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1021330 No. 1021330 ID: 15a025

A reboot/continuation of Behind Closed Bars. You can either start here or read the previous thread first if you'd like.

https://questden.org/kusaba/quest/res/1010505.html
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No. 1027296 ID: 15a025
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1027296

>Do you still have no access to a phone? Calling the police asap would really help you here.
I get out of the freezer and ask Allinen.
Lana: "You got a cell phone Allinen?"

Allinen: "No, not on me. They must have took it while I was passed out."

>Towel wrap is fine for now. Most important thing is to keep pressure on it, though it's also good to clean it first so it doesn't get infected... but we're pressed for time.
Right, can't waste time melting ice all night. Maybe I could use some alcohol up at the bar?

>Stick the asshole in the fridge, but see if you can remove the handle first. They won’t die in there for a long while. Probably. Also use ice bags over the cloth gag. Might as well make it as much of a pain to spit out as possible. Unless you’ve seen duct tape sitting around.
Well, revenge is a dish best served cold as they say.

>Don't worry about them fighting, they're sane enough not to escalate while in a life or death situation. Probably.
Lana: "Can you two come with me out to the bar? I wanna try and drag the masked dude out of sight and tie them up in the freezer."

Norbert: "No, I'm- I don't think I'm going to be able to help much."

Allinen: "Yeah, I think you've helped us out enough tonight anyway."

Lana: "I'd rather not split up here. Norb, you don't have to help us carry them, but could come with and be our lookout?"

Norbert: Y-... Yeah.

His expression lightens up a little.
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No. 1027297 ID: 15a025
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1027297

Back up at the front bar, I start quickly un-doing and re-tying the ropes the on this jerk. I've got it now so if they wake up on us, their limbs are still restrained. Just not tied to any furnishings.

>Maybe you can get a better nonlethal weapon from somewhere... fire extinguisher? Let one of these two have the knife, as they'll be fighting in self-defense, which will mean using a lethal weapon is valid defense.
>This place has to have some weapons and supplies right? Knives? Everclear? Vodka? Something for wounds or pain? Plus a bottle can be a weapon.
I stop to think for a moment. I'm almost certain we've got some high enough proof alcohol I could use for wounds. I've got a high enough pain tolerance that I could probably keep quiet, but I doubt that's going to be the case for Norb or Allinen. It's also dark, so reading labels is going to take a few moments to focus and double check.

Should have been a fire extinguisher in the break room, but I don't remember seeing it back there. I'm not sure why, but I feel like someone used it last night? Certainly doesn't look like there was fire here.

As for other weapons, I know there's some smaller knives we use for chopping up fruit. Not opposed to smashing some bottles either. Don't care about getting trouble with the boss for it, like he could prove what ones I broke what anyway.

Guess that's two big things to decide on.

1. Whose wounds should I try to clean up with alcohol?
2. Who should have what weapon? Feel like Norb or Allinen should get the big knife, which of them should have it, and what will I and the other use?

Once it's decided, we'll grab the supplies and haul this jerk into the freezer first, before they wake up. Then take care of the rest of things in the breakroom afterwords.
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No. 1027305 ID: 713339

You could always use a barstool as a weapon, just take the chair bit off. Or a heavy bottle, one of the fancy ones with a long neck and thick glass. Just empty it first. The knife could go to either but I say Allinen.

As far as who to use alcohol on, just pour it on everyone when you’re in the freezer. You’ll have ice nearby and it’s the least likely place anyone will hear you. You should have more than enough even with half a bottle. Just don’t use Rum or anything with sugar in it.
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No. 1027460 ID: 15a025
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1027460

>You could always use a barstool as a weapon, just take the chair bit off. Or a heavy bottle, one of the fancy ones with a long neck and thick glass. Just empty it first. The knife could go to either but I say Allinen.
I'll give Allinen the mask dude's knife then.

>As far as who to use alcohol on, just pour it on everyone when you’re in the freezer. You’ll have ice nearby and it’s the least likely place anyone will hear you.
Then I'll carry around whatever bottle of alcohol we empty cleaning up wounds.
Lana: "Allinen, help me find some high enough proof alcohol behind the bar. It's going to hurt, but I want to make sure our wounds are cleaned."

Allinen: "I'll try, but it's kinda hard to see."

