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20796 No. 20796 ID: 8fb62a

Hiya, tg! So I just found this place and I'm not sure where to put this, but I've started a quest of my own and wanted to know what you guys thought of it/ any kind of critique.
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No. 20797 ID: 8fb62a

http://theoquest.tumblr.com/ Oops forgot link.
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No. 20798 ID: 72d49b

>I'm not sure where to put this
/questdis/ is for quest discussions.

>what you guys thought of it/ any kind of critique
So far the only thing I think about it is that it's not worth mucking about with tumblr.
Other than that... it seems a bit derivative in style, looks like you tried a bit too hard to be like Rubyquest.
Since I understand some people like to hear positive things even though there's little you need to change based on that information, I'll also note that your art is entirely adequate, stuff is represented clearly and your character has a distinct look to him.
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No. 20799 ID: 8fb62a

>So far the only thing I think about it is that it's not worth mucking about with tumblr.
Other than that... it seems a bit derivative in style, looks like you tried a bit too hard to be like Rubyquest.
Since I understand some people like to hear positive things even though there's little you need to change based on that information, I'll also note that your art is entirely adequate, stuff is represented clearly and your character has a distinct look to him.

Haha, I've never actually read Rubyquest but I'll try to work on something that's distinguishable from it. Thank you for the input! I also apologize for posting it in the wrong board, haha.
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No. 20800 ID: 8fb62a

>>20799
Shit wow I am bad at greentext.
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No. 20803 ID: affb00

On tumblr you can post sexually related oh who am I kidding.
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No. 20804 ID: b85f8c

If you've never read ruby quest well, just keep doing what you're doing. Aside from waking up in a box, it's not THAT similar.
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