1108262 ID: 0d1c28
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Dean and Kimberly find Brett on the other side of the door

Brett: "Ahahaha! you should have heard yourselves!"
Dean: "Not cool Brett!"
Kimberly: "You ruined my record jerk!"

Not cool, not cool at all! Do you want to be the first one to die in the a horror movie, because this is how you can get that to happen if you continue to act like this.

Lets cut to the kitchen for some more character establishment with Trisha, Tommy, and Britany.

Trisha hears the commotion upstairs and shakes her head, sighing.

>>1108328
Yes we need some fried chimken

>>1108262
"Whoa. I knew you guys were really going for it in there but a record attempt? Plenty of lube. Keep your arm supple."
If theyre not throwing stuff at him by that point, its still time to retreat.
Shout "its all in the wrist!" As you do so.

>>1108328
This

Trisha&Tommy&Britany 2025/06/01(Sun)13:36 No. 1108975 ID: 0d1c28
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CUT TO KITCHEN with Trisha, Tommy, and Britany.

Britany: "Kevin is STILL out there guys and it's getting dark!"
Tommy: "Uh maybe your bro can take care of himself"
Britany: "Oh my god! he totally can't! he's afraid of the dark and still uses a night light! he's only out there because he does everything his gross girlfriend tells him! he needs to grow a spine!"
Tommy: "Oh yeah, your right Britany"

Sound'd of laughter and shouting from upstairs
Trisha:*Sigh* "sounds like Brett and Dean are getting up to trouble again"
Britany: "Oh my god! they don't even care that Kevin is missing!"
Tommy: "Uh, yeah they shouldn't be having fun at a time like this."

Remember to enhance knockers between scenes!
Suddenly something spontaneously crumbles.

Trisha, did you hear what Tommy just said? No fun?! That’s not fun. Fun is always allowed!

>>1108975
Probably should head out, you three. Try and find him before he gets too scared, after all! You never know what could be out there...

>>1108979
Good idea, then they can find the vague yet chilling evidence of something bad happening down at the dock.

>>1108979
Agreed.
If only for peace of mind.
Longer it takes for him to get here, the more she's going to panic

Trisha&Tommy&Britany 2025/06/17(Tue)18:20 No. 1109800 ID: 0d1c28
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Trisha: "Well I guess we should go out and look for him then, if only for peace of mind."

Trisha Tommy and Britany exit outside with flashlights through the back door

Trisha: "Keeeviiin?,
Tommy: KEVIN!
Britany: "Kevin where the heck are you!"

>>1109800
A hooting owl calls as they search, almost in time with their shouts.
They fan out a little as they approach the treeline...
The woods arent too dense here.
Theyll see each others torches. Keep each other in sight.
Even see the well lit house behind. And everyone is yelling out so... safe to spread out a little to find kevin

One stands alone
They didnt go too deep in, right?
Is it darker?
It feels darker.
The trees feel closer too.
No one has shouted for... how long has it been?.
Even the owl is silent.
Wheres the house?
Oh no.

Wandered off too far?
Couldnt have. Woods were so sparse around that part.
They stepped around a tree and its like...like...
Like the night just ate them

Ominous musical number / spooky music licensing!

For a split second, the house is a giant woman but her maw opens up into a fractal
It only lasts two frames, both for budget concerns and to ensure people flip out on rewatches.

As they head towards the dock a terrified Tina runs up, babbling about some monster.

Trisha&Tommy&Britany 2025/06/24(Tue)18:45 No. 1110243 ID: 0d1c28
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A hooting owl calls as they search, almost in time with their shouts.
They fan out a little as they approach the tree-line...
The woods aren't too dense here.

The tree grabs one of them in its twisted branches. Ahhh!

>>1110243
The silence and the dark encroaches in.
Tiffanys torch scans across the now dense looking woods.
Tommy calls for kevin in the distance.
Brittany too, but with more frustration and sounding more muffled.
Then the torchlight crosses something wet, dripping and shaking...
Tina.
Dripping wet and shivering, eyes wide and tearstreaked cheeks.
Shes gesturing with panic.
Trying to get tiffany to be quiet.
For all our sakes...
Be.
Quiet.
The forest speaks in answer.
A sharp snapping of breaking wood as someTHING tears through the trees towards them.