We're lucky, after only checking just a few bottles we find one with seventy percent alcohol in it. Still half full even. I also nab a nice big ol bottle of scotch. Decent size neck and thick base.
I hand Norb the bottles, along with the small knife.

Lana: "Can you carry these please?"

He just nods his head.
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No. 1027461 ID: 15a025
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1027461

Allinen helps me haul jerk face into the freezer and tie and gag them up. My leg hurts a little more from the pressure, but it could be worse. It's about to be hurting a whole lot more anyway.

Lana: "Fuck, here goes nothing..."

Just to be safe and make sure I don't chomp down on my tongue, I sink my teeth into a rag. I don't think I can keep a steady hold on it as I pour. I'm worried the pain might make me even drop the bottle.

Lana: "Redy."

Allinen helps out and pours some alcohol onto my stab wound.

Lana: "Ergh!! FFFcck!!!"

Shit that stings a hell of a lot more than I expected. She stops pouring it the second I start cussing in pain.

Allinen: "Sorry! Did I pour too much?"

I spit out the cloth,

Lana: "No, fuck it still burns... Probably enough to keep it clean for now. I think?"
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No. 1027462 ID: 15a025
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1027462

I get my leg wrapped back up while Allinen gets Norb ready next.

Lana: "Are you sure you can handle it Norbert?"

Norbert: "Just...get it over with please."

She tries to pour it slow and carefully, but he keeps jutting around and hissing in pain.

Norb: "Ma...man it st- stings really bad."

Allinen: "Sorry..."
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No. 1027463 ID: 15a025
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1027463

She pauses for a moment, her arm doesn't look very steady as she tries to pour it again. A large stream of alcohol comes out all at once. Norbert screams in pain, and Allinen drops the bottle in shock. Nothing breaks, but my stomach starts knotting up. Allinen starts crying.

Allinen: "Norbert, I... I can't do it. Lana I can't do this to him!"
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No. 1027466 ID: 96c896

Well nice to see they've buried the hatchet. Also, that scream was loud, but... maybe the gang will think he was just being tortured by mask dude.

Anyway that was enough, we're done with sterilization.

You could set up an ambush point outside this room, or in this room, in case a gang member comes to check.
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No. 1027501 ID: 769005

>>1027466
Ambush sounds wise!
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No. 1027502 ID: 769005

>>1027466
Ambush sounds wise!
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No. 1027519 ID: 25084d

Gurl, you just hand delivered the dude a knuckle sandwich. Don't be shedding tears saying you can't handle giving him first aid. At least finish patching up home slice here with those towels and rags.
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No. 1027557 ID: 15a025
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1027557

>that was enough, we're done with sterilization.
>At least finish patching up home slice here with those towels and rags.
I try to comfort her a bit,
Lana: "It's alright, that was enough Allinen. Come on, let's get these towel wraps back on him."

>that scream was loud, but... maybe the gang will think he was just being tortured by mask dude.
>You could set up an ambush point outside this room, or in this room, in case a gang member comes to check.
>Ambush sounds wise!
There's a series of knocks, followed by a muffled voice. A chill rolls down my spine as we all stand frozen in terror.

???: "Collieen! The hell are you doing in there! I fucking heard those screams, did your ass forget the boss needs her for the ransom!"

My stomach crunches up and I feel my heart skipping a beat. We all stand in silence, but Allinen still tearing up, and lets out a few sniffles.

???: "Collieen! Everything going okay?!"

My body tenses up as he keeps knocking. I don't know what to do. How do we-

???: "Damn it, I'm coming in. She better not be fucking dead!"

I-shit. The ambush. He... might not know we're all in the freezer. There's gotta be something I can do to get him.
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No. 1027587 ID: e7c7d3

Bottle to the face
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No. 1027683 ID: 50af53

We have the element of suprise but no idea how big this person is or what they've got on them, steel yourself for anything.

Tell alinnen to scream in pain or throw some junk around to get them in here. After that, once again, it's most important to try and get them to the ground where the others will HOPEFULLY support you this time. Start with >>1027587 and while they're dazed, get them off balance somehow. Remember you have a knife in the room. Just in case.
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No. 1027761 ID: 713339

Time to hide behind the door with that heavy bottle and start bonk'n.

