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37025 No. 37025 ID: 856690

Right so this is the discussion for Chorus of Whispers and any other quest I decide to subject you people to.

Starting things off, level some criticism on me, what am I doing wrong, what am I doing right, and what do you want?

Also I'm thinking of running another quest, options are;

Hatman Quest: It is about a man with a hat, with a Cat that lives in it. The hat is filled with hammerspace. He falls from the sky, stuff happens.
Genre/Stuff that is in it: Sci-fi fantasy, basically high magic and alchemy based tech.
There will be bounty hunting, there will be weird stuff and there will be plot. Is mostly set in a floating sky-city built by bird-people and a massive corporation called Myriad. Will supposedly humourous.
Format: The Quest is made up of days, the first day is a bit of a Railroad. There is an overarching plot in it.

One X 4k!: Romance of a man and his clone army
http://quest.lv/kusaba/questdis/res/346321.html

Meh. No overarching plot. Megalomania Quest

Cursed Misfortune:
"You have been Cursed! OH NOES!"
You have been cursed into the form of [insert choice of animal/unpleasant creature here] The Quest is to remove the curse.
Light Plot, adventure. same setting as Chorus of Whispers, i.e. Fantasy world combination of "Industrial" and "medieval"

Not A Dream:
Main character wakes in healing temple, with amnesia, supposedly there has been an amnesia epidemic, magical in nature. Except there hasn't, lies, lies everywhere. Something is seriously wrong.

Mindscrew quest, contains much naval contemplation and doubtful realities. A good deal of plot. Nightmarish stuff too, of the non-physical variety and the physical variety.

Buraskag Quest
You are a Buraskag. They have two big stocky legs finished with taloned, reptilian shaped feet. Their massive arms are longer than their legs and are incredibly strong. They also have a long tail which is like a bull's. Their bright red forked tongue hangs down past their chest and in their round ovaline head they have two sets of teeth. One is a set of canines for ripping meat and one set of molars for crushing food. Two giant horns project straight out from either side of the head and just at the end curve up vertically in a mean point. Its big, huge, yellow eyes are for seeing in the night as well as the day. its whole body is covered with shaggy, coarse, thick, blue fur with another denser layer underneath and good fat layers under its skin to keep it warm.
Setting is a cold, cold place called Elcon, is very wacky and contains no humans, or elves, or dwarves, or goblins or kobold or most traditional races.

Coneman Quest
You are a coneman, or conegirl if you prefer. A coneman is about the size of a clenched fist, and has no arms.
Setting: Elcon
It is the smallest race in Elcon.

Expoldahead Quest.
Again, elcon.
You are an explodahead. Explodaheads have a bullet shaped head, which is in a perpetual grin. Of course, they can’t help that, they don’t have any lips to cover their teeth with. Their body, arms, and legs are exactly like a human’s; except that they are only the size of a small child. They have just two pointed fingers and a thumb on each hand, and on their feet they only have two large pointed toes.

You fire can your head as ammo... you get better[new head will always replace the old].
You are Nigh-indestructible.

Rider Quest.
You are a ram-rider, which is basically a slightly anthropomorphic sheep on a magic bike. again Elcon.
am-riders are simply sheep who stand on their hind feet but are bulkier. The rams usually are the only ones who ride on the bikes. The rams really just do... um... nya... um... well... actually... just... really... attack, hunt and defend for the flock. The females, however, are mechanics, engineers, builders, magicians, cooks, mothers... well basically everything that the rams don’t do (i.e. work). The ewes and the lambs ride in the great ram-caravans. The ram-caravans are really just caravans for the transportation of goods and people. They are moved by being attached to a small (but sentient) four-wheeled buggy. At nightfall they draw the caravans around into a protective circle. In the middle of the circle they make a huge fire. At this fire cooking, entertainment, stories, and murders all take place. All the ram-riders enjoy good heavy-metal music, dangerous tournaments on bikes, and gingergerabug (a game played with bikes, sticks and a small furry animal). When one flock meets another, the chiefs must confront in battle. The winner absorbs the loser’s flock into his own. However, there are a few exceptions; when the chiefs are related or if one of them yields to the other.