>>1110299
Something similar to this but without finding any bodies outright, just rushed footprints and discarded clothing.
Then what comes out from the trees is merely a rabbit (in this world "regular" rabbits look like tiny dudes with loincloths made of leaves).

Brittany chuckles at being scared at such and asks Tommy what he makes of the situation.

Tommy doesn't respond.

She turns.

Tommy's limp body is held by a large monstrous figure.

Brittany screams.

The creatures lunges.

Cut to Brett telling Dean and Kimberly, "Come on guys, it's not like anyone got hurt or nothing!"

Britany 2025/08/04(Mon)10:37 No. 1112246 ID: 0d1c28
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Britany now alone arrives at the docks, wet clothes are left there

Britany:"Keeeeviiiin!"

Bush rustle

Britany: "Kevin? I swear to god Keven if you're gonna jump out at me..."

[Popcorn munching intensifies]

Ok, process of elimination. Its still too soon to reveal the monster, Kevin should remain missing so Britany has motive to act later, and we've already done a few fake outs. Therefore it must be Tina in the bushes.

This is good for interpersonal drama as terrified Tina wants to get the hell out of here, while Britany wants an explanation of where Kevin is.

>>1112325
This!

>>1112325
can Tina be nude for this.

Better collect those wet clothes. Evidence and all.

Britany&Tina 2025/10/01(Wed)21:45 No. 1114649 ID: 0d1c28
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Tina bursts out of the bushes

Tina: "DON'T HURT ME!"

Britany: "EEYAAH!"

Tiny: "W-We have have to get the hell out of here!!!

Britany: "Oh my God, why are you naked?! and where the heck is Kevin!"

Frenzied yipping, followed by panicked explanations, finished with embarrassed covering (but Tina isn’t the one covering.)

Tina continues to panic.
Britany isn't having any of this nonsense, she's on a mission.
She grabs Tina by the shoulders and looks her right in the eye. "Where. Is. Kevin?"

>>1114650
Agreed.
Tina is seemingly oblivious to her nakedness, focused only on trying to get britt to get moving, almost trying to pull her along.
But britt is firmly planted, trying to cover her up and failing but also trying to get her to just stop! Explain whats happening and-
>>1114652
"Where. Is. Kevin.?!?"

Now make her boobs expand slightly with each shot! Make sure it gets indirectly linked to Chickadee soda with a splash of fizzing fluid over her boobs!

>>1114658

Full support here

Britany&Tina 2025/10/04(Sat)20:43 No. 1114770 ID: 0d1c28
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Tina: "WE HAVE TO LEAVE, we HAVE to, WE HAVE TO-"
Britany cuts Tina off
Britany: "Where. Is. Kevin.?!?"

Tina, with a shaky hand, silently points to the dead mutilated corpse hanging or nailed on a tree, maybe his chest is open exposing his guts and organs.

maybe with some ritualistic markings on the tree too, like a sacrifice of some sort? or maybe not.

bottom line, it's a gruesome sight.

Hmm...is it time for the horror to start?

Hmmmmmmm...

Yes. Yes it is.

>"Kevin...Kevin's gone. I don't- something- he's GONE. Fuck, he got taken by- by something, his legs- god his legs- he...he's GONE AND WE HAVE TO LEAVE NOW! NOW!

In sort, Tina's too traumatized to speak.

What? Kevin's...Kevin's been right behind her!
She's been holding his hand the whole time!
...oh, it's just been his hand. (And then he can unexpectedly show up later! Also naked, just because. Maybe even in need of a hand.)

>>1114773

Agreed with this. Definitely time to start the horror, but not quite the right time to show off the gore. Gotta do some more mood setting.

>>1114778
Don't want to pop it immediately, the build up's been slow, but now time to ramp it up a bit and get REALLY unsettled before terror time.

