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447054 No. 447054 ID: 8dbc01

He won't be coming home again. He didn't like my pimento-cheese sandwiches, I don't think.
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No. 460296 ID: 4a328b

ask if he would mind very much checking to see if there is anything inside those cufflinks, please.
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No. 460299 ID: e3f578

Are the river rapids that bad that rocks can destroy the boat?
Well we better go save his sorry ass and whatever poor damsel he tricked into getting into the boat with him... but he didn't mention the other fox? He was alone? What happened to the other one?
Yeah and get the fragment from the cufflinks if any.
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No. 460328 ID: f2c20c

Ask him if he would check inside the cufflinks. You have reason to believe that a piece of your heart is in them. Maybe two pieces.
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No. 460349 ID: 58e163

Was he alone?

Also, check those cufflinks, plz.
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No. 460501 ID: 8dbc01
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460501

"Did you see another fox in the boat with him, sir?"

"Sure did. Pretty thing. But. Too young for him. At least in my opinion. No offense intended."

I sigh. It hurts but it isn't surprising. He was rather older than I was when we met, too. I suppose that's just what he does. "And those cufflinks ... I'm sorry, he's my husband so I'm familiar with them. Did they have anything else with them?"

"Oh sure. Just here. Little bits of colored glass." He takes the cufflinks off and shows the glass to me. "Why do you ask. Do you need them."

"Yes, please."

"Here. You can take them. No way I'd need them. Nohow."

"Thank you."

I push the two fragments back in. It hurts, it hurts, it hurts.
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No. 460502 ID: 8dbc01
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460502

Ulric and I continue on foot. The deer was right - the rapids are fierce and angry. I look for wood fragments, blood on the rocks, any indication that something terrible has happened. There's nothing.
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No. 460503 ID: 8dbc01
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460503

When the river finally calms, we are at a lake. I have never been to this part of the forest before. It's restful.
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No. 460504 ID: 86c3a7

How complete is your heart now?

There's something red in the water there.
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No. 460505 ID: d5c260

make your man-slave get that red herring out of the water for you.
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No. 460511 ID: 4a328b

How deep is the lake? Maybe you can fish it out with a branch
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No. 460519 ID: c8be92

Gain Heart Piece from Cufflinks.

Place Heart Piece in Incomplete Heart.

Gain DEAD BODY from Pond.
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No. 460528 ID: 6a1ec2

Why does your heart hurt? Is it because he left you? Or is it because you know what happened to him?
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No. 460569 ID: dd0b5f

Go get that red thing from the pond, or use a stick to poke at it.
Ask Ulric if he can better tell what it is.
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No. 460632 ID: eb6589

Examine heart status. Examine pond.
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No. 461858 ID: 3bad4c

Oh, awesome. You have multiple personalities, and one of them murdered him? haha.
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No. 461880 ID: a5d914

Or you could you know, take your clothes off and swim out. Ain't nothing Ulric hasn't seen before.
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No. 469888 ID: 2c322d
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469888

I have five of my heart fragments. My heart is very heavy now, and the edges are sharp and rough and unfinished.

I try to fish out the red object, and so does Ulric. Neither of us can reach it, no matter what we do. It glitters tauntingly.
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No. 469890 ID: 2c322d
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469890

Ulric protests, but I know what I have to do.

I leap.
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No. 469905 ID: f2c20c

>>469890
Search the bottom. You could easily see it from the surface so it must be easy to find, right?
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No. 469922 ID: fe45b9

swim further down. fondle the lakebed.
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No. 470001 ID: 42c1c6

Your heavy heart should drag you down to the bottom.
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No. 470055 ID: a5d914

Keep going. You've got this.
Did you ever go diving for objects underwater with Ulric when you were younger?
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No. 470127 ID: 8dbc01
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470127

I find it almost immediately. It is a bare shard of my heart, not hidden away in any trappings or ornamentation.
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No. 470128 ID: 8dbc01
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470128

I pick it up and push it into my chest. My blood blossoms like cigarette smoke in the cold water and I begin to kick towards the surface, holding tightly to my beating wound.
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No. 470129 ID: 8dbc01
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470129

It is so cold. So cold and the water is heavy and the surface seems far and intangible. I think it would be easier to sink.
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No. 470130 ID: 8dbc01
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470130