Or, uhh, maybe try and imitate his voice? Say you're just having a little harmless fun in there. Toenails grow back right? Bonk as a last resort. Try goofin first
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No. 1028270 ID: 15a025
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1028270

>We have the element of suprise but no idea how big this person is or what they've got on them, steel yourself for anything.
>Time to hide behind the door with that heavy bottle and start bonk'n.
I get in position by the freezer door. Hopefully they won't look through the broken window and see me.

>Tell Allinen to scream in pain or throw some junk around to get them in here.
Lana: "When you hear him bust in, start screaming in pain. Hopefully they'll walk in here and, I'm...I'm going to try and knock them out with the bottle."

I hear the break room door fly open. Allinen lets out a painful shriek and starts sobbing.
Allinen "Stop! I told you! I don't know where else she'd be! Please-"

There's a slow, clacking sound coming from the break room. I can feel my fur standing up as I shake with anxiety. Allinen starts coughing and continues sobbing.

Allinen: "Please...Spare me!"
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No. 1028271 ID: 15a025
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1028271

I hear the glass crunch as they approach the freezer door. Shortly after it flies open and a tall figure comes in.

I slam down the bottled as hard as I can onto their head, it shatters and glass goes flying everywhere.

???: "Ugh, the hell?"
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No. 1028272 ID: 15a025
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1028272

Dude turns around and grabs my arm.

???: "You ain't Collieen."

Urk... He's got a tight hold. I try to move my arm forward and stab him with the busted bottle but I just can't. I try to get a better look at the dude while I try to struggle out of his hold.

Curly horns? Ah fuck, this dude some kind of goat?

Goat: "You ain't worth shit for ransom either."

I let out a little snarl of pain as he starts squeezing my wrist harder. It's getting harder to hold onto the bottle. I don't know if I should try doing something else myself, or if I should call out to Allinen for help.
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No. 1028275 ID: 96c896

Kick him in the jimmy!
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No. 1028295 ID: b5c538

Help would help. This guy seems really fucking strong, so drop the bottle knife and tell one of them to pick it up and the other with the regular knife to back you up. Hopefully, he'll back off. But he might not. If not, pull him, push him, kick him gooch, scratch him, do anything you can to get out of the grab cause I feel things will go really bad if you can't.
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No. 1028301 ID: 3b7e9c

>>1028295
all these things and more!
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No. 1028315 ID: 35f8c1

Oh yeah, horns. That’s a thing. He’s got you on strength, but you can still swivel your wrist. Grabbing someone when they got something sharp in their hands is a quick way to get cut. Failing that, knee him in the balls and don’t stop kicking. Fighting dirty is all you have right now, and he’s not going to feel bad doing worse to you.
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No. 1029505 ID: 15a025
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1029505

>This guy seems really fucking strong, so drop the bottle knife and tell one of them to pick it up and the other with the regular knife to back you up.
I let go of the bottle and thankfully doesn't shatter anymore. Then I try to kick it over to Allinen and Norb.
Lana: "Little help here?!"

He doesn't even turn to see the others. His focus stays on me.

>Hopefully, he'll back off. But he might not. If not, pull him, push him, kick him gooch, scratch him, do anything you can to get out of the grab cause I feel things will go really bad if you can't.
I'll have to rely on my claws here then. I try digging into his arm, but his grip doesn't let up a bit. All I get is a grunt out of him.

Lana: "Damn it, let go!"

He pounds the side of my head!
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No. 1029506 ID: 15a025
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1029506

>Kick him in the jimmy!
>knee him in the balls and don’t stop kicking. Fighting dirty is all you have right now, and he’s not going to feel bad doing worse to you.

I don't want to risk him grabbing my other arm, so I give this asshole a swift kick below the belt!

I hear him grunt in pain and-
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No. 1029507 ID: 15a025
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1029507

Allinen: "Lana!"

My legs shake as I watch her get knocked to the ground.

Masked Goat: "Ugh, hell."

Shit shit shit... Lana please get back up!

Fuck... I- I'm, we're fucked. My paws are clenched around the knife she gave me, but there's no way in hell I can take this dude on.

I- can't even focus. I hear noises but can't understand anything.
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No. 1029512 ID: d141de

Good, good. Don't focus on any noise right now. Focus on him, one of the people who've been beating and torturing you and your friends and coworkers all night, turning a fine night into the most agonizing hours of your life.