>>1114770
The positioning is good.

Tina tries to explain but desperately falling over her words,
>>1114773
more focused on getting britt to start moving.
Something she resolutely refuses to do.
But then unexpectedly britts expression softens.
"Kevin!" She says. "Not funny you guys. You... i was worried. I thought something had-"
Britts voice trails off.
Tina is frozen, but for the shaking, her eyes wide in terror.
She wont look around. She knows whats there.
But... its just kevin.
Right?
And it is kevin.
But... wrong.
Head held at a curious angle, but turned far further to the side than it should be able.
Limbs twisted into an oddly inhuman stance. More bestial. He turns slowly towards them, the torch casts shadows from him that are not his own. A shadow with horns.
More uncertain, with a slight tremble in her voice, britt asks "...k-kevin?"

Britany and Tina's breasts expand - too large for them to move. The thorn-covered monster that butchered Kevin slowly lumbers towards his new slabs of meat, with a cleaver that bodybuilders would break their backs trying to lift.

Britany&Tina 2025/10/16(Thu)20:55 No. 1115180 ID: 0d1c28
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Tina points a shaky hand

Britany: "Kevin!"
Kevin is standing behind her
Britany: "Not funny you guys. You... I was worried. I thought something had-"
Britany's voice trails off.

Tina is frozen, but for the shaking, her eyes wide in terror.

Britany: "...k-kevin?"

There's two of you and one of him! DOGPILE, MOTHERKILLER!

AAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

>>1115180
This is the part where you run.

>>1115184
I second that motion.

Its time for someone to have her screamqueen moment.
act her heart out.
Her moment to shine bright.
Running from a pov camera that moves slowly at first toward her then faster by increments until...
A sudden lunge forward.
Cut off by a disturbingly wet crunching noise.

>>1115190
Pov would be good at this point, and cutting away on the scream leaves ambiguity so either of them might show up later.

>>1115221
If the cut away is used, then there'd be an opportunity to have a crunch noise on the fade to black, then open on a member of the ones who didnt go out searching noisily eating generic cheesy poofs from a bowl and washing it down with delicious, ice cold chickadee red.

Britany&Tina 2025/10/24(Fri)22:27 No. 1115513 ID: 0d1c28
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switch to Monster POV camera

Britany: "EEEEEEEYYYAAAAAAAAAHHHHH!!!"
Tina: "AAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!"

Britany and Tina turn and run.

Ohhhhh we get to be a monster!

Chase them! Zoom in close on their running legs, with a few salaciously close shots of Tina’s butt.

have Britany dresses destroyed by running through thorns and branches leaving her nude.

is Kevin a Monster now?

> is Kevin a Monster now?
Ooh but what if, something is wearing Kevin's skin?

Either way, monster chases. In their panic they split up and the pov follows Brittany. Getting closer as she forces her way through brush that tears at her clothing. Until finally the camera zooms in on her terrified face as we cut on that last scream.

i like the idea of Kevin still being alive.

Great screams ladies.
Killing the scene.

>>1115515
Oh, yes indeed.

>>1115528
I was initially thinking something partway between possession by vengeful spirit and a form of skinwalker.
the original true form first shown above looked great, and could return when it sheds the taken victim. But the wearing of victims allows us to make use of paranoia among survivors and give some actors a chance to play both monster and victim.
A cool thing they could discover could be that the monster casts its true shadow whatever form it is in. Like the shadowy horns shown above when the torchlight reached kevin.
Can the posession be reversed? Dont know which way we should pivot on that.

Cast and crew are doing a good job so far, but i still hope we get a blooper reel for the cresits or private viewing.

Britany&Tina 2025/10/25(Sat)22:15 No. 1115551 ID: 0d1c28
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Britany: "Aaaaaaah! it's got me, it's got me!! HEEEEELLLP!"
Ripping sound
Britany's skirt rips and is caught on a bush
Britany: "Help me! Tina Help me pleaaaasseee!!!!"
Tina keeps running

Britany 2025/10/25(Sat)22:17 No. 1115552 ID: 0d1c28
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Britany rips out of her skirt to keep running
Britany: Ohmygod ohmygod ohmygod THIS CAN'T BE HAPPENING TO ME!!!!"