Vote Please
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No. 37734 ID: f0e3ae

>>347337
mmm... fencing IS a sport, right?
Actually lets get him a regular sport and then focus on finding him a swordsmaster teacher. I think we should try to get training for both of us before taking on whatever killed mother. Nirdhar needs to become a gish, a master swordsman who knows some magic that synergizes well with swordsmanship. We need to become master mages, knowing as much magic as possible. Don't even think of fighting the bad guy before we can take him on.

>Tagan of Songs and Joy!
This place sounds like it would most definitely provide great culture boost for nirdhar, helping his soul grow faster.
>Canrtin
Goblins are cool... plus they have multiple would be rulers who rule by magic... might be able to trade magic there for us.
>Murhra's Realm; Terresta
Currently beset by wraiths? we need to ask around to see if wraiths are a type of Chlan. If so then we are a guardian spirit against the Chlan. I am a bit weary of a necromancer but if he is so protective of his subjects... if we could solve his wraith problem he might teach us magic and upgrade Kyarin (I doubt he can resurrect her... but he can probably enhance her if she is interested).
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No. 37738 ID: 856690

>>346956
A unredeemed wraith (No head, grotesque mask, Chestless) is a Chlan Fiarn.

Also, interesting idea about Kyarin.
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No. 37766 ID: f0e3ae

>>/quest/312350
>The Bride is a Leoni, in a glorious green dress, the Groom is a... It is a Gnoll!
Interesting...
1. What is a Leoni?
2. Can they actually cross breed with gnolls?
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No. 37796 ID: 856690

>>347566
A leoni is a Nighom(human) of the Cityland of Leonard. Typically they have smooth skin(though often freckled) They are pale skinned and they most often have brown hair and blue eyes.
All beings that are not animals or monsters can interbreed. Why? Magic, well it is more that magic enables. Every thing was born of the Heartflame so it works.

Hence why you get the tainted, who are a crossbreed of three or more races, the power this often brings means tainted are feared.

Half-breeds don't have it quite as bad, as long as they breed with either thier mother's or father's race.

Now genetics is mad in Kigan, traits are not dermined by dna or what have you. I'll take the example of the gnoll and the leoni.

Since the mother is bearing the child, it will be more like a leoni, it'll have less fur and a more humanoid head. If a gnoll was the mother, the appearance would bend that way.

However you must remember the core rule of magic in Kigan.

Magic acts in place of physics and such, but at any time, can completely disregard the rules it seems to be following. Incedently this is part of how magic works in Kigan, you get the magic to do something other than the rules.

"In general bear in mind that magic in Kigan doesn't pervert the laws of physics, it makes them operate! It also ignores them on occasion. So in other words there are rules and structure to the magic of Kigan... except when there isn't."

Also a seehi mother and a leoni father will mean if the child is a female, that child will also lay eggs. If the mother is a leoni, the father a seehi, the child will carry like a human does.

Also there is a whole load of things that can alter a childs formitive grow. Children born on the sea are typically always weaker magically speaking, those born on land are stronger.

Those born in high places are more tuned to the pollen. This constantly falls from the world tree Yaibggael (Yab-g-gale) who's leaves cover all but the lost ocean of Yuikna and whose root go deep into the Heartflames. The more pollen, the easier it is to do magic stuff.
The deeper underground a person is when born the more in tune they are with Heartflame: Wild raw magic from the centre of Kigan core, using this causes cancer of the spirit and one can easily get drunk on this power of creation.

There is various other things, Like what kind of earth is beneath, wether the parent has been possessed before, What time of the year is it?

It is crazy, crazy stuff, a number of people in kigan have written down their observances(Notably Albiz Gnarg, who has made a truely insane number of books on the subject).

Basically A child will look like it's parents is the rule magic obeys, except of course when it doesn't
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No. 37848 ID: bb6062

inb4 piled soul necromancer who can drink the lives of others to sustain his mortal coil. (e.g., you kill him, he dies, your like, "fook yeah", and an hour later he opens his eye to make sure noone is around, and just walks away...)
actualy, that would be a fun quest, being a piled soul necromancer... a vampire.

JeEpeRs, crEePerS, WheReD You gET tHoSe PeepErS...
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No. 37884 ID: 856690

>>347648
now you are catching on, though a nercomancer like you suggested would be feared by regular nercomaners.

Also Generally speaking the best way of killing a piled lives healer is cutting the head off, and even then, some of them can have sufficiant lives to regenerate.

Now I'll explain vampires in Kigan.
Vampirism in Kigan is a curse that is either put on you or that you get from a vampire feeding, but not killing, on the same individual for three crescent moons.