Turn all that fear and pain into laser focus, into rage, you have in your hand not a knife, but the tool that can give you ability to take this situation by the throat and stab that man repeatedly while he's distracted with thoughts of killing your new friend.
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No. 1030020 ID: 6749b6

What he do to Lana? Gurl get after him already, don't just stand and watch.
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No. 1030717 ID: 15a025
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1030717

>Gurl get after him already, don't just stand and watch
>Focus on him, one of the people who've been beating and torturing you and your friends and coworkers all night.
>Turn all that fear and pain into laser focus, into rage, you have in your hand not a knife, but the tool that can give you ability to take this situation by the throat and stab that man repeatedly

I clench the knife as hard as I can and gun it for the asshole. I thrust my arm forward and dig into his back with it!

I hear him bleat out in pain, and pull- pull the-
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No. 1030719 ID: 15a025
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1030719

Allinen: Fuck...
I can't get the knife out!
I keep trying to pull it back out, but he's moving around and grabbing around behind his back!
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No. 1030720 ID: 96c896

>>1030719
Twist it instead.
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No. 1030744 ID: e5709d

Twist the blade, but also, punch him in the head!
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No. 1031227 ID: 15a025
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1031227

>Twist it instead.
>Twist the blade, but also, punch him in the head!
I try twisting the knife while his arms keep flailing around. It's starts to loosen up before he elbows me in the head, knocking me down.
I groan a bit as I start getting back up. Things are kinda blurry, but I still feel I'm holding onto the knife.

Dude sounds like he's breathing heavily from all that, but it looks like he's still-
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No. 1031228 ID: 15a025
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1031228

Another figure approaches the goat dude, Norb?!

Norbert: "I can't watch this anymore. I can't stand s-seeing you all getting hurt for my fuck up like this."
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No. 1031229 ID: 15a025
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1031229

Norbert: "You want your money? Here's a ten cent deposit!"

I get up to the masked guy and thrust the glass bottle into his gut. We're both breathing heavily, but I ease up once I see him collapse.

I...I'm not sure what to do next. The security girl looks like she's still out cold, and Allinen is just staring at the ground.
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No. 1031341 ID: 50af53

Good on ya bein all brave and shit finally. Help up Allinen and prop up Lana. Check them both over if you've got any idea what something wrong would look like. At least Lana that lady's a beast and you've all gotta look out for eachother right now.
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No. 1031557 ID: 15a025
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1031557

>Good on ya bein all brave and shit finally. Help up Allinen and prop up Lana.
I get over to Allinen's side and wince as I help her up.

Allinen: "Is...is it over now?"

Norbert: "I wish. Man, I just fucking jammed a busted bottle into a goat. The security guard is out cold, we're still trapped in here-"

Allinen: "I meant...he's down for good. Right?"

Norbert: "I hope, but I sure as hell ain't bending down to check."

Allinen: "So you're going to make me check instead?"

Norbert: "I'm checking on the bouncer to make sure she didn't bounce six feet under on us."

We both go and grab Lana, and get her propped up against the opposite wall.

Norbert: "Did you see what happened to her?"

Allinen: "I think he hit her in the head? I can't really remember."

I feel around her head and try to look her over, but it's pretty dark. I don't see any blood so that's good, right?

Allinen: "I can feel her pulse!"

Norbert: "So she's just conked out then?"

Shit, there anything to help wake her up then?
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No. 1031569 ID: 96c896

>>1031557
You could splash water on her face or otherwise give her some kind of physical shock. Or put something smelly under her nose.
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No. 1031572 ID: b5c538

Pretty sure there's no way too wake up from getting knocked out until blood flow goes back to normal. All I could suggest is to keep her comfortable. Maybe lay her down and put the remainder of the ice pack on the spot she got hit.
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No. 1032142 ID: 15a025
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1032142

Author's note, lighting changed a bit since it was hard to see these panels.

>You could splash water on her face or otherwise give her some kind of physical shock.
Norbert: "Think maybe splashing some water on her would help?"

Allinen: "Didn't she say earlier the water was nasty or something?"

Norbert: "Oh shit, Right. She melted ice cubes so I could drink something."

>Pretty sure there's no way too wake up from getting knocked out until blood flow goes back to normal. All I could suggest is to keep her comfortable. Maybe lay her down and put the remainder of the ice pack on the spot she got hit.
Norbert: "We could probably give her an ice pack, right?"