Remember your Weegee Mansion training! Let it hunt you, then use your flashlight to blind it, and slink into a bush while it writhes from the stun!

Britany is the closer target, sadly… does she escape? Is the monster vulnerable to crosses? Only one what to find out!

Could the crosses be protecting her? Better go for the top instead! Might even unhook the bra beneath by coincidence!

Britany trips and falls into a bush.

The good news is that now, she is hidden! everything is quiet, she can catch her breath.

The bad news is that this bush is full of thorns that is latching onto parts of her clothing. If she makes any sudden movements, it could risk damaging her clothing more.

Unfortunately, her relief is short lived, as she can hear Tina screaming for her help, as the monster has caught her. Does Britany stay hidden and keep her life (and clothing) safe?

or does she jump out, damaging a good portion of her clothing, and risk try to find and save tina, grabing a nearby large branch as a improvise weapon?

>>1115563
A trip and fall?
Tradition demands it!

>>1115563
I would second this. Nearby sounds of brutality while we see Brittany act scared

Britany&Tina 2025/10/26(Sun)20:36 No. 1115579 ID: 0d1c28
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Britany:"AAaaaah! AAAAAh! AAAAAAAAH!"
Not looking where she's going Britany trips and falls into a bush
Britany:"Owwwww...."

WOOOSH
a shadow leaps overhead
Tina:"Eeeeeaah!"

The Producer feels this might be a good place for a violent kill, they're worried the audience is expecting more gore in a movie called "Blood Hunt"

If you agree, describe how Tina is killed

If you disagree, describe what happens next and/or what the characters do

Sadly, we gotta have slash slash in a blood hunt scary film.

What about a classic shadow-silhouette showing a beast devouring its prey?

Suddenly, something lands on Brittany's head and tumbles in front of her. As she tries to process what just happened, she realizes... it's Tina!

Somewhat relieved, She whispers to Tina asking if she's alright and where the monster is... but no response.

Then, her eyes go wide as she realizes she wasn't talking to Tina...

she was talking to Tina's decapitated head that just so happened to land right in front of her as the camera zooms out to that reveal!

Other body parts of Tina's land near the bush Brittany in too, such as her arms, tail, legs, even her boobs. Brittany has to try to not scream during her hyperventilation. to not draw the killer to her location to find her, Can she do that?

Gotta make the first kill extra gory! The monster could skip stripping her entirely and simply deglove her from the neck down! Then impale her while she's still alive on a Conveniently Shaped Tree Branch of Impalement like a hunting trophy! Tina's terrified face would make a real memorably haunting frame to put the title card drop transition!

The BLOOD HUNT begins! Could even match cut blood drops to pouring a nice, cool, and refreshing can of chickadee Red Soda. If somebody drinks a can whenever somebody dies, and it foreshadows a fakeout death when nobody drinks a can, then people will talk about the sponsors forever.

hmm true, gotta do something for the gore hounds.

here's a neat effect that shouldn't go over budget:
creature lifts Tina, pierces her abdomen with, I'm going to say, a proboscis. Tina's insides are liquified and sucked out, leaving an empty skin.

This can be fairly easily accomplished by making a rubber Tina and deflating it. shooting at night, it ought to be obscured enough to seem real.

>>1115579
MUCH gore.

Tina catches her breath, only to see a towering shadow upon the ground her bare front is plastered over.

The Slasher immediately stomps her foot with their immense weight, causing her femur to disintegrate as her leg becomes a bloody stump.

With the girl as good as dead, the Slasher unleashes their true supernatural powers (powered by blood, which Tina is gushing out of her stump), sprinting at a dead run towards Brittany, who puts up quite a run for prey; the adrenaline awakens something valuable inside her, the speed of an athlete that could, with time and practice, make her an Olympics athlete.