Much easier. The water is like an embrace and my blood is warm and comforting.
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No. 470132 ID: 8dbc01
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470132

Easier to sink.
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No. 470133 ID: 9fa258

I wanna talk you out of it, but shit, that's pretty much all I've done all month. I guess, uh, don't sink because that's... bad for you?
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No. 470135 ID: e3f578

>>470132
You know what's even easier though? Floating so you don't have to deal with the guilt of you dying and making Ulric a miserable wreck for thinking he let you die.
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No. 470136 ID: f1b3ee

Ulric: Jump in after her and take care of business.
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No. 470138 ID: 70c0f2

Come on girl! If you wanted to take the easy route out, you should have stayed home, and starved without your heart. But you chose to try and regain yourself. Don't give that up now. Don't make everything you've said and done today meaningless- don't make the people you hurt have suffered for nothing.
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No. 470139 ID: 6cc859

>>470132
There are still fragments left.
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No. 470144 ID: f2c20c

>>470132
If you wanted to take the easy way out you wouldn't have put that shard in your chest at all. SWIM.
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No. 471606 ID: 8dbc01
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471606

Second thoughts touch my mind like insistent fingers. I've come too far for this. I've brought Ulric into it. I've killed a girl. To give up now would be pointless. Selfish.

I swim. It hurts and I feel like my fur is freezing over, but I swim.
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No. 471607 ID: 8dbc01
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471607

When I collapse onto the bank, gasping and coughing, I find that Ulric had been preparing to dive in after me. I look up at him, wet and bloody and confused.

"Ulric, you can't swim."

"It seemed like you couldn't, either." He removes his vest and hands it to me so I can dry myself. The gesture provides more comfort than the fabric itself does. "Did you find a piece?"

I touch my bleeding chest. "Yes. One more, I think."
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No. 471616 ID: 14bafe

And unless I miss my guess, that would be the one your husband is holding.

Get ready for a sudden genre switch and a 600 image boss fight.
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No. 471639 ID: f2c20c

>>471607
Take some time to rest and wait for the bleeding to stop before we follow the river a bit further to see where your husband's boat went.
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No. 471641 ID: b2cbd6

keep following the trail.
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No. 471678 ID: 58e163

Gather your strength for the next part.

When you're ready, press ahead.
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No. 471729 ID: a5d914

Perhaps you can find a warm place to dry a little bit?
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No. 471755 ID: 68bbc5

Wait. Rest and dry off before you press on. You'll catch up with your husband eventually.
It's more important that you be in good condition before you face him.
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No. 479429 ID: 6808dd
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479429

I wait, and I rest. Eventually my clothes dry and my blood dries and my tears dry. Ulric helps me up and we press on.
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No. 479431 ID: 6808dd
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479431

The path is rocky and dark and uncertain. I feel lost, and I tell Ulric so.

"There's only one path," he says. "We can't be lost."
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No. 479432 ID: 6808dd
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479432

Eventually I see a flash of red. When we draw closer, it becomes clear that it is a young fox, younger and prettier than i am.

"He left," she sobs. "He left, he left, and I should have known better. I should have known he'd leave me just like he left that old bitch. I was foolish to think he left just for me."
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No. 479435 ID: 7003a8

>>479432
"You trusted a betrayer and expected loyalty.
If you have a piece of my heart, then I will offer you sympathy in exchange."
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No. 479438 ID: 536f9a

she had it coming. don't comfort her. but she's already had her punishment dealt, and her lesson taught. ask if she's seen a piece of your heart.
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No. 479439 ID: ec6d4c

...don't give into anger. She's young, she's foolish, and she made the same mistake you did. Show compassion and forgiveness- if you're going to repair your broken heart, and live for yourself, you cannot despise or hate this broken echo of yourself.

I'm sorry. You're not the first one to make that mistake, to allow themselves to be hurt in this way. Please, did he leave you anything?
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No. 479456 ID: 54c7e5

When he said he gave you his heart, he gave you mine...
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No. 479492 ID: f2c20c

>>479432
Tell her that "old bitch" isn't finished with him yet.

Ask her where he went.
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No. 479688 ID: 6808dd
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479688

I am torn between bitter scorn and a sort of twisted sympathy.