Now the power of a vampire is detirmined by three things, age, blood diet and... how long ago they fed.

Kigan vampire also have no blood of thier own, needing the blood of others in thier veins to be living beings.

All vampires are afflicted with a terrible thirst, a throat that burns like fire. A vampire can go a week without blood before this desire begins to erode thier sanity. Elder vampires can go for longer. A vampire can exist without blood, but the curse makes them more powerful then. Creating a nightmarish monster of the night.

Vampires also gain power from thier blood diet, they become more like the thing that they harvest blood from, and drinking a body dry instantly causes transformation, older vampires have more control over this.

Now a few powers and weaknesses of Vampires.
Vampires are strongest at night, and letharic at day.
Sunlight turns young vampires to dust and makes elder ones feel unbelievable pain.
A vampire can turn into a kind of smoky darkness, that can move through cracks.
They can turn into a group of blood drinking bats.
They have dominance over various night creatures.
Magical blood is extremely addictive for them.
Sharp Wooden weapons cause pain to them if used on them, if stuck in the heart, they turn to ash.
A vampire with the head removed will not turn to ash, any death will be final.
A vampire can regenerate as long as they have thier head.
Garlic wards them away(this doesn't work on elder vampires)
A vampire cannot enter your house unless invited, as a consequence most are affable if they are not being driven mad by thrist.

Vampires are strong and fast and hear better than a lot of races, they sense and smell blood always, unless the blood is masked, in which case they freak out if you stand before them with masked blood. They are frightened of Vampires with no blood in them.

An elder Vampire can have children, the child will be a stronger vampire, always. young vampires are infertile.

Most people do not like vampires.
Vampires unlike werewolves have not made thier curse into a blessing and become a race.

A vampire finds the taste of a tainted's blood particulary nice, though it will over time cause them to appear like a tainted(thus giving tainted a worse rep, as being blood drinkers and vampire bait).

A homunculus' blood is EXTREMLY DISTASTEFUL to vampires.
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No. 37926 ID: 44766a

Tell us about Werewolves.
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No. 37950 ID: 856690

Werewolves...

right.
In Kigan, wolves that have not lost their minds or been lowered to a packmind, are very powerful, on a similar level to Kitir, Devourers and middle aged dragons.

Werewolves were at the begining people who were cursed to go mad and turn into beasts... How ever so the story goes, The Great World Wolf, Fionnwyr, He who lies willingly in chains, was not content for things to stay this way.

He gave some of his blood, that of the first wolf to change the curse, to make it a blessing.

The Wolf Blessing changes a person, they grow claws and the inside of thier mouth is like that of a wolf's. They also gain unparalleled smell and strength, thier regenration is very strong.

There is also the were itself. Those who are first generation werewolves(recieved the blessing from someone) can only change into the wulfen form, that form halfway between their original body and that of a wolf. Second Generation(Those who have werewolves as both parents) are born not of their parents' races but of the wolfblood in thier veins. These individuals can transform into a wolfform as well as the wulfen.

When in the were, skin and hair colour remain the same. For example a Loirk(red elf) would have red skin and black hair as a wolf.

As being part wolf, werewolves can claim kinship with the wolves, As do the Gnolls.

The only weaknesses werewolves have is that silver ignores their regeneration and that they have to transform during a full moon.

There is one other thing.
The Old Rage, this is a throwback to the days when it was a curse, the old rage makes a werewolf nigh unstoppable aswell as completely berserk. It is not known exactly what triggers it but anger is a theme, most werewolves are extremely cool and collected as a consequence.

Now to explain the curse that werewolves came from.

The curse of the Werebeast. Werebeasts are foul chlan, once not chlan, they are addictted to the hunt and live only to hunt people. They are always in packs and beleive only in the strong, swelling thier ranks with those who are corrupted with tales of thier dark hunt and thier power.

Werebeasts have no exact form, each one being a hideous mish-mash of creatures, but always the sickly yellow eyes of a chlan.

There is one creature you will never see as part of a werebeast. No werebeast will ever have parts of a wolf, for the blood of wolves was seperated from that curse.

In other news, Update coming later today, also you as Spectrum really don't want to meet a vampire.
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No. 37958 ID: 980ade

Now that I finaly became interested in this quest it was cool to read all these informations...