It's not enough. The Slasher's superior motivity could outrun the world record sprinter by fifty percent. It tackles her and continues running, and Brittany has a few seconds to scream, not towards the Slasher, but towards the giant boulder. There is a discretion shot from the other side of the boulder as we see a wave of Brittany's blood splatter in a halo explosion, coating half the boulder in pure crimson while the other half is sorely un-spooged.

The Slasher calmly walks towards Tina, who is dead by blood loss. It grapples her by the throat and jams barbs into her skull. Tina is a zombie, and has just enough sentience remaining to writhe and scream like a captured animal, the Slasher walking into the forest with his...

raw materials.

>>1115583
Oh, I kinda like this. Adds to the whole BLOOD Hunt aspect- they're sucking out all your blood, seemingly for nourishment or some insane purpose.

Im liking a lot of stuff here.
All kinds of gory goodness and classic movie moments.
Whatever doesnt get picked needs to stay in the idea box for later adaption to another scene.
>>1115582
This cut is excellent.
We should aim to adopt this.
The sponsers will love the screen time and its a nice scene transition, additionally it also gives that fakeout opportunity.
The pouring blood cutting to the pouring red.
The actor takes a long, satisfying sip.
Then on the one fakeout kill, the drinker is distracted before taking their sip.

The only point to drop it would be the crescendo of the movie where scene transitions give way to unrelenting attacks on whovere is still standing.

Britany&Tina 2025/10/27(Mon)23:05 No. 1115629 ID: 0d1c28
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Britany: "I-it jumped over me, it jumped over me after I lost my skirt..."
screams stop
Britany: "Did Tina get away? how did I get away? it was after I lost my skirt... was it my cross panties?"
Britany clutches her crucifix
Britany: "Oh my god, Jesus did you save me? did-"
A skinless head lands right in front of Britany
Britany: "EEAGH!"

Britany&Tina 2025/10/27(Mon)23:07 No. 1115631 ID: 0d1c28
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if the scream is heard the monster does not act on it, it lifts a headless body and drinks of it.

Kimberly&Dean 2025/10/27(Mon)23:09 No. 1115632 ID: 0d1c28
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CUT AWAY

Dean pouring a Chickadee Red
Dean: "Hey kimberly, you want a chick?

“Sure, it’ll help cheer me up after Brett’s dumb prank. Ruined our fun. Hey… let’s give him some payback!”

"man, you know I would stop at nothing to enjoy a nice relaxing drink of Chickadee Red®."
*grabs can and holds it close to the camera while pointing at it*

In fact, If my can is empty, I'd even risk missing an important part of a movie just to get up, and walk all the way to the lobby to get myself another drink! *wink to the camera, and take a long swig of the drink*

also, Kimberly is faking her smile as she is doing this, but don't let the director or the sponsorship know! shhhhhh...

>>1115634
Yeah! Payback! A lost bit of clothing for every piece those two were missing when he so rudely interrupted!

Could spill some Chickadee Red Soda, comes out in the wash! New formula, same great taste. Chickadee getting it Chickadone!

*Kevin enters scene*
"Ooh, pour me one too! Hey have you guys seen my sister? I can't find her."

"Soda's bad for your gums."
"It's good for this~"

Dean chugs the soda and then kisses it into Kimberly's mouth.


I have an idea for a twisted ending to this B-movie, where the surviving teenagers are saved by an alien (half-human) hunter who gleefully butchers the monster and drinks its blood, all to the tune of boomer shooter punk rock. And then offers the teens another six-pack of Chickadee Red. As the teenagers are celebrating their new hero while driving back to their homes, they find out the whole city is burning... and they turn to the alien, who has a twisted grin on his face. Their 'hero' went on a rampage, killing most of the residents and laying waste to the background. And he's only one of the scouts, giving him a license to do whatever-the-fuck-he-wants (kill entire towns and save a few kids at the same time), as the rest of the invading force is beginning to touch down. The Butcher grins at his new... minions. Or would they prefer to be meat?