She's gotten what she deserves, my mind whispers sharply - but I pause, because i see something of myself in her. Have I gotten what I deserve as well?

I approach her. "You gave your heart to a stealer of hearts and expected that yours would be safe; that was foolish. But others before you have been just as short-sighted." She looks up at me, her tear-rimmed eyes flashing between resentment and sorrow, but says nothing. I continue. "If he gave you any pieces of a heart, claiming they were his, you were deceived - they were mine, taken from me before he took yours, and I need them back, please."

"He left me nothing," she spits. "All I have is this promise." She hurls it at the ground - it is a crumpled paper bag with nothing in it. "And he went off, in that rickety old boat, down a stream that will barely carry him."
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No. 479692 ID: eacc9b

let's make one thing clear here- she's not the same as you. you married a single man. she knew he was cheating and went along with it. that makes you a decent person and her a whore. she deserves no pity. the fuck did she expect, him not to do to her what he readily did before to you? stupid harlot.

make sure there really isn't anything in the bag and continue your pursuit.
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No. 479695 ID: bf54a8

>>479692
no dude, he told her she was pretty and so she wanted to believe him.

make sure the bag is empty and keep moving.
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No. 479696 ID: ec6d4c

I'm sorry.

And then move on. There's nothing more you can do for her, or to be done with her. You still have the last piece of your heart to find, and a husband to confront.
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No. 479697 ID: f2c20c

We will go find him, then.
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No. 479790 ID: d4ad1a

>>479692
Jesus, Elephant Guy, that's harsh.
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No. 479850 ID: 1166ed

>>479790

no it isn't. having your partner of many years end the relationship by cheating on you is a thing which breaks you for life. I know it from personal experience.
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No. 479862 ID: 6808dd

>>479790
>>479850
let's keep stuff quest related, guys. this is not the place to mourn your shitty past relationships
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No. 479913 ID: 8b9215

Take the bag and leave.
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No. 479914 ID: f2c20c

Hang on, what was the promise exactly?
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No. 479923 ID: 6808dd
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479923

I tell her that I'm sorry because I am.

The bag is empty, as all his promises always were. It says "love" on it in marker. I don't want it.

Ulric touches my arm and we continue.

The girl was right - the stream is so shallow that I can't see how his boat could have navigated it. I could easily wade across it if I wished.

We walk, and we walk, and the stream trickles away into wet dunes with baby tufts of seagrass.

It is the ocean and I can see where my husband has dragged the boat.

This .... this can't be right.

I'm supposed to find him.

I'm supposed to confront him.

I'm supposed to get my heart back.
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No. 479924 ID: 8b9215

Investigate the end of the trail.
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No. 479928 ID: bf54a8

check the red shrubs
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No. 479930 ID: f2c20c

He's still there, on the horizon. How long would it take to retrieve your boat to go after him?

Could you swim that far? What lies in that direction, anyway?
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No. 479931 ID: ec6d4c

Follow the tracks to the edge of the beach. And then watch the sun set on this chapter of your life.

If he threw the last piece of your heart into the ocean, you will never see it again. You'll never see your husband again either- in all likelihood he's going to die trying to cross the ocean alone, with little supplies, in a dingy little boat, and tired from rowing and dragging all day already. He's gone.
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No. 479932 ID: 735f4f

You might never get the last shard of your heart back. Love is like that. But we can try.
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No. 479971 ID: c5cad7

continue towards the beach.
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No. 483930 ID: 6808dd
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483930

I check everywhere as i stumble towards the water. I kick my feet through the sand, hoping to unearth some final clue. I kneel down and search through the coarse, bristly red dune grass, hoping to find something nestled among the dry, angry blades.

I reach the line where the water laps at the sand and is sucked dry by the thirsty beach. It is slowly erasing the tracks of the dragged boat. Ulric comes up behind me but says nothing.

I see nothing but briny water tossing back shards of red reflection. It is cold and the sand bites when the wind whips it against my legs.

I stand there for a long time until the sun is thinner than a bleeding cut and I am shivering.

Ulric touches my shoulder and I don't know what to do.
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No. 483931 ID: 47d311

The moral of this story is that you never really get back everything you once gave; you have to fill the last gap yourself, with something else.