Now to think of a nice training regimen :D
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No. 38209 ID: 856690

Right, so here is the breakdown, A very very unpleasant thing happened and I was away for a few days, Oh dear has been updated and will continue.

Chorus of Whispers will be Updated, however, it is a fairly meaty amount of material you guys have given me to work on, I'll try to deliever as soon as possible but i'll be breaking it into chunks.

Also thanks to everyone who has particpated in my quests so far, thanks to those who only read it too!
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No. 38211 ID: 980ade

>>348009
Take your time with the update. There is no need to rush it :P We can wait a long time if it will turn out to be totally worth it (and it probably will)
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No. 38274 ID: 44766a

Ok, Dusk is terrifying!
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No. 38278 ID: 980ade

"The power of christ compels you, bitch" ? ;P
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No. 38280 ID: 856690
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38280

Welp update tomorrow! I'll leave you with this lovely picture of Dusk's mug

Isn't she so pretty? *cough* no way *cough*
Do continue to make plans, this is afterall your first boss fight(Ooze didn't count considering you cn't really defeat it). Sweet Dreams!
>>348074
That would be the general idea. Chlan being nightmare and evil generally made into form.

>>348078
You wish!
The holiness of Spectrum's light is not a lot! You are just fortunate in that Dusk hasn't taken form yet.
(I was trying to make minispectrums but it didn't work so well)
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No. 38282 ID: 980ade

>>348080
Implying those tiny us-es around here weren't AWESOME.

That was just a reference. If something like that was enough to beat a Chlan mini-boss I would think that this quest is too easy.

And it seems that this voice has become too tired because of the fight and now has to retreat to the sweet embrace of Morpheus.
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No. 38311 ID: 980ade

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Gqa84ibwnks

Achievement: HEART! (15P) - Beat a chlan with the power of Heart.
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No. 38313 ID: 856690

>>348111
Perfect!

Well, anyway I'll explain what happened, cause some of you seemed to figure it out, basically you became a being of darkness by consuming too much light too fast, however a number of your voices weren't keen on the idea of becoming an abombination and fought back.

then you tried to hit it with holy light(of which you had little at that time) It countered with voice and then after that you used heart to beat it.

During this Reatel was fighting against the Dusk, and it was not going that well, it kept blasting him away. He would have defeated it without you doing it first, but most of what you have gained so far would have been purged off.

So next up you need to decide what to do next, Nirdhar is likely to be very tired and may have nightmares.

After that, supplies and clothes for Nirdhar
Then you depart for one of the three kingdoms.
I remind you, if you go to Tagan first, you'll have to go through it twice.

Also, glad you are enjoying it Arxel, I was considering drawing the Dusk fight out longer but decided against it.

Dusk wasn't acqually a thing I had planned, you really made her by talking about light absorption, and then I had to have you fight her.
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No. 38334 ID: 44766a

Wait, you are saying that Dusk is my fault, for suggesting the whole "see if we can absorb light thing". Man, I feel like an ass right now...
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No. 38335 ID: 856690

>>348134
AH, don't feel bad, it was interesting and you handled it in one of the best possible ways! Besides think there was another person who wanted to see HOW much light you could absorb and if you could become a kind of black ball thing.

Incidently you may not have much luck finding Reatel, also in reply to those on the thread, dusk has so much more power than you because it is not a new homunculus, it was a chlan from your heart and also one of the main reasons Reatel got so messed up was he had to protect Nirdhar(TASTY VESSEL FOR CHLAN) and Kyarin(CHLAN CAN TURN UNDEAD INTO WRAITHS).

On top of that he was reluctant to kill you.
Now on why did he leave so abruptly?

Well there is many things going on in Kigan as well as that Chlan calls to Chlan.

Also Dusk had mastery over voice, though nothing else, she kinda dumped all her stats into that, so you kinda messed her up when you found a way around that.

Also, do you all understand now why people are so afraid of homunculi?
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No. 38337 ID: 44766a

Ok, New rule, WHEN TRYING NEW THINGS DO IT IN MODERATION!
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No. 38339 ID: 856690

>>348137
Is good rule.