>>1115634
Prankmon brett sounds good.
Whether it fails or succeeds, it'll be fun.
Need to return to normal and slow the tension so it can be cranked gradually back up again.

Also, We need to get brett into position soon and figure out how to give him his spirit of vengence moment.
Whether it means hes taken and worn by the killer for a more extended scene or hes revealed to be connected to the killer in some form. Calling it, aiding it or something more active.
Need to figure out his motivation for vengence and targets.

Kimberly&Dean 2025/10/28(Tue)21:54 No. 1115710 ID: 0d1c28
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Kimberly: "man, you know I would stop at nothing to enjoy a nice relaxing drink of Chickadee Red®."
Dean: "right on!"
Dean hands her the glass and pours her another

Kimberly: "Mmmmm this really cheers me up after Brett’s dumb prank. Ruined our fun. Hey… let’s give him some payback!”
Dean: "I'm game! what did you have in mind?"

Scare the living daylights out of him! I bet he’s terrified of spiders!

Should trick him into going into the basement then turn off the lights and lock the door.

If the cabin has a shower, you could shake up a frosty can of Chickadee Red Soda and offer it to Brett! He'll get all sticky and you can swipe his clothes while he cleans off. Then he'll have to run around in a towel!

We can use the Chickadee red as blood!

one of them can go to the kitchen, pretend they are cutting something, and then pretend to lose a body part like a finger, or accidentally stab themselves somehow, and then pour where the wound would be with chickadee red to make it look like they're spilling out blood!


this of course could lead to a setup where the monster could actually somehow injure the person doing the prank, so that when they're actually injured, the others will think they're pranking.

Brett&Kimberly&Dean 2025/10/29(Wed)22:27 No. 1115911 ID: 0d1c28
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Kimberly: "What about throwing a big spider at him? Brett's terrified of spiders!"
Dean: "Trisha's afraid of spider's not Brett! Brett crushes them all the time for her."
Kimberly: "Oh right, what if we shook up a can and drenched Brett with it? he'd get all sticky"
Dean: "Aw man, I'd hate to waste all that chick, but that does give me an idea"
Kimberly and Dean whisper to each other when Brett walks in

Brett: "What are you two conspiring about?"
Dean: "Oh, we're running low on Chickadee Red and deciding who should go into the basement to get the extra cases"
Brett, Kimberly and Dean walk over to the basement entrance
Brett: "I didn't know we had extra cases down there."
Kimberly: "We do! but me and Dean are scared of how dark it is..."
Dean: "Yeah man, but you're not scared of anything right?"

Of course not! Ain’t a fraud of- I mean, ain’t afraid of nothing!

Pity the lights aren’t working… and all the cobwebs… and what’s that tickling on my shoulder?

Do 'the buttsecks song' to freak him out

Of course he's not afraid. He'll even do a scream while he's down there to freak them out. Just as soon as he finds that case, where could it be?

Down you go
Maybe once you get close enough to the bottom of the stairs, jump down the rest of the way like you’re a wrestler jumping off the turnbuckle, for no reason other than the director has to take advantage of the fact that Brett is a wrestler, and OWO fans will be pleased.

>>1115921
Hell yeah.
Getting a little nervous, pause halfway down.
Then start treating it like an entrance ramp.
Start hotdogging and grandstanding for your imaginary audience to chase away the nerves in a familiar way.

Brett 2025/10/30(Thu)22:04 No. 1115979 ID: 0d1c28
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Brett: "Of course I'm not afraid!"
Brett leaps down the final half of the steps and strikes a pose

Brett: "see nothing to worry about down here, now where's that case..."

It’s right on top of you- and it’s full of spiders!

>>1115979
Hm, spider. Just leave it be.

"Its way in the back, you know so the furnace doesn't heat it up. and away from the stairs"

GARY: "RAIN OF SPIDERS"
(Gary is the main monster's sidekick)

Brett 2025/10/31(Fri)19:02 No. 1116036 ID: 0d1c28
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Dean "Its way in the back, you know so the furnace doesn't heat it up."
Brett looks further in
Brett: "Looks like the furnace is also way in the back"

Oooh a cabinet. Brett opens it and a plastic skeleton falls out.

oh shit he's gonna figure it out
quick turn off the light and slam the door.

