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Purple Flash Bubbles
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I am glad that you are showing enthusiasm about the new approach. The first chapter was more of an Assassin's Creed type of story, the first half of the second chapter was more like a Mortal Kombat kind of story, and the second half will be more like a Hitman story. The second chapter was made to address all the problems from the previous chapter, to make it less repetitive and have more diverse opponents. The speed of the quest is something that I designed on purpose. When I make these chapters, they are supposed to be one month long, and I start creating the moment when I get two suggestions, and I sometimes create multiple updates in one day. For the second chapter, I was a little bit overambitious, which is why I split it into two months. The second half will be more experimental in how to approach the problem, it will be less about needing to fight everyone and more about how much you can get away with.
I have a couple of questions about the story so far, and I would like to hear your answers to them.
* First question, as you noticed in the first chapter, the protagonist was the only one who used porn weapons, while in the second chapter, the protagonist and her opponents use them as well. What aprouch to you like more, only protagonists to use them or that everyone uses them.
* Second question: How do you feel about the defeated enforcers appearing in the other half of the second chapter? You won't need to fight them the second time, they will appear only as defeated foes suffering more humiliations. Or would you prefer to move away from their presence and leave them as one-and-done foes?
* Third question: out of the main 6 fights, which ones did you like the most? Place them all on the scale from 1 to 6, and all of them should take up one slot. 1, meaning it was the least fun, while 6 being the most liked one. Here are their names
-Lady Buttania
-Pound Cake
-Rope Bunny
-Burrow Busting
-Whipsalot
-Wax Pornetic
Plasments
1. 2. 3. 4. 5. 6.
* Fourth question: Which three new characters did you like the most in the new chapter? And which three you disliked.
* Fifth question: Do you think that I went too far in some parts of the stories?
* Final question: What would your suggestion be to improve the story?
I apologize if this is a lot of questions, but I want to gather information on how you felt about the second chapter.
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