Were you all find with having the Dusk sprung on ya? Or was it a bit too... mean?
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No. 38340 ID: 44766a

Well it made sense, I guess, but it seems like we should have been able to react faster to her forming in the first place. Maybe a chance to prevent her from taking over our body would have been a good idea. Or at least give us a chance to warn Nirdhar and Kyarin.
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No. 38344 ID: a1cb4d

>>348139
Honestly the unexpected stuff tends to make the setting better in my opinion. Although you may want to increase the time between short updates like that if possible.
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No. 38434 ID: 980ade
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38434

Silly pony form suggestion.

The only thing that combines our HEART power and our rainbow/white body color is this ;P
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No. 38435 ID: 856690

>>348234
Silly suggestion is silly

And now for something completely different!
FLAKY'S PROPHECY
The Crow's eyes shine, and her voice takes on a ghostly echo.
“You have done well to stand against the Dark
Though it has left its Mark.
So where shall you go from here Spirit?
To Tagan where you'll find liars and smiling faces, could you bear it?
To Cartin where war rages and Kings and Queens plot?
Or to Terresta, beset by wraiths, can you hope to heal that rot?
What of your self, purposeless will you find your meaning?
Will you do it while Erimael is Burning?

You will find hope in the sign of the dragon, do not mistake the serpent for it or you will suffer.
The scales will tip over the mountains on the weight of tears.
The old can become new, if only you can find the heart of mystery.
The Dead Lord weeps
The storm that swept the mountains did not go unnoticed.
A thousand masks lay faceless, where did the piper go?
The crown of peace lies on the fallen

Tell me, Tell me, where did the story go, since the shadowed Robe walks the lands of painted smiles?
Why do the rats climb from beneath?
Can you see the form of the jester, can you see the jester's stained hands?
Old hatred is masked.
The child of tricks lies in a box.
Trust not what you are made to see, the wrong people are wearing the wrong masks.
What is worse than wraiths?
What is tied and what is not, I care not!


Can the Dark be killed, can it be silenced?
Will your voice be heard by the Maiden of Sorrows?
Be wary, the tears will tear.
Can you stop the starless night?

The dancing one can help, her wings will guide, her laughter destroy you.

You will know that the end is coming when it cannot be found.

So then, how far can you flee, and how long can you hide?
Only a spark is needed to light the fire

BEWARE PARUMRIR! TRUST NOT PARUMRIR!”

Wild speculation is a go!
Hint, most is to do with the three Kingdoms
Also currently the vote stands at
Tagan(2 voices)
Terresta(0 voices)
Canrtin(0 voices)
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No. 38537 ID: b1f0e2

>>348234
I have spend so many hours playing this!
This is awesome!

The game itself has some major issues (unreachable stars spawning, etc) but they are eclipsed by the awesome presentation.. .and I love how it seems all cutsie but then it says things like "you will die a fiery death" and "you will fail" and "persistence is futile"
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No. 38669 ID: 856690
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38669

Right so Chapter One of Chorus of Whispers has ended!

So thoughts?
Comments?

Also here is another option, instead of going on to the second chapter of Chorus of Whispers...

I do the first chapter of THE BEAST CHEST
In which you(tgchan) is the Beast chest, an old artefact of great power that can bring forth monsters from within itself.

So yeah, you'd be a chest that monsters you control come out of.

Regardless of what you choose, OH dear! EX! will be getting an awesome update sometime tomorrow.

Also, MrTT, I'll be getting around to reading your quest soon, so you can look forward to me making stupid suggestions.
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No. 38670 ID: 101fd9

Your quests need more love ;_;
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No. 38671 ID: 856690

Note!

The BEAST CHEST
Will not be the same as the idea offered in the early posts in this thread.
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No. 38672 ID: b1f0e2

>>348469
I really liked CoW, it was fun, just the right amount of grimdark TM, and the darkest hour mechanic was suitably scary and exciting.

Beast chest sounds fascinating... but I would rather have a second chapter of chorus of whispers first.

>Also, MrTT, I'll be getting around to reading your quest soon, so you can look forward to me making stupid suggestions.
I'd love to have you around.
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No. 38673 ID: 44766a

Second chapter of CoW. But keep the Beast Chest around for next time. It sounds awesome.
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No. 38674 ID: 856690

>>348470
would be nice, but I don't mind as long as there is somepeople.

But really I think Chorus of whisper's start was a bit weak...

Any
So it seems to be...

That you want another Chapter of Chorus of Whispers and then maybe one of BEAST CHEST.

Also thank you guys for participating and sticking with it.