Speaking of that, Ulric is right there. Give him a hug and cheer up.
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No. 483934 ID: 6808dd
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483934

I turn to Ulric and embrace him. He's not any warmer than the air but it still helps.

He hugs me back and I can feel his blunt claws through my shirt. I am crying and his arms are tightening until I can barely breathe and somehow they are the only thing holding me together. It is cold.

It's cold and his voice is in my ear.

"Do you still feel lost?"
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No. 483935 ID: be7fd9

>"Do you still feel lost?"
...I don't know. I'm not sure I remember what it feels like to be found.
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No. 483936 ID: 47d311

No, but you'll manage. All it takes is time, and it's easier with an extra set of eyes.
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No. 484095 ID: fcd183

No, because now I'm with you. (I know it's corny, but c'mon guys, I want a good end)
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No. 484096 ID: 802a38

No. You know exactly where you are. Don't you, Katherine?
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No. 484097 ID: 027156

your past was a lie, your future is all but uncertain and your present is just plain fucking weird.

so yes. yes, you are.
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No. 484100 ID: 52019c

yes, but we can find our way together
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No. 484102 ID: f1b3ee

No; you were never lost in the first place, it just took a lot of time to realize this.
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No. 484114 ID: 6808dd
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484114

"No ... I'm not lost anymore."

There is a buzzing in my ear. It is colder and colder but no longer unpleasant. I step away from him and look up at his face.

"I know where I am."
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No. 484115 ID: 6808dd
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484115

Because the shock of losing him forever, of knowing he's gone forever, has knocked loose a little seed of knowledge from the dark, moist corners of my mind and my soul is fertile ground
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No. 484116 ID: 6808dd
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484116

and isn't it true that horace died in the flood last year
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No. 484117 ID: 6808dd
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484117

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No. 484119 ID: 6808dd
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484119

and isn't it true he had a little niece who ran to the city with its lights and noises and filth, who was raped and killed and dumped in the woods
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No. 484120 ID: 6808dd
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484120

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No. 484121 ID: 6808dd
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484121

isn't it true that the forest gatekeeper's head is now hanging quietly above someone's fireplace
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No. 484122 ID: 6808dd
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484122

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No. 484123 ID: 6808dd
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484123

i am reeling
it is cold
isn't it t rue that the r e is no river out of the sw amp

i sn't it true that if there were a r iv er i would have left a long t ime a.go

i push u lri c away b e cause i k.now that as so.on as he re ceived my w edding invitation he sat in his p arlor and put a little g un to his he ad
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No. 484124 ID: 6808dd
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484124

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No. 484125 ID: 6808dd
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484125

there is no river out of the swamp
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No. 484127 ID: 6808dd
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484127

there is no river out of the swamp
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No. 484128 ID: 6808dd
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484128

there is no river out of the swamp
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No. 484131 ID: 0eef61

Wow
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No. 484135 ID: f2c20c

>>484128
Okay that is not what I expected to happen at all.
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No. 484136 ID: be7fd9

Well, the whole quest seemed to be about acceptance of loss and moving on. That... just wasn't the way we meant it.

Rest in peace, Kathrine.
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No. 484139 ID: 7003a8

>>484128
What? No. Get off the ceiling, fox. You're drunk.
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No. 484141 ID: 57a559

But who was the fox girl we met near the end with the paper?
And husband walks away like that? He ain't dead, is he? Or did the husband hang himself and all that shit was self-reflection trying to understand Kathrine's point of view?

Because this fox has no pants and Katherine has a plaid skirt.
We also have the other rabbit we saw, the third one with the roses?
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No. 484142 ID: 5a565f

Whew.
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No. 484143 ID: 57a559

>>484141
err not roses, necklace
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No. 484146 ID: 6808dd

all questions about the quest are gonna be fielded in the katherine quest disthread (http://tgchan.org/kusaba/questdis/res/59239.html) and i'm also gonna be writing up some closing thoughts there!
thank you guys so much for doing this with me, this is my first finished quest and i am really, really pleased with it. <3
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484148

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No. 484165 ID: 027156

I, uh, wow. you what. and when and how and why did all of this? I don't even! I just, wow.

many bricks have been shat today.
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No. 484168 ID: 80fdd2

Good end.
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