>>1116036
Theres two now...
The spiders are gathering.
Those lil bastards are planning something

A real skeleton falls out of the cabinet.
You find an scrawled dairy with him, made from papers he pulled from his backpack, telling how he was a nerdy senior highschooler who spent a lot of time researching local legends while his schoolmates partied the summer away and then found out about the monster...just in time to see his schoolmates get slaughtered and then hid in the closet, safe but unable to get out, so he wrote this warning in the dark.

>>1116038
Yeah, cut him off from the light!

Brett 2025/12/18(Thu)22:32 No. 1119235 ID: 0d1c28
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Brett opens the cabinet and...
JUMP SCARE skull comes at the camera

Brett: "AAh!"

Brett 2025/12/18(Thu)22:34 No. 1119236 ID: 0d1c28
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a skeleton holding a journal tumbles out of the cabinet

Brett: "What the heck is that doing down here?!"

Ooooh the journal falls open to a page that says “I have to hide… IT CAN SMELL ME”

>>1119236
That journal is totally gonna talk about the monster.

"If you are reading this, get away from the cabin. NOW." is scrawled on the first page.
Most of the internal pages have been torn apart by a sharp set of claws, but some text is legible.

"...lopment of the property is going smoothly. However, our agenda involves mineral deposits, which have been buried beneath super-compacted ur..."

"..ke it up. Boss called for reinforcements, but the idiots in marketing are supplanting our peashooters with even smaller peashooters. We need engineers and howitzers, damnit! This is every monster movie..."

"...d, they killed the children, we tr..."

"...never seen anything so beauti..."

The last entry is inked in dried blood.
"This will be my final entry. The rest of my journal was ripped when I reflexively parried the skinwalker. Maybe that's for the best.

I work for a corporation that you have no chance in hell of exposing, so I won't bother to name it. We came here disguised as real estate agents when we were secretly trying to mine a newly discovered mineral, one which could revolutionize the computer industry. We found something more... and then we discovered it was already populated. Head office outright classified them as Native Americans, and ordered our 'security forces' to purge whoever they found. We tried speaking up, but they killed Jimmy, and then they framed him for mass-rape, and they succeeded, and now his family's ruined. We stopped speaking up then.

They unleashed a monster on us. Our guns chipped its marrow, but it kept growing back. It uses blood to fuel its weird powers. If you don't have a minigun, you don't stand a chance.

You may be tempted to blow this place to hell. Don't. The skinwalker is a rabid pet, owned by one fat mogul living in a massive city full of people who aren't evil assholes. If you massacre an entire population for the crimes of one CEO, there will be war, and we might lose. Just leave this place alone, forget it ever existed.

Are you still reading this? Run. Run before it can get you."

>>1119236
Ooh.
A journal.
With secrets.
And the possibility of fulfilling the spirit of vengence goal he has...
Hmn.
Ok.
The pranksters lock the door leaving a peturbed brett stuck,
He claims hes found something neat to show them.
They dont buy it and sneak away giggling.
Brett, with little ootikn slumps near the door and beginsvto leaf through the book.
At first, his voice narrates the passages, but as the reading continues a second voice slowly joins in, synchronised with brett and increases steadily in volume.
He keeps reading.
The eye sockets of the skeleton draw his eye ( and the camera) as he does so.
Brett is wide eyed and terrified. He hokdsbthe book at arms length as if.. willing hinself to cast it away though his hands wont listen and...
He.
Keeps.
Reading.
As the narrated passages end, bretts voice is barely a whisper, the other, deeper voice clear.
As he closes the book, bretts expression is cold and determined.

And, scene.

The journal narration?
Fuck.
Uh.
Something spooky.

>>1119247
Ive gotta stop doing this on my phone...
>with little ootikn
With little option
>He hokdsbthe book
He holds the book