It was a bit rocking starting out but I think Tagan will be awesome.

>>348472
{Darkest hour} will return, especailly if ones are rolled!

Though there is gonna be a lot of crazy and light heartedness in Tagan.

Though I am really gonna have a lot of fun with the theme of masks.

There is some very... Interesting things going on in Tagan.

Also in general I like my whites white and my blacks black.

So dark stuff will be dark and the good stuff will be bright!

Also you avoided death once and imprisonment twice in chapter one!

So what do you lot think of Kyarin?
And sorry but I couldn't let Reatel join you, he has other things to do, you might re-encounter him later though~
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No. 38682 ID: 44766a

Kyarin has been interesting so far. But we really need to ask her about her past.

By what god does Reatel worship? Seems like the perfect god for Spectrum. Also, Reatel should be Spectrum's rolemodel.
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No. 38730 ID: 856690

>>348482
Getting Kyarin to talk about her past will prove quite difficult...

Now, I believe it is time to explian the about the Aryaith and the Duath, I will only be giving you what Spectrum knows, so it may not be the whole truth.

The Aryaith are guardians of somekind, they are very powerful, a number are viewed as Gods, the Duath used to be Aryaith but were corrupted by the whispers of the the mother of the Chlan the fallen Great Werlin the Fel White Serpent Juirmuyadr. The exact story is been lost to time.

(Spectrum doesn't know much about the Serpent, it is considered a myth by many)

There is also a tale of the Allking who made the Aryaith and Shyndl, and the Elementals.
The Elementals and Shydl are said to have made all beings at the Allking's behest. The Allking is considered to be a myth by many, and the worshippers of Aryaith find worshippers of the Allking to be heretics.

Other than having a gender the Aryaith/Duath are mostly in spirit form but they can take the form of any living thing or whatever they wish to look like, they generally have a preferred form. They are very powerful. Some of the Aryaith do not consider themselves to be gods. I'll post a list with notation now.

Foriym (female) of winter, She doesn't consider herself a godess and refuses to be worshipped, she rules the Wintertaken of Nortrieln as Queen, they worship the Allking who she worships.

Ealac (female) of night/moon one of the Higher aryaith wife of Carmos. She resides in Vlaharos, the home of the Aryaith and waiting place of those who have had the first death.

Carmos (male) of sun/day one of the higher aryaith husband of Ealac. He is the keeper of Vlahros(Which just so happens to double as Kigan's second sun). The other being Ollan the golden fruit of the anchor tree.

Ysayn (female) of Healing. She wanders all of Kigan, she has made no comment on people worshipping her.

Leiak (male) of magic. He doesn't consider himself a god, and refuses to be worshipped. He studies Magic on the Isle of Shadows, few can reach him, but a city of Mages has sprung up around his tower.

Touhan (male) of death, one of the Higher aryaith Husband of Jiuln
He resides in the Vlahros entrance to the Urlubris, were those who have suffered the first death are tested again. He fears Sirru, the Shadowed Robe of Death, the true keeper of the Urlubris. Sirru lets Touhan do a lot though. Touhan being aware of his end, doesn't consider himself a god.

He knows that Sirru will come for him.
Sirru comes even for those who are immortals.

Jiuln (female) of life, one of the higher aryaith wife of Touhan. She resides in Vlaharos but also travels the land.

Ippa (female) of dreams and mischief. She is by far my favourite Aryaith. One of her titles is "She who has Risen from Darkness". She is a bit like Xom except mostly good rather than Chaotic Lol... most of the time. She leaves most of her work up to her handmaiden Valkyr, Lar the Third of the Nine.

She loves meddling with the affairs of mortals and playing tricks on the forces of evil.

Tarn (male) of Thunder/sky Husband of Mihtre. He most frequently is found in the clouds above Hierm. He is worshipped by many.

Bolf&Reallit Husband&wife of the Urlubris.
They are custodians and judges and the King and Queen, kept in check by Sirru, they have the largest number of Valkyrs working for them, Tiala, Eighth of the Nine polices the Urlubris. (IN case you hadn't gotten this by now, Sirru is REALLY SCARY!, Everyone fears him and he keeps his motives hidden and he CAN leave the Urlubris)

Darean (female) of sea.
She maintains the twin huge maelstroms that keep the crazy Magical climate of Kigan in place. She doesn't really care about much else.

