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4152 No. 4152 ID: 6faa8c

For when you're not sure whether to unleash something on the board at large as a quest, but still want opinions.

This is for an up-and-coming quest. So far, all I know for certain is the face. I need to know if he's a good protagonist. Further, if my art's improved at all. (see Operator 2 and beforequest)

This isn't just for art, though. I also want to know how Quest would like to play a quest of demons and backstabbing and such.
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No. 4162 ID: 42a1a0

Your art has definitely improved. There's no doubt about that.

But you're right. It's not all about the art. And... I do hesitate to say this, and feel free to disregard it... but it seems to me that as the art got better, the writing got worse. In OQ 1, you put a lot of attention into details and mood setting through the writing. It feels like that same attention was missing from OQ 2. Maybe it was splitting the attention and time between the writing and art, or maybe you felt the art was supposed to handle that stuff and didn't want to include it in the writing. I don't know. I'm trying to describe it as I see it, but it's hard to put into words.

Anyway, take it or leave it, that's my theory. Hopefully it's either helpful or forgettable.
No. 4189 ID: 6faa8c

Keep in mind this isn't just for me, folks. post any ideas you have as well.

I understand what you mean.
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Here's a more complete image of one of the enemies/allies.
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