Allinen: "You're going to hold a giant bag of ice on her head?"

Norbert: Ugh, those do look pretty heavy? Maan, we gotta do something here. Maybe we could wrap some in one of those towels instead?"

I dig out some ice cubes an clump'em up in a towel.

Norbert: "Can you hold it on her? I dunno if I can hold my arms up for long"

Allinen: "Yeah..."
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No. 1032143 ID: 15a025
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1032143

We sit shaking in this freezer for a bit, waiting for her to wake up. It feels like forever, and damn it there's no clock in here or anything.
Norbert: "Fuck... Come on girl, wake up..."

Allinen: "What if she's hurt bad? What if it's a concussion or worse?"

Norbert: "No, it can't be that or worse. We're dead if she can't help us!"
I grab her and try to shake her awake,
Norbert: "No, come on Lana! Please get-"

Allinen: "Cut it out!"

She slaps me in the face.

Allinen: "You realize that shaking her is only going to make things worse!"

She shoves the towel ice pack into me.

Allinen: "If you got the energy to pull something stupid like that, then you can hold the ice pack on here for a bit."

???: "Emm..."

Norbert: "Was that? Oh please, wake up!"

I try tapping her face and shoving the ice pack on her. I start to hear a faint whimper.

Allinen: "Norbert?"

Norbert: "Yes! She's getting up-"

A muffled scream has me jolt around.
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No. 1032144 ID: 15a025
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1032144

Norbert: "Are you serious right now!"

The dog girl freaking out and struggling against the shelf we tied her to.

Norbert: "When I said wake up I didn't mean her!"

Augh, hell. What am I going to do? What if she busts free or something!?
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No. 1032168 ID: 50af53

I mean. What's she gonna do? She's tied up and you've got the knife. Just tell her to calm down and don't try anything or she'll end up knocked back out, or even further, like the dead man on the floor. It's not like she hasn't done or threatened to do worse to you guys.
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No. 1032169 ID: 96c896

Take off the mask. I'm curious to see if there's something in the mask that makes them extra tough.
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No. 1032706 ID: 15a025
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1032706

>I mean. What's she gonna do? She's tied up and you've got the knife.
She might wiggle free and try to torture us more!
>tell her to calm down and don't try anything or she'll end up knocked back out, or even further, like the dead man on the floor. It's not like she hasn't done or threatened to do worse to you guys.
I pick up the knife and point it at her.
Norbert: "You-you wanna end up like him? Keep quiet and stay still then."

>Take off the mask. I'm curious to see if there's something in the mask that makes them extra tough.
Norbert: "Allinen, can you hold the knife? I'm going to take her mask off."

She gives me a weird look.
Allinen: "Why...?"

Norbert: "I wanna see what's with the mask that let her take such a beating earlier."

Allinen: "Whatever. It'd probably be helpful to see what your 'debt collector' here looks like."

I hand Allinen the knife, and then go to take the mask off this jerk.
Norbert: "Damn it, hold still..."

I un-strap the stupid thing and rip it off. It feels a lot thicker than it looks. There's like, some soft padding on the inside? Man, that can't be enough to take a few head smashes for her, can it?

Norbert: "She's gotta be on some-"

Allinen: "Damn it Norbert! Pay attention!"

Norbert: "Huh?!"
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No. 1032707 ID: 15a025
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1032707

I look back at the dog girl and she's muffling and got slobber all over

Norbert: "Don't scare me like that! I thought you were in trouble or something."

Allinen: "She's choking!"
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No. 1032822 ID: 96c896

>>1032707
Look inside the mask, then put it back on the thug. Apparently they can't survive without it... something weird is going on.
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No. 1032845 ID: 6749b6

Why should we care?
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No. 1032850 ID: 50af53

Heimlich maneuver standards! Check airways, listen to see if it sounds like choking "Difficulty breathing or noisy breathing,
Squeaky sounds when trying to breathe,
Coughing, which may either be weak or forceful", then, perform heimlich, 5 blows between shoulders with an open hand, arms around and 5 blows just under the ribcage with a fist and your other hand wrapped around it.

If that don't work something weird is gon' on.
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No. 1032851 ID: 50af53

Gotta get her to talk. Can't do that if she's dead.
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No. 1032852 ID: 50af53

Also. Y'know pointless death is bad and everything.
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