Maeranan (male) of ocean. He is worshipped, but is a complete troll, brother of Darean, who keep him in check with threats of having to help maintain the twin maelstroms.

Ceirkiol (female) of Forests and plants, she fights constantly against those who would burn and cut all, she also cares for Yaibggeal the Anchor tree. She lives at it, but appears wherever there are trees. She worships the Allking and trys to foil the plans of evil. The Great Paladin King Darleon was her husband.

She waits for his return.

Mih'tre (female) of nature/spring wife of Tarn.
She is worshipped as a goddess by most farmers. and those wood elves that don't serve Ceikiol and by extension the Allking.

Bouilm (male) of Feasting, he doesn't consider himself a god, he can be found at most large feasts as that one guy who eats all the food. He frequently eats too much at Vlaharos.

Xarmah (male) of Battle, husband of Udratais.
He is worshipped by many who wish for the fight. He lives in Vlaharos, watching the einherjar fight.

Udratais (female) of beauty, wife of Xarmah.
Utterly vain and jealous, she pits her husband against those who irriate her. Xarmah takes pity on those who draw her ire. Worshipped by the ugly and beautiful alike. She also sends her son to hunt people. Her son is none too pleased at that.

Artreb (male) of Hunt son of Xarmah and Udratais. He doesn't like his mother. He spends most of his time hunting powerful Chlan. Though it is a great misfortune to come across one of his hunting parties, it isn't nearly as bad as coming across the Shydhu Lord Oriakalos' hunt.

Oriakalos and Atreb hunt each other.

Wuidrin (male) of War
Do not ever go near this guy. He is EXTREMELY sick and tired of WAR. He makes sure that the spirits on huge battlefields don't try much funny stuff. Basically he fights both armies after they have died, to make sure they end up in the Urlubris. He has a FOUL temper. Also his handmaiden Valkyr Tiertch, Second of the Nine is a complete and utter bloodkinght, mixed with a REALLY scary lady of war.

Tyranois (male) of Justice one of the higher aryaith. Nobody likes him and Sirru ignores him. He mostly does paperwork and makes sure things aren't getting too crazy. He is worshipped by many. Lives in Vlaharos.

Sceach (male) of Dawn&fire son of Stela and Carmos. Worshipped by many, he is the "driver" of Vlaharos.

Veana (female) of Twilight daughter of Stela and Carmos. Spends most of her time around lakes, being emo.

Grio (female) of Hope, mercy and grace , one of the higher aryaith , mother of most aryaith.
She keeps most of the Aryiath in check, is worshipped by many women.

Altia (female) of Luck
She is not your fiend, do not rely on her, she is not to be believed. She is volatile. Steer clear.

Now for the DUATH.
The Duath are the Chlan Aryaith, they are corrupted to the heart.

Vikkael (male) of Evil , brother of Grio, went mad when Dael betrayed him then whispered madness into his ears. Was originally the Aryaith of charity. He is insane and bound.

Dael (female) of Chaos&Despair.
She is completely insane, she once was the aryaith of love, but turned mad. It is said the Serpent drove her insane with secrets from the forbidden Book of Words.

D'Elrinn (male) of Madness, first son of Vikkael
He is like an evil Xom. Simple as that.

Quihn (male) of lies/misinformation/forbidden knowledge second son of Vikkael.
"Quihn, Prince of Lies"

Luarji (female) of Taint third son of Vikkael
"The Corrupter" "The Defiler"

Flalp (female) of Black magic First daughter of Vikkael
"She who seduces mages to doom"

They are all trapped in Relhs, just as most of Chlans Fiarn Lords and Shydhu Lords are sealed in the centre of the heartflame. Vikkael however is sealed in a different place.

The great wars were fought long ago. But still the evil in the hearts of beings knows no bounds, and in the darkness there are those who worship evil...

Also in all these matters Spectrum gets mentions of a “Chained One” but no information as to who that is, it is clear it isn't the Serpent.

Well that is the HUGE info dump, working on the beggining of Chapter Two of Chorus of Whispers now, I aplogise in advance if I don't have it done today.

Also sorry for the lack of picture with this infodump.
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No. 39012 ID: 856690

There is now an IRC channel for all me quests.

Come join in at #COWkigan
I'll still post info here etc...

[UPDATE PENDING]
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No. 39013 ID: b1f0e2

>>348812
#COWkigan
Thats the chanel, but what network? Rizon? IRCHighway? etc.
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No. 39014 ID: 856690

Sorry about that, it is Rizon
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No. 39663 ID: 980ade

Oh god yes, you are the best mini-boss fight ever ;D
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I'm considering doing a bit of animootion for this boss fight, however if I do, it might be even lower quality drawing, might be uncoloured and will certainly take longer...

What say ye denizens of /tgchan/ ?


[The picture was just to see how Quickly I could draw TA, not an indicator of anything...]
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No. 39680 ID: 0d095c

>>349478
Weeeee!
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Well here we go the chests now move...

Hmm... well that would look better if TA was moving too...
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and another version, where the chest for inexplicable reasons are leaving after-images...
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No. 39693 ID: 75bcc0

I think you should do whichever one you'd do more lovingly.
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No. 40125 ID: 856690

I was off wargaeming! hence no updates recently, so all three will resume on monday!

Yays!
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Ok so For me there seems to be a few updates in the first CoW thread missing so here they are as much as I can find

[You can now Sing from the Heart]
You cannot however sing whenever, considering you don't really know how to, but any time the feeling takes you you can.
Somehow... it seems as if Nirdhar can hear you...

You return to the Inn to get Kyarin, feeling thoughtful...
Kyarin Speaks-You retur... What has happened? You are changed, I know it is you, but you seem so different?”
[roll; 25, terrible!]
You catch a sense of melancholy from Kyarin, she seems to be very very sad...

Your voices swirl, how will you respond, and how will you get her to come along for the training?
[Nirdhar is shining with glee and happiness]
[Nirdhar loves his Big Sister! He trusts you completely]
[You have both gained more Identity]

*Break*
[There was hugs somewhere here I thought?]
-If you want to talk about anything, you can talk to me, if you feel like it, are we not friends...-

There is a dry clacking sound, Kyarin's laugh.
-Friends! I barely know you, you barely know me... and yet... I find myself thinking of you as a friend-

{Spectrum}-I am pleased Kyarin, tell me, would you assist in training Nirdhar?-
{Kyarin}-Gladly, where shall we train?-
{Spectrum} -The forests near here, we should remain undisturbed there-

You, Nirdhar and Kyarin relocate to the woods near Nasdmoor.

Kyarin teaches Nirdhar how to hold his weapon properly, and they spar, him using his light-claw and using his sword, Kyarin her lance.
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You don't pay much attention, as you become absorbed in thoughts about the nature of your light.
>>314886
You find that by intersecting beams and by absorbing and emitting similar colours in time with each other you can make a more powerful blast.
[New Power: Cross Beam]

>>314933
You try to do something a bit more complex... but you find you just don't have that level of control.
[Light mastery too low for variable light or Ghost-light]

>>314807
You wonder, you know that you absorb free floating energy, but what about ambient light?
You try, and find yourself feeling more whole, and more luminous.

...but how much can you absorb?
You begin to draw, more...
And more...
And more...
MORE!
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Something...
Is wrong, you feels something swell inside of you

-I HUNGER-
-MoRe LiGhT-

You hear a voice sing

[And after that was a music file of creepy singing which I think was what broke everything in the first place]

Link here
http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/135517
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No. 40607 ID: 856690

Well I
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No. 40608 ID: 856690

had this nice update going, and what did I do?

I CLOSED WITHOUT SAVING!

So no update today due to stupid.

T.T
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I've been haldily distracted by shiny new(for me) games!

This has cause updates to hiccup also I was at my borther's fiancee's party yesterday, so nothing really then.

Anyway regardless I will update again...
I am doing this for fun and while I'll not leave people hanging by suddenly stopping, Updates will be scarcer towards the end of my holidays.

Also I started two adventures on Mspa forums.
Midgard 1914
And SEALSUNDER

http://www.mspaforums.com/showthread.php?40718-SEALSUNDER
http://www.mspaforums.com/showthread.php?40956-Midgard-1914-The-Great-War

"But IM, arren't you spreading yourself too thin?"

Yes and no, having multiple adventures/quests means I can update what I'm in the mood for and if I gain momentum I can update everything.

So yeah, fun times!
Also here is a picture of a pengu, it is an inadequate apology. Also I'm thinking of ending the Treasure armour fight in the next update of CoW, if you wish it to go on, then speak now or forever hold yer piece.
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